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Chapter 8 by marvelfan marvelfan

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New Addition to the Harem of the Queen

Mary Brown, the once chemical engineer, know known as Karisma felt groggy. She couldn't really remember the past few hours. She knew she was angry before, but she felt oddly content at the moment. She recalled being captured in Shadow City by gray skinned beings, who called themselves Baluurans. The woman had come to the Zone for one reason, to punish the Invisible Woman for getting her arrested and ruining her life. She had seen to it to send a fake message, knowing Susan Richards would respond, and without her team. The villainess had been tracking Sue for some time. When Sue had arrived, Karisma had made sure to help assist in Sue's capture. She was attempting to return to Earth, when she herself was captured. There was still some joy in knowing that Sue would either be a **** or in prison herself. She hoped Susan Storm-Richards would die out here, a sex **** or a prisoner.

Now she awoke on a medical table. “Where am I,” she asked turning to a large gray skinned woman.

“You are in Blastaar's fortress in the middle of the capital of the Empire of Baluur,” the muscular beast like woman bowed. “I am Yunaar, I will assist you in your transition to the Mistress's court.”

Soon, Mary Brown was being walked down a long hallway. She looked down at her body. Something was different, her breasts were much smaller now, her legs and waist thin. She had on a tight see-through mesh outfit with high heel slippers. Her breasts ached in pain. There was anger in her, but it was dulled. All Mary's emotions were dulled. She merely felt present, if that made sense. “What have they done to me,” she stopped and looked in the mirror on the wall. Her scars were gone. Her hair was short and spiky. The age and wrinkles were gone from her face. She remembered being tortured for information, as if she was a Shadow City spy. It seemed ages ago, as if a fog of another life.

“The Mistress has made you more appealing,” Yunaar pointed to the woman's image. “She does not like ugly things.”

As they walked the rock walls of the palace shook. Mary almost fell over. “Are we being attacked.”

“No,” Yunaar laughed, “Master and Mistress are using the hot-tubs.” There was another rumble and dust fell from the ceiling.

They reached large wooden doors. Yunaar knocked with her big paw like hands. An answer was heard from inside. “Coming,” a soft voice spoke. A green woman with bug-like features appeared at the door, she had similar body to Mary's but with green insect like skin. “I am Annihil,” the insect lady bowed. “I will help you prepare for meeting Mistress”. Yunaar left Mary to the woman.

Karisma followed the woman, in a trance, it all seemed strange, but she seemed to be in the right place, or at least felt as such. Two men, with very feminine like figures and movements waved from plush seats in the corner as they sipped wine.

“RRRAAAAAAAAAAR!” A loud roar made Mary Brown freeze in fear, off to her right through more wooden doors a bright light flashed. “YOU ARE PROVING TO BE A WORTHY QUARRY WITCH!” A booming voice shouted.

A female voice, quite familiar responded, “GIVE ME WHAT YOU GOT BLASTAAR! I CAN HANDLE ANYHTING YOU GIVE!”

Annihil put her arm on Mary's shoulder. “That is just the Master and Mistress in the tubs,” she pointed to the wall. “Come, let us put on your make-up, they will be done soon!”

Mary Brown was seated in front of a large mirror, with many perfumes and make-up kits. As Annihil began to apply heavy make-up the doors to there right blew open and Mary's eyes went wide. A great gray beast of a man, larger than a truck was pounding a young raven haired woman from behind. He gripped the woman's short hair with one hand and her hips with the other. Water splashed around them as they fucked while servants went about business as if it was not uncommon to see two people fucking so primitively.

“FUCK ME BLASTAAR! I SUBMIT TO YOUR POWER!” The woman shouted to the ceiling. Her side was marked with what looked like leopard's spots. Dark black spotted tattoos went up her right thigh and to her right ribcage. She was humping back at the large gray man for all she was worth. It was truly a site to behold. The monster's enormous gray cock constantly shoving forward and seemingly disappearing inside this small human woman. It was incredibly erotic, and Mary found herself aroused.

The beast-man slapped her ass, and shouted. “You are mine Susan Richards, now and forever!” That is when Mary Brown's heart dropped. She finally recognized the face behind the black eye-liner and lipstick, and black hair. Susan had not gone to prison and certainly didn't look like a ****. There was rage deep inside Karisma, but it was so far down, and began to fade. Susan turned to see Mary staring and smiled, as she lifted a hand and the doors slammed back shut.

There was a blast of light from the room and shouts from Sue and Blastaar. The castle rumbled and shook.

Days ago.....

Susan returned from her date in a daze. Had she really just submitted to Blastaar in such a way. Why did she feel such anger and hatred now. Not for Blastaar so much as her predicament. She was greeted by Yunaar, and stood motionless. She had just sucked off the villainous Blastaar. How could she live with herself. Yet, in the moment it had felt so right. How could she face Reed.

“Clean her and prepare her properly, it is time she took her place here,” Blastaar waved to Yunaar, and Bentley Whitman and Mac Gargan. They knew what to do. She was brought to their room, and Sue noted how plush and beautiful it had become. Had she ordered these couches and large beds for these slaves. She couldn't remember. She was too much in shock to feel anything. So much had happened.

“I'm sorry Mistress,” Yunaar stated, “But Master gave us strict orders,” the woman went about cutting Sue's hair until it was shoulder length. Then, the two feminized men applied a burning salve that began to change her hair permanently. Sue just let it all happen. They stripped her nude and she simply stood in front of the mirror. Unsure how to feel or act now. Could she return to Earth. What would Reed say? Probably that she had been “stupid” for going on her own. Where was he now? Ignoring his wife as usual. And Johnny, he was too lazy to even realize she was gone. How could she rely on them, when they treated her like a den mother. Nothing more than a helpless woman. She was more powerful than ALL of them.

