Nemesis-Reginhard Ferdinand

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[First time writer, so there might be plenty of problem, hope you understand, thanks ;)] NOTE: There will be expanded personal lore on magic and alchemy. There will be NO NTRs, though such might be the premise of Nemesis, nor will I include others builds, as I do not want to get involved with any, if any of the builds mentioned strikes resemblance, coincidence. I don’t take my sentencing very seriously, so have a laugh while you are at it, if, the words of an idiot is somehow funny.

Note that if you want to fap, go else where. I have come to terms with myself, that this already whored hand won’t get down to earth and write some erotics for a long time buddy. It will be a looooong while until porn finally shows up in the story. If you are generally interested in this, fap else where then come back.

One may sit and so to ponder, options all but are limiting, one may wish so much of power, but the ease can be so thin.

To put in better words, after extensive thinking, I made my pickings.

Draw Backs:

Permanent Changes +1, not much problematic changes you can apply, aside from Modify Personality and Alchemy(see below) but those are obviously not affected as that is the entire premise.

Eldritch Horror +2, At least you get to choose, and hey, nothing some illusion spell/potion can’t fix.

Sign of Control +1, “Jokes on you, I’m into that shit.”, it would be an occult symbol of my own, and what exact of it(how does it look)? Up to your(readers) desires —— your imagination, not mine.

Dollmaker +2, “Jokes on you, I’m into that shit.”, would boredom make their march, I see no hills, since, you know, fake hair/pupil exist.

Vampyrism +2, “Jokes on you, I’m into that shit.”, being weak to silver getting Nemesis pact is a little stupid, but that also makes what your enemy’s strategy very predictable. And having to kill a person each week? What are those other horrid creatures for? The slaves of those unworthy, deemed by the Nameless.

Unnatural Aura +1, Again, how is this a drawback?! What are you? Timid little creature looking to be a comedian? Well, nothing wrong with the comedians, but, you know.

Madness +1, “Mark, Reader of CHYOA, Mark”, here is an excellent play of words, a trickery of sorts, they only specified: “they will tickle you until you’ve fulfilled ONE OF their biddings”. That, my friend, means you technicalities only have to do one of their wills per day, heck they didn’t even specify’Each Day’, but you know, they are tickling you.

Nemesis Pack +3, If you found shock in this, you did not read the title.

Total: 27 points(plus the 14 default)

Abilities:

Familiar -2, don’t have any more points, ‘ll work around it

25

Conditional -1, should their leash cut short, they would do my wills still.

24

Modify Personality -1, pretty much for quality of life, and desire.

Mass Control -3, again, quality of life

Tireless Servant -1, how can you have combat without this?

Immortality -2, same as above

Hive Mind -3, easier control

Charm -1, although this do overlap with a few things, it should act as a catalyst.

13 points left

Telekinesis-3

Expanded Mind -3, Who are you? To control a hive mind without this?

Planeswalker -6, don’t want it? No funzyz I see.

Alchemy -1, Rough sight of an ability, but wholly underpriced. By my troth, would I not prove its worth, ne’er trust me.

0 points left

Melissa -0, How could one pass on such a delicacy of advisor and maiden?