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Chapter 13
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What Does the Voice Suggest(Comment)?
PAAAAAAAAAAAAARTY!
”A Party sound’s fun, but you need to make sure it’s gonna be worth it to skip class and possibly get into trouble. Play a little coy and see what the Party would entail.”
Target ≥ 20
1d100+33 Roll = 68
Successful Suggestion (+0 Corruption Points)
Suki Cox (Update):
Corruption Points = 33
Suki continued to play with one of her twin tails as she looked Carl up and down, intrigued by his offer. It certainly sounded more fun to Suki than going to another boring lecture.
"A party huh? What kinda party?" She asked coyly, giving Carl a mock expression of innocent naivety. Carl just laughed as he glanced at her and saw this.
"A grown-up party." He said, smirking as he drove, almost mocking Suki's youth, "There'll be booze, babes, and studs. My friend Ronnie likes to keep hip company." He added the last bit after a brief pause. Suki just let her smile grow wider and she leaned back in her chair. Now that sounded like fun; definitely worth a slap on the wrist for Jade missing a couple of lectures.
"I'm in!" Suki replied bubbly. She'd get over it. The Asian girl pondered for a moment as to whether or not to let Jade's school know, but her pondering was cut off by a voice.
”Call or message your teacher to explain that you’re gonna miss class today. Remember to tell them that you will make up for it.”
Target ≥ 30
1d100+33 Roll = 109
Successful Suggestion (+0 Corruption Points)
Suki Cox (Update):
Corruption Points = 33
Suki shrugged as bent down in her seat, pulled open Jade's bag and started to root through her textbooks to find her phone. Oooooo, a lollipop. Sweet! she thought as she found a small piece of love heart-shaped candy in the bottom of her bag, unwrapping it and popping it in her mouth which was filled with the taste of cheery. Suki let out a satisfied "mmmm~" and went back to looking for her phone which seemed to have fallen deep into the bag, and as she did, she felt a hand come to rest of her ass, massaging it slightly through the skirt. Peering up at Carl revealed it not to be him, so she peered over her shoulder to see Shirly leaning across the backseat and snaking her hand down to Suki's backside.
When their eyes met, Shirly giggled and let go of her rear. "Sorry, couldn't help it" She giggled again, speaking in a Southern American accent, "You have a great ass." A quiet "here here" was heard from Carl as Suki just grinned at Shirly and let out a happy: "Thanks!". Finally, Suki found the phone, sitting up as she unlocked it with her fingerprint. She hummed to herself as she pulled open Jade's emails and started to write out one to her professor.
dear prof. grey
soz for not being in class 2day, biiig plans that i couldnt put off! dont wrry ill make it up to you l8r <3
love jade xoxo
Suki looked down at the email for a moment, hmm-ing and trying to decide if that was enough. Eventually, she decided to pull up the camera app and snap a quick photo of her winking and making a peace sign at the camera with the backdrop of the city whizzing past. Yeah, she thought, That'll do. And so she sent the email, put her phone in the waistband of her skirt, and closed her eyes, content to just enjoy the breeze on her face for the rest of the ride.
Eventually, Suki was woken up by the feeling of a pair of lips playing with one of her earlobes. She opened one eye to see that the car had stopped moving and that Carl and Eddy were chatting in front of it. Eddy happened to glance back and, smirking said: "Leave the poor girl be Shirly, you skank." The pair of lips left her ear and she heard another giggle right behind her.
"Oh, you're no fun Ed. I was just wakin' her up." The weight of the car shifted as Shirly got up and jumped out, quickly taking her place back at Eddy's side. Suki could finally get a good look at Shirly, who she could now see was wearing a short denim skirt that hugged her bubble butt and a plaid crop top that showed off her generous cleavage, as well as being tanned and wearing a summer hat. She stood beside Eddy who just wrapped an arm around her and began to grope her tits and ignore her as he continued to chat with Carl, and she writhed and moaned against him, a look of bliss on her face. Suki felt her crotch dampen slightly. What a slut the Asian thought as she stretched slightly, taking the now sugarless lollipop stick out of her mouth and flicking it into a nearby bush. Climbing out of the car, Suki made her way over to Carl's side who looked down at her with a smile, lifting his sunglasses to the top of his head before speaking.
"Mornin' sleepyhead." He said playfully, almost as if talking to a kid, "Glad you could join us." Suki just winked at him.
"Needed my beauty sleep." She said matter-of-factly, "So where's the party?" Carl nodded his head behind him towards a gate.
"We're a bit early and it seems Mr. Entitled is still asleep and won't buzz us in." He explained, pressing a bell button on a nearby metal pole with a small screen above it. "I've rung this thing about eight times. Don't worry, he's probably just hungover." Some faint crashing was heard in the background, and eventually, the little screen flicked on as a man came into view. He looked to be a similar age to Carl, but his grey hair was a mess and he had bags under his eyes.
"THE FUCK YOU WANT?" A gruff voice called out of a small speaker. Carl just grinned as he leaned toward the camera. As soon as the man on the other side of the screen saw him his face dropped from angry to mildly irritated. "Oh, it's just you jackass. Shoulda known. Come on in." The man shuffled out of frame as the gate buzzed and began to slide open. Carl just stood back up, grinning as he put his shades back on.
Your little group drove up the path which soon led to a huge mansion. Suki had to stop her jaw from dropping open as she took it all in; it looked like something from a movie. Carl parked the car over on one of the driveways as he and Suki got out of the car, leaving the other two in the backseat making out. "Just give 'em a sec." Carl had said whilst walking up to the front door and knocking loudly. There was a little wait and some muffled grumbling before the man on the intercom pulled open the door. He looked a little more awake as Carl, grinning, stepped up to the front step and embraced him in a big man-hug.
"Geez Carl-" The man said, trying to push him off, "Lay off! My head is thumping like crazy!" Carl let go and with a grin wrapped an arm around Suki and pulled her up before the guy. Suki finally got a good look at the guy who, in all honesty, didn't look too bad. He had bags under his eyes and was slightly slouched, but had a chiseled jawline and some manly stubble, alongside what looked like a more muscular frame underneath his baggy bathrobe.
"Ronnie! This is Suki Cox, my new friend." Carl introduced you, "She's here for the party." Suki gave a coy smile and a wave to Ronnie who almost immediately fixed his slouch upon seeing her, hitting his friend on the shoulder and offering a hand to Suki who shook it.
"You didn't tell me you had such a gorgeous friend Carl." Ronnie said, flashing Suki a charming smile.
"Ask Carl if his friend has a big cock?"
Target ≥ 45
1d100+33 Roll = 108
Successful Suggestion (+1 Corruption Points)
Suki Cox (Update):
Corruption Points = 34
"Hey, Carl?" Suki called over her shoulder, not breaking eye contact with Ron, or letting go over his hand.
"What's up, sweetie?" Carl responded, again emphasising Suki's youth. She was starting to think he had a thing for it.
"Does your friend here have a big cock?~" She let the last word linger on her tongue for a bit longer, maintaining eye contact with Ron who looked surprised, sure, but also had a massive grin on his face now.
"I like her Carl." Ron said, letting go of her hand, looking towards Carl, and ruffling her hair, "I like her a lot. And yes, by the way," Ron looked back to her, "I do." Suki just beamed up at him, feeling warm at the praise from having her head pet, and warm in the crotch at the prospect of a big dick.
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