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Chapter 32 by Admira Admira

Oh yeah! Someone else can take over food. The responsibility was gonna give me a rash.

Official Hiatus and Rewrite Announcement

Hey! Sorry about the notification to the people who haven't read this branch and don't follow me. Or those who do follow me and are waiting for me to update something else. Don't worry, I'm workin' on it! (Trading off between Mason and Marissa as inspiration strikes!)

I'm also sorry to the couple people who stuck through this mess of a first story. Thank you!

As the title of this chapter says, I've decided to officially stop this branch and rewrite it from the first chapter. A lot of it I'm still really proud of, but it's still very much a mess in hindsight. Which is a good thing, really! I've improved so much in a couple months and I've written ~100k words in that time. If it was all one thread it'd be it's own book!

Unfortunately, it's gonna be months until that rewrite happens at the very least. If it takes longer than a year to come back to this, I'll revaluate, I hate it when authors just abandon things without explanation, so I'll avoid doing that as best I can.

The first dozen chapters could probably be condensed down into five or six much better chapters, and now that I'm thinking about it here I might go ahead and do that pretty soon.

It's after that point that things get tough. I tried to write a silly little wish fulfilment fetish porn for myself. Then also tried to have a huge Urban/Epic Fantasy setting in the background that'd intersect after the main harem was established. Way too much, way too fast, way too inexperienced a writer to do it justice.

In the meantime, bits and pieces of Morgan's story are being recycled and refined in all my others. For example, I'm trying the whole Epic Fantasy plot again with Mason, I'm fumbling it still, but hopefully much less. And poor Marissa is getting all of my exhibitionism that I didn't realize I had until I imagined myself as a cute succubus.

I put a lot of myself in this story. (Maybe too much) Learned a lot of things about writing and myself. ( Like, I did not know I had a kind of variant foot fetish until I started giving girls hooves and talons)

Thanks for reading and sorry for taking this long to update this!

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