Marvel's Despicable Dorrek Issue 1: A ritual begins

Tyannan Space, The Negative Zone

The skrull spaceship Big Casino floated through the Negative Zone empty space. Such a ship was far from home, and thanks to Skrull "Rifter" and the "Gateway Transmitter" technology stolen from Reed Richards, the zeppelin looking world-ship was now in the Negative Zone. Once a resort ship in Kral Space, in the Andromeda Star System, the ship was now home to thousands of renegade skrull thar did not follow Empress S'Byll.

The ship was heavily guarded on its flanks by the Skrull Battleship Ryb'ik and and the Skrull Dreadnought Tsurud-Vor as well as a fleet of War-bringer and Warbird Skrull ships. Behind the Big Casino was the famed Skrull warship Sorrow. With it, a Naval Fleet to rival the Skrull empire itself, and not the small fleet of Warlords like Baron Karza.

In fact, in the Positive Universe in the Andromeda Galaxy, Baron Karza's ships searched for the 'Big Casino', as well as the fleets of Warlord Kylor and Warlord Yorak and any an all manner of would be emperors. For what was happening on the 'Big Casino' would have vast implications for the Skrull Empire, the Andromeda Galaxy, the Milky Way Galaxy and potentially both the positive and negative universes as a whole.

Inside the medical bay of the officers quadrant of the 'Big Casino', Susan Storm-Richards of Earth, and member of the Fantastic Four laid in a medical bed screeching as her entire body burned and suddenly turned a bright blue. This wasn't a skrull impostor or impersonator, not a.dream not a trick nor a hoax. It was the real Susan Storm-Richards.

A small skrull scientist next to the bed turned a device and nodded as the blue light ran through Susan's body and into a mechanism. "The Element-X is holding up," Dro'ge Fenu Edu nodded. "Just as Reed Richards predicted in his notes."

Susan screamed as her mid section burned and lit up a bright blue once more.

"It doesn't feel that way!" She was holding back tears trying to remain strong.

Priest Galan, a priest of Skrull sciences was chanting incantations in ancient Skrull tongue. He looked at Dro'ge's work and nodded. "The device is working. The surges are much less now." He looked to three female skrulls, known as Sto'rm-maidens, to begin their part in this ritual.

First there was the heavy set, shorter outgoing skrull female P'alluc, who had spunk and would rarely shut up. She was the most junior of these Sto'rmmaidens.

Next to her, holding up Susan's purple skrull style medical garment above the heroines privates and stomach, was the young Madison Warner, a skrull agent on Earth who was one of the first Sto'rmmaidens. The girl, with the four green horns on her green head, had something to prove to the Empire. So she enlisted to help.

Finally, there was the former Skrull pirate and pilot, M'Jell whose hard pirating life had left her without a right leg and left arm. A cybernetic covering over the left side of her face allowed for two red cyborg eyes. More robot in many places than Skrull. Reluctantly she'd joined this group of handmaidens. Either that, or jail. She was the most experienced and knowledgeable amongst the

"Apply the Lacaroo!" Science Priest Galan commanded the maidens surrounding Susan Richards. Dro'ge moved purple metallic Skrull device towards the maidens.

Portly little P'alluc, who had experience with this ritual, wasn't convinced. "It's too early...her majesty Susan isn't even doing the great exhalations."

The experienced M'Jell assured her friend that it was fine. "It won't be a problem. It will help her." Her cybernetic armed grabbed the purple cylinder device.

Susan gritted her teeth as pain radiated through her body. This blue energy tremor was less powerful. Maybe it was all working. Yet, the Invisible Woman's eyes took in the strange purple device. She'd heard this term before but couldn't place how or where. The cybernetic armed servant unscrewed the top, and it reminded Susan of a 'Thermos'. It even hissed when opened. She expected a strange tube that would be connected to her tight stomach like the one pulling the blue energy from her body towards the Element-X. Instead the skrull female scooped a black slime onto her hand. "What is that?" Susan asked when the skrull woman moved towards her with the goop.

"It will help!" M'Jell warmly assured her liege.

Another immensely strong blue energy eruption from Sue's stomach ripped through her body. It caused Susan to cry out and arch her back.

Dro'ge, P'alluc and Galan had to hold her down.

