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Chapter 72
by
baskill
What happens next?
You get another "free" day
As another 'free' day dawns, Jane asks you half not caring:
"So what are you going to do today?"
You blurt out your answer unable to stop yourself:
"Visit friends, family and do something I don´t wan´t to tell you."
Jane get excited and looks at you:
"Really... Alright keep your secret, I don´t really like surprises, but because it´s my favorite fuck toy I will allow it, this should be funny." she then disappears leaving you alone.
You start your 'free' day slowly, eat breakfast and before you can walk outside you can hear servants walking past the kitchen, its two maids and a butler:
"She´s not fucking us as much as before."
"Well you know why."
"Well it´s frustrating, but not surprising..."
Before you can hear more they walk out of earshot, you look into the hallway but the servants have disappeared.
You go to your car and start driving and you start to think back on a memory from the "old" reality.
It´s the first half year of the school, you have been settling in, and currently you are in the girls dorm rooms, you are so nervous and think to yourself:
"Alright John, you can do this, just keep it casual, this is just a casual date, you just need to ask in a way that gives her an exit, you just need to know alright."
You walk up to a dorm room and knock, the door opens up and there standing with a disheveled hair and frankly a mess is plain old Jane
"Oh, hi John, why are you here?" she says.
You think:
"Be casual, just say it, at least you will know then." and say:
"I wanted to ask you if you would go to a movie and then get some dinner?"
"The two of us? Right now?" Jane asks.
"Yes, just us two."
Jane stares at you for a second, then looks into her room (which you can see is really messy) and says:
"I don´t think that´s a good idea right now."
"Yeah, ok, no problem, maybe later?" You say, while you think:
"FUCK, SHIT, FUCK, FUCK!"
"Yeah, sure maybe later..." she says.
You stand there awkwardly, then remember your plan B, "Oh here are some notes from the Math class, that you couldn´t go to." You hand her the notes, and ask her:
"Are you alright Jane?"
"Yeah, I´m fine, thanks for the notes. I would invite you in but my room is a mess, so ... see you later?"
"Yeah, bye Jane." you say as she closes the door.
You turn around and start walking back and think to yourself:
"Alright, alright at least you know that she´s not interested in you as you are in her, and you framed it in a way that doesn´t make it awkward for you both... Right, Right... This sucks."
You go home feeling like a failure, your heart is beating like crazy and this was the hardest thing you have ever done, even when Jane is a mess she´s radiant. You call her the next day, and can feel the awkwardness as Jane gives you short yes/no answers as you speak, she sounds colder then usual.
You go to class, at least you have made a new friend named Jacob, you try to talk to Jane a few more times but she´s very distant and frankly quite cold. After the class, you talk to Jacob, talking up Jane, you then say something funny and you both laugh loudly together in the school courtyard.
You hoped by giving Jane some space that things would go back to normal, but they never did, you and Jane drifted apart and it does not help that neither of you had ever shared a class for the remainder of the school.
Losing your friend after asking her out was one of your life's regrets, you blame yourself for ruining the friendship, because after it Jane stopped contacting you or calling you, you saw her a few times in the hallways but she just put up her nose and avoided you.
It was kind of a shitty part of your time at school so you threw yourself into studying and being social befriending lots of quite frankly great people. But you often thought how great it would be if Jane was also there with you but she clearly didn´t want anything to do with you.
You finish your drive and meet your parents, while you are there they can´t help themselves and start talking about Jane and how amazing it is that they used to lived next door to her, you roll your eye´s at Jane´s every growing influence and ego.
"I mean it was so cute how you were always hanging on to her when you were younger John." your mom says.
"Yes, she was always so amazing, even at young age." Your dad says.
Your parent´s keep reminiscing about event´s you have no recollection of, then they talk about that time Jane saved your ass from that criminal gang.
You look at them weirdly and ask:
"What are you talking about?"
As soon as you finish your sentence a new memory pops into your head.
You see yourself going to a store with Jane and your friends, as you walk outside alone after having bought some sugary snacks, outside you are confronted by a man and his crew, the man looks over the top large and intimidating, you recognize him as towns resident asshole having arrived on motorbikes.
He looks at you and tells you to hand everything to him or he and his crew are going to beat you up, you freeze up and watch as he cocks his arm back to punch you, you watch as his giant fist flies in the air aimed right at you nose.
Just as you are about to be hit a beautiful female hand comes between your face and his fist, catching it and stopping it mid swing, shocking both you and the giant man. You look to the side and see that the arm belongs to Jane, with a determined look on her face she practically growls at the man:
"What the fuck do you think you are doing!"
The man is stunned for a second, then upon realizing it´s just some woman, albeit a very pretty woman spits back:
"Who the fuck are you bitch! It does not matter I will rob and beat you up also!"
"No, I don´t think you will." Jane shots back.
She then twist his arm with no effort, causing a loud cracking sound to be heard as the man instantly cries out losing his composure. As the man is off balance from the pain, you can see Jane cock one of her muscular legs back then kick the man square in the groin with enough **** to make him lift off the ground and then land in a heap as he grabs his groin and starts crying.
The man´s crew sit shocked on their bikes, until one of them cries out:
"You fucking bitch, lets get her."
All of them dismount their bikes, carrying various blunt instruments, Jane looks at them unimpressed then marches right over to them, the first man tries to hit her with a chain which she easily dodges before she punches him.
You watch as Jane easily, almost danced around them and gives them a beating, stopping when all of them are lying on the parking lot moaning and crying. Just on cue the police arrive and arrest them. A large crowd had formed and was watching it and everyone starts clapping, Jane turns her head towards you in a super cool way smiling her perfect smile , walks over to you and asks:
"Are you alright?"
"Yes." you mutter.
Jane just smiles warmly and says:
"God John you are so helpless, but don´t worry I will always have your back, now come get on my motorcycle, I will give you a ride home."
You see yourself and can remember when you get on her cool bike, hugging her close from behind as you race off.
This is ridiculous you think, you can practically hear the guitar riff in the background as Jane was turning around. But this is not how that wen´t, what really happened.
What happened was that you drove Jane and some friends to the store in your beat up car and it was Jane who ran into the towns resident asshole when she left the store and froze up. The man was alone, drunk and did not look like a giant thug, but rather a drunk young man who started harassing Jane and lost his balance as he tried to snatch from Jane some slurpy or something causing him to try and punch her.
You stepped between them and got an awkward punch in your head, the guy had been wearing some kind of skull ring with sharp edges and managed to make a cut. It had hurt a little but when Jane and the man look at you both of them got a shock, the man stumbled away and Jane wen´t white. The wound was small but it bleed a lot, a whole lot, one of your friends drove you to an ER where you got three stitches and Jane got some help for her panic attack.
It took you a week to get Jane to come outside again and convince her that it wasn´t that bad.
The drunk guy was arrested and had to do some community service thing, you kind of lost track of him but heard later he fell in with a bad crowd and got worse.
As you sit with your parent´s, you bring your fingers towards your head and rub it, making sure that you can feel the faint scar is still there, relaxing as you feel the slight pump underneath your hair.
You start to get a little worried because you have been seeing rather then remembering things that did not happen originally, probably a side effect of Jane´s fidgeting with the past.
You manage to steer the conversation away from Jane and have a nice chat with your parent´s, then you go visit some friends and lose track of time a little, you notice the time and curse a little, you are running out of time for your "free" day and race towards the downtown area.
As you drive you notice a new bridge with a banner "New Port bridge, the new fastest way out of town!".
You could just take one turn and you could be out of town in a few short minutes.
Do you drive away from town?
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