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Chapter 53 by Unknown7 Unknown7

Begin the Order of Saint Joan Arc

Notes

I definitely wanted to make Sorvile a different animal to her daughter. So instead of some mercenaries, I gave her some mini-bosses in the form of Antiope, King Marcus and Krognak. Though Krognak ended up being a bit of a pointless character.

Maybe I can expand on him in another branch. Sorvile herself was meant to be an older version of Farsel. I expanded on some elements of Farsel with her tragic past. King Marcus was created as a deconstructive parody of Prince Marcus from the Captive Prince.

I mean that guy was gonna end up snapping. Amazonia was created as a deconstruction on the Amazons of Greek/DC mythology.

What's next?

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