Chapter 4
by
Hvast
What Do Voices Suggest?
Power corrupts... sometimes.
"You are nobility... put your servant in her place," a new thought surfaced in Emily's mind. She would probably follow this suggestion of whoever it was but the next words demanded something far more spicy. "If she is so concerned about your body being a distraction to others have her go without clothing for the day. That will draw eyes away from you."
Target > 80
1d100+2 Roll = 4 (critical failure, new trait)
New Trait > Respectful Ruler (X1.2 modifier for target in case of suggestions that involve giving humiliating or sex-related orders to subjects. But subjects are slightly more likely to follow ALL types of orders)
Total Corruption: (2+0 Corruption Points)
Traits: (Respectful Ruler X1.2)
[My scale is 0-5 marginal, 6-20 minor, 21-40 plain success\failure, 41-60 major, 61-80 critical, then it is critical+, critical++, for every additional 40. As you see, big failures (or a string of small ones) can result in negative traits but those will have some positive effects, too]
Emily froze with her mouth open. Her pink delicate lips were parted as if to say something but not a single word came out. And it wasn't because she was surprised by Karla's strict tone. The young ruler was shocked by her own thoughts, that she considered humiliating Karla in a way that she wouldn't even dare to think about earlier. Undoubtedly, she would love seeing Karla's juicy breasts in their full glory but not in a way that would **** her mentor and friend. At this moment, Emily mentally forbade herself to ever use her power this way.
The diamond on the pendant around her neck glinted in the sunlight as another thought was pushed into Emily's consciousness. It was a more reasonable one, as if the unknown power adjusted to Emily "Now's the time to speak kind but authoritative. Apologize for speaking ill of Sir Edmund, but clarify that you are in charge and your appearance is fine."
Target > 20
1d100+2 Roll = 45 (+1 Corruption point)
Total Corruption: (2+1 Corruption Points)
Traits: (Respectful Ruler X1.2)
This idea sounded way more reasonable and Emily broke the awkward silence with a warm smile. "Karla. I am not a child anymore. I am capable of making my own decisions. Yes, I was somewhat... impolite towards Sir Edmund, he may still have fire in him but do you really think that he may do something that would hurt me or spread rumors?"
"It is not about you, my lady," Karla's brown eyes sparkled with genuine concern. "One of the reasons why women should be modest is to not make men uncomfortable. Don't spark desire in them, don't make them lust for what they can't have. It hurts them in ways that we can't truly understand."
Emily wanted to say that Karla how wrong she is in her last sentence. The young noblewoman knew far too well how it feels to desire a woman but stay silent about it.
"Karla, you are overdramatizing it. I made my decision and it stands. You should get used that I am in charge now and you can't complain to my father when you think I misbehave," her tone was soft and friendly but surprisingly similar to her father's strict style "It is not like I plan walking around naked," she briefly touched one of her small firm breasts with her palm "Besides, I don't have much to show anyway. If I was as attractive as you claim, I wouldn't be unmarried at eighteen. No local noble was interested when my father took me to the count's feast before the war. No one even looked at me twice."
Karla sighed deeply, "This again? My lady, you are like an angel and went a long way since you were sixteen."
Baroness rolled her eyes, "Yes. I am cute like a kitten, men are known for marrying kittens who have tiny breasts and own tiny villages. I'll have a duke for a husband in a moment," sarcasm dripped from her voice. "Anyway, I think we now agree that I, as a ruler, can choose my attire in MY home, right?"
"Yes, my lady." The servant wasn't happy but she understood her mistress' position and knew that Emily is stubborn enough to make further arguments futile "Do you need anything before breakfast?"
What voices say now?
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
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