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Chapter 18
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TheNexus
What command does Devin give her this time?
Krys needs to shut up about the smell and hair...
The world went grey and everything slowed down. He was still in the backseat and Krys still turned around in the front seat, glaring at him.
"Babe, you there?"
"Yes you dumb ass. I'm always here. You're a dick for making me give you blowjobs on command. It's so freaking demeaning. It hurts my jaw. I hate it. I get no pleasure out of it. Your cock tastes nasty, it smells disgusting, and you have way too much hair. At least your cum tastes good I guess."
Devin shook his head. "There she goes again with the taste, smell, and hair thing again. She didn't used to complain about that before all these commands started. I wish she would shut up about that..." His eyebrows show up, realizing he could wish that particular complaint away.
"Just for that comment I'm going to make you love the smell. Serves you right for being such a bitch to me."
Even in the quantum dream state, Devin could swear he saw Krys tense up slightly and her eyes go wide. It took her a moment but she finally started speaking. "No... please no don't do that. Anything but that. Every time you change me I externally comply and the world changes, but internally I'm just the same old me, suffering."
Krys' comment had the opposite of her intended effect. That's exactly what Devin was hoping for. "Oh good that's exactly what I was hoping to hear. Get ready for a life of sniffing balls. It's just the beginning, my love."
Devin thought over the wording for a moment, trying to figure out how much he could fit in a single command. It was going to be lengthy, but enough repetition and she should take it.
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I hate the taste, smell, and hair all over your crotch, it's revolting."
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I hate the taste, smell, and hairiness of your crotch and specifically find the smell revolting when you're sweaty and haven't showered."
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I hate the taste, smell, and hairiness of your crotch and specifically find the smell incredibly mehhh when you're sweaty and haven't showered"
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I think the the taste, smell, and hairiness of your crotch is tolerable and specifically find the smell ok when you're sweaty."
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I love the the taste, smell, and hairiness of your....crotch and specifically find the smell interesting when you haven't showered."
"You love the taste, smell, and hairiness of my crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when I'm sweaty and haven't showered"
"I love the taste, smell, and hairiness of your crotch and specifically find the taste and smell incredibly intoxicating when you're sweaty and haven't showered."
The world goes white for a moment before flashing back to normal. Devin is no longer in his girlfriend's car, but rather laying on his bed watching TV. It's an episode of Avatar the Last Airbender, the one where they go to the beach island.
Krys is also there and in a position that Devin isn't used to seeing her. Not only is she laying in his bed (she usually made him have sex in her car or her own bedroom), but her head is between his legs. And Devin is naked from the waist down. It takes him a moment to realize what she's doing, the blur of the quantum realm still fogging his brain.
Krys isn't blowing him or at least not in the traditional sense. Instead she has her head propped up on his leg, her eyes clearly watching the TV while she licks up and down Devin's cock. She takes a long licks before pulling her tongue back in her mouth and swirling it around her cheeks. After seeing her repeat this a few times, it clicks with Devin that she's basically treating his cock like a lollipop. She's licking it to get taste and then sucking the sweat and whatever else she collects back in to savor the taste.
Just as Devin is about to say something, Krys moves, shifting her head down to his balls where she starts up her licking again. She continues this for a few minutes, with Devin enjoying the light touch of her tongue making its way up, down, around, and under his ballsack.

Devin thinks he hears the occasional moan, but he's not quite sure, the sound of a battle on the TV filling the room. With his attention away on the TV, Devin just sits back and enjoys the tongue bath from Krys.

After a couple of minutes Krys slowly pushes her nose deep into Devin's hairy ballsack and takes a deep breath. She holds it in and slowly releases it before pulling in another batch of, frankly, rancid sweaty air. Devin isn't positive, but he's pretty sure Krys is shuttering slightly after each breathe. After a few seconds she seemingly gets her fill and moves back to licking his balls.
A few minutes later the episode ends and Devin takes a look at his phone. It's nearly midnight and he has an early shift in the morning. Despite the absolute joy it was for his bitchy girlfriend to be licking and sniffing his balls, he did have real world responsibilities.
"Krys...Krys... Krys can you stop for a second?"
The Asian girl lifts up her head slightly to look at her boyfriend, her mouth still sucking in one of his balls. She pops it out to speak. "Yeah? Something wrong?"
For the first time since he was teleported here, Devin got a good look at his girlfriend's face. It was an absolute mess. It was covered in slobber and sweat, though he wasn't sure if it was _his _sweat or hers. But that wasn't all. To his astonishment, the Asian beauty also had a couple of his pubic hairs strung across her face. One was suck to her forehead and another was hanging off her bottom lip. This sort of grossed Devin out, but he wasn't one to complain. Instead he just mimed pulling a hair off his own lips to hint at what she had on her own.
Krys looked at him confused. "What... do I have one of your pubes on my face again?" She reached up with her hand and pulled away the pube from her lip and then the other from her forehead. She looked at them in her hand for a moment before locking eyes with you and pushing her hand into her mouth, shoving the pubes inside.
Devin felt like he was about to be sick seeing his hot girlfriend eat his pubes. He realized he might have gone overboard when he said she loved his hairy crotch...
Krys noticed his discomfort and started laughing. She spit out the pubes into her hand. "Sorry! I know that grosses you out, but you know me!"
Krys glanced at her watch and saw the time with a bit of shock. She also had to be up early in the morning for her shift. It didn't really matter that her dad owned the place, a job was a job. She sat up, scooted off the bed, and started to put her shoes on to leave.
"I'll see you tomorrow. Thanks again for letting me...umm.. well you know... get my kick." She gave an awkward smile. "I know I'm a bit mean to you sometimes and I know you think this kink of mine is a bit odd, but I really do appreciate it! Love you babe. See you tomorrow!"
Krys walks towards the bedroom door and begins to open it before stopping. She turns around with an inquisitive look. "Wait... did you...did you save them for me?"
Devin was confused. "Save what?"
Krys put on a sad puppy dog face. "Babe. We talked about this yesterday. Your gym shorts? Did you save them for me? Please don't tell me you washed them..."
It took Devin a second, but he soon realized what Krys was getting at. He did command her to like his sweaty unwashed crotch after all. "Uhhh... yeah maybe. Let me check."
Devin got up and walked over to his dirty hamper. He dug through it for a second before pulling out his dirty exercise shorts. Even at arms length he could tell they smelled disgusting. He had the urge to pinch his nose as he walked back over to his girlfriend and handed the sweaty shorts to her.
Krys quickly grabbed the shorts and shoved them in her face. She breathed in deeply through her nose and held it for a moment before slowly exhaling. Her eyes were closed as she savored the rancid smell. She finally opened her eyes and her face broke into a huge smile. "Thank you, thank you, thank you! You're the best boyfriend ever!" She looked back at the shorts and her eyes and smile grew wider. "And you saved your underwear too!" she said as she pulled out Devin's dirty boxers, still wrapped inside the gymshorts. "That's so thoughtful of you!"
Before Devin could respond, Krys took the shorts and stuffed them in her purse. She zipped it up, threw it across her shoulder, and walked up to Devin, giving him a tight hug. "I'm sorry for being such a bitch sometimes. Moments like this make me remember why I fell in love with you in the first place! "
The hug ended and Krys turned to leave the room. "I'll see you tomorrow bright and early!" She opened the door and walked out, leaving Devin in stunned silence.
"Wow.... I really should be more careful with these commands. That was freaking weird." Devin said to no one but himself.
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