"The Element-X isn't working," a sobbing Susan cried. Her hair was matted with sweat now. The pain unbearable in her stomach and lower region. A pressure and tightness unknown to the young woman.

Galan rubbed her shoulder. "It is." He soothed and pointed to the device containing the element from Annihilus' control rod. It was drawing the energy from Sue's body into the device, siphoning the energy. "And the Lacaroo will work to facilitate the ritual."

"It better!" A voice called from the corner. The final person in the room spoke. Commander Chrell spoke ominously. The intimidating Skrull with the tattoo over his eye made it clear. "If she dies...if EITHER of them dies....everyone here dies."

When the word "either" was spoken, it made Sue cringe. That possibility had never crossed Susan's mind and now suddenly she was ready to do anything to complete the ritual. "Give me the damn Lacaroon or whatever," a panting Susan pleaded.

M'Jell began rubbing it on her calves and then legs and thighs.

Taking a cue, P'alluc dipped her thick pudgy hands into the purple device pulling out the black goop. She reached under the fabric of Sue's purple skrull medical onesie and began to rub the Earthling's stomach.

Madison took the goop on her hand and reached under Sue's medical scrubs. It was her job to rub it on Susan Storm's privates.

"Make sure to get it all over her Labia Majora and Minora, the prepuce and clitoris," M'Jell instructed her student, "as well as the mons pubis!" Each Sto'rmmaiden was educated in Susan's anatomy.

Susan understood the last word, but she wasn't dumb, she knew what the cyborg skrull was referring to, and Susan felt the cold fingers of the young black haired horned skrull girl on her pussy. It wasn't sexual, but more clinical in nature. Still she gasped when Madison rubbed her folds with the goop and then her clitoris. There was a time when Susan would be ashamed to have this teenager, barely eighteen looking at her pussy, now Susan could care less she was being almost massaged by a young skrull female. The youth green hands moved to her pubic mound. Susan could sense the girl hesitating, and she saw a look of confusion on the skrull face that was staring up Susan's medic scrubs. "It's been a while since I've groomed down there."

Her liege answered an unspoken question in Madison's head. The young student

Sto'rmmaiden had worked on a dummy of Susan for months with others in preparation for the ritual, but the real thing was astonishing. Susan had hairs all over the area above her vagina. Long hairs. Unlike skrull who had nothing but hair on their eyebrows and head.

When Madison applied more of the lacaroo goop to Susan's she could then feel the thing inside Susan. It was hard. The tip was visible when Madison manipulated Sue's pussy lips with the salve.

Another jolt of energy came from Sue's stomach and she cried out. "Aaaaahhhhhhh." But she noted while the pain remained the immense pressure was going away. Suddenly she felt odd, like a sinking in her legs, and her feet and calves. Susan Storm looked down and gasped in shock, seeing her legs and feet literally deflate. To some it would seem laughably cartoonish, but to Sue it was horrific to watch her body almost melt. She felt that same strange feeling in her stomach and the pressure all but vanished. The Invisible Woman tried to move her legs but they merely wobbled and rippled. The same happened when she attempted to roll her toes. Her lower body looked as if it was melting into the purple hospital bed. "Oh god...what are you...what is happening!"

"It's the Lacaroo." The knowledgable M'Jll answered.

Dro'ge nodded. "The salve makes your molecules more pliable...so that it is more likely," the science priest looked to Commander Chrell, whose threat loomed in Dro'ge's skrull mind, "so that you WILL survive the ritual." He corrected himself.

Susan watched her stomach begin to change shape, warping the previous egg like shape it had moments ago. Now that hard surfaced substance of the shell inside of her could be seen plainly under her melting skin which dripped around the egg like shape in her stomach.

Yet, despite the ease of the pressure, Susan’s burning pain began to grow and permeate her body. She felt her skin burn. "Something's wrong," Susan pleaded, beginning to cry. "Something is wrong."

Before all of their eyes, Susan's stomach glowed bright blue, suddenly making her garb translucent. The clear dark image of something moving inside her stomach was apparent for all to see. The thing moving inside Susan sent out a bright blue light larger than any burst yet. The Invisible Woman shrieked in horror and pain. The clothes on her body began to hiss and smoke and slowly they burned around her body. The puffy purple material she was laying upon began to burn away as well. Susan watched her breasts, two full sizes larger than the day before appear when the garb burned away. Her heavy breasts and dark nipples were visible to the room. Including to males, who could be sentenced to **** for seeing her lovely orbs.

