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Chapter 70 by Orpheus Orpheus

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(Appendix of Soul Links and Author’s Corner 4)

Current Soul Links and Ranks

Jessica Marshall, Rank 5

Will no longer notice your camera unless it is mentioned by you or someone else

Is comfortable wearing less clothes around you (Note: Still working on being more comfortable with this around others)

Less likely to be jealous of your other Soul Links. This is not guaranteed. (Note: Only partially worked when she met Ophelia)

Receives more pleasure from your touch than she normally would

+Can now be teleported to when her life is in danger+

+Will allow you to touch any part of her body without needing permission+

+Told you about her trauma+

Holly Marshall, Rank [Broken]

+This Rank has been severed for the time being+

Lily Fairchild, Rank 2

+Will tell you what her dream is if you ask (Note: She has not been asked about this yet)+

+Follows most of your demands concerning sex and foreplay+

Marlene Fairchild, Rank 3

Will no longer notice your camera unless it is mentioned by you or someone else

Attempts to seduce you frequently without much regard for who’s around.

People are less likely to notice discreet sexual acts between the two of you.

Has revealed that her biggest kink is roleplaying

Allows you to film her during sexual encounters

Ophelia Vidal, Rank 2

Will no longer notice your camera unless it is mentioned by you or someone else (Note: May no longer work)

Less likely to use her powers to hurt you or your Soul Links

Will pay you surprise visits when she’s bored or lonely

Arlette Bourdin, Rank 1

+Assessed your photography to decide if you were worth her time+

+This Soul Link would have been severed if she was not impressed by any of your pictures, but she was impressed by your pictures of Jessie+

Nikki Soska, Rank 1

+Will no longer notice your camera unless it is mentioned by you or someone else+

Leon’s Soul Rank and Miracles

Leon Marshall, Rank 4

Mental Tendril: You may now plant a suggestion in a Soul Link's mind, and they will perceive it as their own. This success of this suggestion is not guaranteed. This Miracle may be used on each Soul Link once every 24 hours.

Measurement of Happiness: Taking a picture of someone will now let you see a measurement of the happiness in their lives. With 0% being totally unhappy with their lives, and 100% being completely content with their lives.

The Guide Inside: Cammy can now be spoken to in your thoughts when you address her. She will also reveal basic information about your Soul Links to you.

(Author’s Corner 4)

Welcome to a much delayed fourth Author’s Corner. How are you, readers?

I’ve slowed down quite a bit with this story as of late, but I’m still here, and still writing.

Part of the reason progress has been so slow is that I feel as if I haven’t spent enough time developing characters beyond Jessie very organically, and it’s giving be a bit of the ol’ writers block. As written, they kind of pop in and out of the story at random and I’m worried it’s hurting the flow of the story. I’m going to try to rectify that from this point on to make the characters seem more important to Leon, and to the readers as a result.

As such, we’ll focus in a bit more on some characters instead of jumping around from one character to another every chapter. There will still be Jessie POV chapters (in fact, the chapter after this Author’s Corner is another Jessie chapter) but I’m going to key in on Lily and Ophelia during the coming chapters and spend some time fleshing them out. We should still be meeting the last two unseen Soul Links sometime in the next ~15 chapters as well.

I’ve been working on some other unpublished stories for this site in the shadows, and I have an idea for a new Soul Links branch that I’m not quite ready to devote attention to yet.

My motivation for writing the Other Links evil branch is at an all time low, however. I like reading a certain level of ****, but I’ve discovered that I don’t particularly like writing it... so, we’ll see what happens with that. I may have to recruit another writer to take that branch over or start it from scratch. If anyone is interested in trying that out, shoot me a message and we can go over what my general guidelines would be.

And... well, that’s about it. I guess I could get out in front of some potential concern/hype and say that the reveal that other’s have been granted various Systems doesn’t mean I’m turning this into an action themed story. There will be conflict, but it’ll be more along the lines of a battle of wits rather than a contest of strength.

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