Page Ten

6 panels

[1] The General’s POV. He is pointing the remote at a painting on the wall, which is sliding aside to reveal a view screen. Jazinda and Jen have both turned their heads towards the screen.

General: Put the President down and surrender, or first we will kill Ms. Walters…

SFX: CLICK

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[2] Same view as before, but now the viewscreen has lit up to show a bound Invisible Woman.

General: …and then we will kill Mrs. Richards. At about the same time as we kill you, of course.

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[3] Close on the screen. Now we can see that Sue is tied to a bed similar to Jen’s, her arms and legs stretched out in an X, still wearing her costume except her shoes have been removed. An inhibiter collar is around her neck, lights flashing. A gas mask strapped to her face is keeping her asleep. Three Soldiers stand alongside the bed, rifles practically poking the **** heroine.

[No dialogue]

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[4] Back to wide shot. Jen and Jazinda exchange defeated looks. Everyone else waits.

[No dialogue]

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[5] Jazinda has let go of Par with a bit of a shove, and has raised her hands in resignation. Two soldiers are moving forward to help the President. Jen’s eyes are squeezed shut, holding back tears.

Par: Cough hack wheeze!

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[6] Outside in front of the palace. Several soldiers are unloading Valkyrie from a jeep, while two more carry Hellcat up the steps. Both are **** and fitted with their own suppression collars.

Par: [Out of frame] I really must congratulate you on a game well-played.