Her anger began to crest, and that's when she noticed a small yellow skinned alien come in. He had a device in his hand. She let him begin to charge the device, and obeyed when he asked her to lift her arm. She winced in pain when a needle hit her right rib cage. The pain cause more rage, and her eyes flickered white with electricity and then they subsided. The pain and her predicament were not Blastaar's fault. Not in her mind at that moment. It was Reed's fault for neglecting her. Johnny's for being lazy, and even Ben's for not realizing she was gone. In fact, as she saw the yellow alien finish a small leopard like spot, and begin another, she felt rage and a new sensation....hatred. She seethed in pure anger at her team. They were puny powerless beings who shunted her potential. For all she knew they were jealous of her massive and limitless powers granted by the cosmic rays so long ago. She thought about them in a new light, as weak and useless, and a hindrance to her progress. She gritted her teeth, as more spots began to line her rib cage and her obliques. Soon she actually fantasized about seeing them, but not as a teammate, rather an adversary. She watched as the spots grew larger on her right ass-cheek and thighs.

“What are these,” she finally asked.

Yunaar rubbed ointment on the spots. “They are the names of Blastaar's ancestors in ancient Baluuran.” She pointed to the last two. “That one is your name, and the one next to it is Blastaar's!”

Sue rubbed the spots that represented herself and Blastaar, by far the biggest, which made sense to her. Yunaar held out a tight black leather top, with lines in the middle. She pulled it over her head, and felt the tightness on her boobs, the lines showing a good amount of cleavage. Next, Sue was handed a skirt, and helped into the black leather mini-skirt. She was then given six inch knee high boots. Once on her, she took herself in. The reflection in the mirror was dark and certainly not the Invisible Woman. This was a new persona. Somehow at that moment it felt right. She imagined greeting the Fantastic Four....nay....Pathetic Three in this get up. Would they recognize her. She would not give them much time. They would even have less if Blastaar was with her. What would it take to utterly destroy them with Blastaar. Mere moments perhaps. Sue smiled. This was perfect. She looked perfect.

Now....

The doors to Mary Brown's right swung open, and Sue came in wiping off a massive amount of white foamy cum that literally covered her body. “Clean me,” she held her arms out and the two men rushed over and began to wipe her clean. In Sue's hands were a scepter. She tinked it off her fingernails, black as night, just like her lipstick and hair. “Welcome to my harem Karisma, I'm glad you could join!”

A moment of clarity returned to Mary, “I hate you, I wanted you to die here. How is this?”

Sue cackled, in a way that made Karisma shiver. “You like all others but Blastaar underestimate me greatly. I will thrive ANYWHERE!” Her eyes crackled white. “I should kill you wench,” Sue's eyes went low. “But your place here is more to my liking.” She held up the control rod in her hand. “This once belonged to the “GREAT” Annihilus,” she pointed to Annihil, “but he was kind of a pushover, and I think I like her better, no!”

Annihil nodded and bowed, “I appreciate what you have done to me Mistress!”

Sue pointed to Mary's tits. “This control rod has been retrofitted by our scientists. Thank you very much Richards.” She pressed a button, and Mary felt her tits ache and begin to swell. They ballooned and soon, a small dribble of purple liquid came out. It felt strangely wonderful. Sue came up and grabbed her tits forcefully, and Mary tried to pull back, but Annihil caught her. The pain subsided and a new sensation arose deep inside Karisma, as a stream of liquid gushed from her tits. Sue bent down and caught it in her mouth. “My new favorite flavor!”

Moments later, Mary Brown stood above the pools. Across from her was Annihil. To the right and left were the men Susan called Bentley and Gargan. From there cocks sprayed wine in different colors. From Mary's tits purple wine poured. Annihil had a green wine pouring from her own breasts. The pool was filling with various colors and flavors or wine like a rainbow, swirling around Susan. She was laughing and giggling catching what she wanted in her cup.

Mary moaned, feeling the pressure of an invisible dildo in her ass, and her pussy. She began to cum uncontrollably. The boys began to moan as well, moving there hips. Annihil followed with strange clicks, her small pussy opened like a flower by an invisible violator.

Sue looked at Mary. “Please me and I will please you.” She sipped her goblet. “Defy me and you will wish for **** that will never come!”

Mary moaned fucking back at the invisible dildos, “Yes Mistress. Wonderful Mistress.”

Suddenly, alarms sounded. More rumbling, but this was not the Mistress and Master.

Sue shot up. “They are attacking! I told Blastaar not to trust Tanjaaar!”

Susan Storm-Richards got out of the tub. “Prepare me!”

The two men grabbed her skirt and top, and Annihil grabbed her boots. Sue was clothed in seconds. She lifted herself on a projection and floated towards the top of the castle. The harem ran to the deck to watch. There was a cadre of ships around the capital. Sue and Blastaar stood together to meet them. No one was with them.

“They will be killed,” Karisma said actually worried.

However, before everyone, Susan's body began to glow. Her eyes burned. She shouted something to the fleet, but the ships advanced. A blinding white light came from Susan, and all watched in shock as the ships were disintegrated before there eyes. Hundreds of naked Baluurans floated in the space above the planet.

A nude Sue with white eyes just like Blastaar's turned to her nude mate. Karisma watched as they found a rock floating. Anyone in the city, and all the rebels who had been defeated watched as Blastaar mounted Susan Storm-Richards right there. A blinding white light shrouded them as they fucked above the capital. Blastaar roared, and as he came the people gasped. Sue did not move at all from the bomb burst, she was fixed to the ground. She took the might of Blastaar and her head went up in a smile. Then a flash like the sun from the two of them blinded the crowds momentarily.

It became a legend that is still told about the King and Queen of Baluur.

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