Despite being a science officer, Dro'ge felt tightness in his purple under garments as he stared at the human breasts. He brushed off his distraction and looked to Galan. "The device needs more power." He urged.

Galan was as smart if not smarter than Dro'ge. "We can siphon energy directly from the Cosmic Generator." The Generator powered the whole ship.

The gruff commander Chrell was against the idea. "You mean divert air and energy from the ship to this room? You'll kill people!"

The science officer laughed. "This is the Negative Zone, no one needs air. "Besides, I would only divert power from the gambling casinos." He began to race to a wall and pull down a portion that exposed power couplings. He then attached a small computer to the couplings and began his work.

As Galan did his work, behind him, Dro'ge was frantically looking at vials on a metal table. The junior science officer glanced at the screen showing Susan Storm's vital signs. Sue's heart rate was starting to look like the potential for cardiac arrest. "She's going to die." Dro'ge admitted.

"Yeeeeeeaaaaaaaa," Susan shouted and arched her back on the now metal slab of table that was left. She was feeling a pain unlike anything she'd experienced in her life. It was all HIS fault she thought. This is what he WANTED. This was his PLAN all along. She'd kill him. Her voice was hoarse and her throat raw. She was baring her clenched teeth like a rabid dog. Suddenly she felt pressure in her chest. She began to convulse from the pain and pressure in her chest.

"Hold her," Galan called to the portly handmaiden P'alluc. She did as told and everyone watching observed Susan's breasts begin expand. Sue's head came up and she shrieked. Suddenly her dark large nipples burst with purple liquid and it caused P'alluc to step back when the liquid blasted her face. Susan's spraying tits began to cover the occupants of the room like some horror movie. Susan fell back down and began convulsion once more, her nipples now dribbled the pink liquid and returned to the normal, yet hefty size. Susan's stomach glowed brightly and constantly now.

"I'm almost done." Galan called, not knowing what occured.

"It won't matter", Dro'ge admitted, "she's dying."

Chrell denied the scientists assessment. "She is strong, and imbued with cosmic engery...it's why our lord chose her for this ritual."

Dro'ge watched Galan finish the connection and reroute a massive amount of power to the device with Element-X. It was clear Dro'ge was right. Susan began to spasm, her eyes rolled. Her mouth foamed. "It's killing her." He picked up to vials and placed them in syringes.

"What is that?" Commander Chrell asked.

Dro'ge held up the syringe in his left hand. "Skrull Adrenaline!" He then held up the right, "This is the milk from the Skrull cows the Fantastic Four doomed."

"No...." Galan pushed his fellow science officers hands down. "Not that."

"It will give her power to fight!" Dro'ge stated. Reed Richards had tricked four skrulls into remaining in cow form. Those cows produced a milk which causes mutations and changes in humans. Further, the milk had been mixed with the meat of the cows after they were slaughtered. Skrull scientists were designing a way to change humans. The skrull adrenaline compound was created by extracting adrenaline from deviant skruls and purifying it with adrenaline removed from prime skrulls, the originals skrulls. It could mutate normal humans or bring out latent mutant abilities, similar to the terrigen mist of the Inhumans.

"We don't know what it will do!" Galan pleaded.

"The Thing inside her is killing her," Chrell finally admitted. "Do it!" He commanded.

But neither Galan nor Dro'ge would do the task. "DO IT!!" Chrell commanded with a shout. Sue's entire body began to shake and turn blue and begin to sizzle. All her vitals were in the red.

The vials were picked up by small skrull hands and jabbed into Susan's right shoulder. The skrull hands squeezed the two vials into the heroine. It was Madison Warren who took up the task.

A quite crowd of skrulls watched Sue's body begin to change. Like a wave, the shoulder turned purple and a ripple of purple covered her arm, the her face and body, until her body was purple, and then it all turned red.

