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Chapter 185
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Mr Nice Guy
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Meet the Grangers
The apartment was quiet—exactly what Neha needed after the day she'd had.
Rahul had taken the boys to soccer practice. The leftovers from dinner were cooling on the counter, and Neha had just finished wiping down the stove. She was about to sit with her tea and her book when she heard the knock.
She paused, wiping her hands on her apron. A glance at the hallway clock told her it was nearly seven. Too late for packages. Too early for unexpected relatives. A neighbor?
She opened the door—and her heart dropped.
Donna Granger stood there, the same woman who had appeared at her door that morning with her daughter Juniper. She was wearing the same navy suit, but now her hair was parted into absurd twin tails, curled and bouncing like a teenager's. Her makeup was pink, glossy, and glittery, and for a moment Neha thought perhaps this was some kind of joke.
Beside her stood a boy. Thin. Pale. Disheveled. His hair looked like it hadn’t been brushed, and his shoulders were drawn in, defensive. He wore jeans and a wrinkled T-shirt, and his eyes darted around as if he'd rather be anywhere else.
"Hello, Mrs. Patel. Donna Granger. We met this morning. This is my son, Joey," the woman said brightly, with a smile that somehow made it worse.
Neha stared at them both for a moment, stunned by the surreal image on her doorstep.
"I… I beg your pardon?"
"Joey. My son," Donna repeated, still chipper. "You met my daughter Juniper this morning. Indira's friend."
Neha's face remained still. Indira’s friend. She had assumed—wrongly, it now seemed—that Juniper was the only child in that family involved.
"Why are you here?" she asked, more curtly than she intended.
Donna hesitated, her smile faltering just a hair. "I was hoping we might talk."
Neha's hands twitched at her sides. Every instinct in her told her to say no. To send them away. But the idea of a scene in the hallway, causing the neighbours to talk, was worse.
"You'd better come in," she said, stepping back stiffly. "Would you like tea?"
"Lovely," Donna chirped. The boy—Joey—gave a vague nod and a weak grin, still looking at the floor.
Neha moved to the kitchen and began boiling water, conscious of their presence in the room. Donna sat primly, her hands folded over her purse. Joey took the seat beside her but didn't look up. Neha didn't speak until the tea was poured and placed in front of them.
The silence was tight. Charged.
Donna cleared her throat. "I think we may have gotten off on the wrong foot this morning."
Neha raised her eyebrows, sipping her tea.
"I admit that I have a bit of a… strong personality," Donna continued. "I can be enthusiastic. But I never meant to overstep with Indira. Or with you."
Neha set her cup down. "Yet you did."
Donna's smile stiffened. "I only meant to support her. She's a remarkable young woman. And I think she deserves to be surrounded by people who believe in her."
"She has that," Neha said sharply. "She has a family. She doesn't need strangers telling her how to live."
"I'm not a stranger," Donna said softly. "Juniper is her friend. I'm her friend's mother."
"And this?" Neha gestured toward Joey, who was shrinking into his seat. "Why bring him here?"
Donna's smile brightened again. "He's—well, he's very close with Indira too. They are in the same classes at school. And I thought it might help—"
"You thought wrong." Neha’s voice was hard now. "You thought wrong, Mrs. Granger. I don't need you deciding what's best for my daughter. I decide what's best for her."
Donna tried to speak, but Neha continued.
"I raised her with values. With discipline. With expectations. She is a good girl. A smart girl. And whatever influence you've had on her, I don't like it. I don't like your makeup, or your tone, or this strange little parade you're putting on in my home. You and your son—"
She stopped herself, but the words had already escaped. And the fire behind them refused to die.
"You and your son," she repeated, rising to her feet now, hands braced on the table. "You think you can come into my home and play these little games? What is this? What do you want from my daughter?"
Joey's face twitched, but still he said nothing.
Neha pressed on.
"She used to be proud of who she is, of her heritage. Grounded. And now she walks around in tight jeans and lip gloss like a little doll. She won't eat with us. She won't talk to us. And she lies. To me. Do you know what that means? It means you've changed her. You and your children. And I will not sit here and watch you fill her head with—whatever this is."
Donna had gone stiff, her smile faltering completely now, but Neha didn't give her room to speak.
"She is a child. My child. And I see exactly what this is. This isn't support. This is grooming. This is manipulation. You're all trying to make her like you—and for what? For boys like him to have their way with her?"
Joey flinched again—then stilled.
Neha saw the boy's hands curl into fists on his lap. His shoulders drew tight. That hit a nerve.
"She is not going to end up in some boy's bedroom," Neha snapped. "She will not become a dropout or a bimbo or a—thing for him to play with. I forbid it."
She leaned forward across the table, her voice low and venomous now.
"You should be ashamed. And you call yourself a mother. English is my second language, but at least I know what that word means. You are not good people."
And that's when Joey looked up.
Something in the air changed—like the lights had dimmed without dimming, like the room was suddenly holding its breath.
His face was still flushed, but his expression had solidified. The bashful slouch was gone. His eyes were sharp now. Cold and clear.
He blinked slowly. Then spoke.
"Um," he said, voice soft but unmistakably firm.
"Actually…"
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Mansplain
...um, actually...
The day after Joey's eighteenth birthday he discovers that something has changed. He'd been accused of mansplaining before, but now when he does it, women begin to think that he's right! Where did this power come from, and where will it take him? Let's find out! Note: all characters are over eighteen.
Updated on Oct 25, 2025
by Mr Nice Guy
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