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Chapter 10 by WBD
What did Jack remember?
New Eden (Historical/biological evolution reimagining)
Jack thought super hard recalling to his surprise a new memory. After Kelly had got a hold of his phone she had changed something made different reality's and scenarios. He had originally woken up in some strange place she called New Eden. Kelly was there with some other girl? This girl she was Natalie, Kelly's friend from the original reality. Jack didn't know all too much about her but Natalie seemed always to be like she was the sort of girl who liked the outdoors, as well as teasing boys and probably a whole bunch of other things, Jack really didn't know her that well at all. She seemed to be more vocal and answer more question than others in history classes he thought. Jack remembered smirks on their faces as they explained that Kelly wanted to play a game, start over the world to make it totally from new. Kelly would now be this worlds new version of God only she would be known as Goddess instead of course. She had created a world and intended to fill it with creatures and things, Natalie and Jack were to become the equivalents of Adam and Eve for her or something like that. Whilst Jack remembered being in his original body as well as Natalie and Kelly in theirs in this new Eden place he remembered Kelly talking about how each of them would have a role in creating the new sentient species they would become they didn't have to stay the same as before in fact Kelly wanted to make change. Natalie would be given some kind of tasks Jacks memory was a little hazy on what they were, Something like editing or choosing new traits or things both before and after Jack had chosen something? He didn't remember what she had to chose, either way all he remembered was the girls cackling and teasing so it probably wasn't anything good knowing Kelly. Then he remembered his task was to chose the new physical form of which the new people would become like human or a fantasy race. That wasn't to say other fantasy forms wouldn't exist in the new world outside of their own but he would have to chose which one the New version of people would be ? 'Humans' / main lifeforms were / what they would become?
Jack viewed over them all looking at each one each had an illumination from a different coloured crystal beneath.
Human alt- Bright White
kitsune/nine tailed fox humanoid - Pretty Pink
Centaur - Earth Brown
Deertaur - Autumnal Orange
Dragon - Fire Red
Elves - Royal Purple
Harpies/bird girl - Sky Blue
Snake girl - Venom Green
Spider girl - Abyssal Black
Angel - Golden Yellow
Jack looked at all the pretty colours but one stood out to him more then the others.
What colour did Jack choose?
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Jack and Kelly's excellent adventure
A spinoff of "changing the rules" by street0
(Changing the rules by street0) story line but just from one route, story follows Jack who downloads a app onto his phone that claims it can rewrite rules of the world. He is shocked to learn that it is real and it can. In this story Jack is a closet straight submissive with ideas of being in a more female lead world, various fetishes may occur depending on story branch. Idk I kinda just have ideas sometimes and write random rubbish.
Updated on Apr 26, 2026
by WBD
Created on Mar 27, 2025
by WBD
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