Madison watched her liege turn bright red. The young skrull was sure she'd get the **** penatlty for this. She gasped and put her hand to her mouth when she watched Susan's chin begin to furrow quickly and then change back. From red, to blue, to purple, her skin rippled with different colors. Her ears pointed and then returned to normal.

While Susan's body changed before their eyes, the science officers noted her convulsions had stopped. Her heart rate was leveling, and her breathing looked better. The Element-X device began to chug to life, sucking blue energy from her stomach. There were much less pronounced energy eruptions now.

Susan Storm sighed deeply. "Is it over?"

Dro'ge, Galan and the three Sto'rmmaidens laughed. "The ritual has just begun!" Dro'ge stated and grabbed a large pair of huge metal forceps and moved to the melted area between Susan's legs.

The Invisible Woman turned to Commander Chrell. "Get HIM in here." She barked. Chrell was about to counter, but Sue stopped him. "NOOOWWW!" She shouted and her teeth were suddenly sharp, her skin red, her chin furrowed, her ears pointed, but only for a moment and then she changed back.

Commander Chrell nodded and headed out the room.

"This is HIS fault." Susan shouted. "He wanted this...he told me that first fucking time." Sue cried once more from growing pain, but a more natural pain. "Get me ****!" She commanded. Galan and Dro'ge nodded for the Sto'rmmaidens to comply. The science officers began to use the forceps to separate the folds of Susan's now pliable hairy vagina exposing the tip or the egg beneath her vaginal lips.

M'Jll instructed the younger Sto'rmmaidens which of the vials on the metal table were pain killers. The girls each took a syringe and pushed one into Susan's left arm, one by one.

"Ahhhhhh," a heavily doped up Susan smiled. "That's better." She was on the Skrull equivalent of morphine now. Nothing in the ritual said that narcotics couldn't be used. In fact, for some woman they're encouraged. Susan looked at her legs all melted to the metal slab she was laying on. She laughed suddenly trying to wiggle her toes. It was like a bad Wil E. Coyote cartoon or something. The young heroine then looked at her dark nipples still dribbling out purple liquid. They just 'popped', she said in her head and laughed. Finally, she watched Dro'ge and Galan using forceps to pull her vagina open. Galan grabbed what looked like a large flatmetal pan attached to metal rod. "Are you gonna slide it out like pizza?" She jokingly asked.

Susan was so high she just laid her head back now, the strange sensations between her legs were felt, but little to no pain. Th Element-X device wasn't even needing to whirr life anymore.

Her **** addled dream-like mind wandered to when HE told her how this would all play out....

Then....

Andromeda Galaxy: Tarnax IV, Skrull Throneworld (unknown location)

"Oh god....oh god.....oh please." Susan begged. She felt it well inside her. It was close, so close. Maybe this time, she thought and rotated her hips. But the alarm sounded due to the readings on the large computer screen. The strange ball inside the strange plastic-lik panties stopped rubbing Sue's clitoris. "FUCKKKK!" She groaned in anger as another chance at release was denied her. The chains holding her arms up and stretched her legs at her sides cranked when she gave in from frustration and fell forward. But there was no falling. Her legs were spread by other chains and she was being held up, unable to sit, to fall, to move in any real way. Her head fell until her chin hit her chest. She was so weak it was hard to hold her head up.

How long had she been here? His captive. How long had he had this vile contraption strapped to her pussy? She didn't know. Would she ever escape. What would be her fate now if she did? Did survive and escape.

This wasn't like Doctor Doom's methods of ****. The fucking monsters had strapped these plastic panties to her privates, with a ball that moved over her clit. Constantly arousing her body, then denying her. It was madness. She wanted to die. If that was her fate so be it. She wanted that fate. Did she?

She hung nude dripping sweat, and more. Her chin was caked with dry....stuff. But fresh green....stuff dripped off her breasts with her sweat. How many times had he relieved himself between her heaving breasts. No answers. Maybe half a dozen. Maybe a dozen even. He seemed obsessed with her breasts. To the point she had bruises all over them. Sucking, groping, pulling, pinching, and...and...defiling them.

Susan Storm had no answers. But more so, she had no energy. No energy to fight. No energy to cry. No energy to keep this **** going. Her body ached. Her mind was more than a wreck from no sleep and the lack of release from **** arousal. She didn't even have the power to keep her head up. He had won. She always thought she was strong. She was just an Invisible GIRL after all. It fit. He was going to get what he wanted.

There He was in front of her slowly pacing back and forth in a purple robe. Other than that he was naked. She kept peering up through her sweaty blonde locks to his withered old green feet. Then her eyes would move up gazing through her sweat caked hair trying not to look at him....at it. But there it was always. Sticking straight up. Did it ever go down. Was he ever satisfied. She found herself looking at it against her better judgement, thick, stiff veiny and green. Did he notice her looking. She hated how her pussy now dripped from her gazing upon it. The **** arousal was causing her body 5o betray her. Now her mind. She wanted this to end. She wanted it all to end. She wanted it....

"Ok...." she finally said softly. "I'll do it." She said.

But he wouldn't accept that as admittance of her defeat. "You'll do what," his raspy elderly villainous voice remarked.

"I'll have....I'll have sex with you." She said as softly as she could. He could hear her. She knows he could.

He chuckled. "That's not what I want."

Sue seethed. "Yes it is....it's what this is all about." She spat at his feet. "All of this. Just to get me to...to..."

Before she could finish he cut her off. "That's not what I meant," he said. Susan watched green feet move to her side and then back in front of her. The position of his cock at the corner of Susan's eyes gazing through hair. "I want you to ask!" Hetaunted her.

The young heroine sighed deeply. End it, she told herself. "Will you...." she choked up the next words, knowing just what word he wanted her to say, "will you fuck me?" She breathed the words out, not believing they escaped her lips.

He merely laughed. "What was that?" He still taunted her.

The girl clenched her teeth, but then shouter. "FUCK ME DORREK!" She picked up her head and looked at the old green face of Emperor Dorrek VII the leader of the Skrull empire. The Invisible Girl stared right into the Skrull's red and yellow eyes. Susan's next words were more a command than anything. "I want you to fuck me!"

She was hoping to be saved. Taken from here. Maybe. ..just maybe that would be her fate.

Dorrek smiled. "Release her!" He commanded.

At Susan's sides appeared two skrull women. Or girls. They were young. Maybe her age. Susan was still only nineteen. Both had the sides of their heads shaven and wore purple chain mail bra and panties that covered nothing. Sue could see dark green nipples and their green slits between their legs. How long had they been there. At this point Susan didn't even care, part of her rejoiced when the girls undid the plastic contraption around Susan's privates. It was like a load taken off shoulders. Susan's dry pussy juices made it so the panties had to be peeled off her sex. She sighed with relief. Only momentarily as one of the girl pushed a button and the chains around her arms and legs detached the shackles.

Susan fell forward suddenly and was prepared to fall several feet off the dais she was upon. She was going to break her neck on the steps that led up the Dais. Maybe thar was the fate she wanted. But just as suddenly as she fell, she stopped in midair. No....she was caught.

Dorrek, the old skrull had her arms, and in a quick motion that took Sue literally off her feet, the short elderly skrull scooped the young human into his arms, and lifted her in the air, her legs drapped over his arms. Her arms raced instinctively around his neck to support herself. She was utterly shocked how powerful the old skrull was.

"I would never let you fall." He told her.

There was something in his eyes, those red eyes. It was honesty. Did he mean all those things he'd been saying to her during her ****? That she was special. That she was the most powerful woman he'd ever met. He continually called her a "women" and not a girl. That he wanted her for himself about all skrull women. To make her his consort prime. That she deserved to be cherished and respected. That he would give her not jewels but entire worlds. Something inside her, deep inside, believed that all he'd told her was true. Call it youthful hope, call it inexperience in love. But she believed him. "I know." She said finally.

Dorrek's eyes closed and he turned his head and moved it towards Susan's head. The young human girl closed her own eyes and turned her head in the opposite direction, moving her head towards the skrulls. She felt thick lips touch hers and she opened her mouth and allowed a large thick tongue inside. Her own tongue ran around the skrulls. Their kissing became intense and passionate as Dorrek walked her to the bed.

Yes...he captured her.

Yes...he tortured her.

But she was a young girl. Smitten. Smitten by a sskrull. The young heroine melted in his arms and sucked on his tongue. This was the fate she wanted.