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Jurassic Feelings. Part VI.
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Chapter 87. Part VI. More an animal than human.
"Mo-ho-my-hy-hy-hy” Tammy whines while she cums on Jasmine’s fingers. My big sister takes care of the little ones of our family while even Mom moves up the couch and licks on little Tammy’s puffy nipples. She squirms and cums, but manages to glue her eyes on the screen. I do the same, grabbing Finn’s hand and so, all of us, watch the horrors of being attacked by a T-Rex at night.
And I love it.
“You know, the head really wasn’t supposed to smash through the car window,” Finn explains, and I perceive his voice as something that will forever hold sway over my life. While I try to follow the movie, I focus on his voice and detect the sheer joy we’re giving him tonight. “The rain made the mechanical puppet so wet that they underestimated the weight. What a scene! And there! Any second… any second… Now!”
The T-Rex roars and pushes the car deeper into the park’s mud. A part of my brain notes that the ground had actually seemed solid during the day and that a road like this isn’t suitable for park traffic. But as a good friend, I keep my mouth shut and do my duty. I “ooh” and “aah,” fascinated and grateful that Finn is sharing this moment with me.
At the same time, I’m just as wet as the T-Rex puppet, and my panties must be just as heavy, marinating as they are in a hot mix of pussy juice and the heat radiating from between my legs. I’m melting down there, and my heart is pounding like the thundering footsteps of the Rex as he chases after that Malcolm guy—who is actually kind of sexy, I have to admit. But my eyes are glued to the screen—not because of the characters, but because if I looked at my love, I’d mount him right here and now and fuck him until he…
“Oh no!” Tammy whimpers and buries her face between Jasmine’s breasts, while I—feeling a bit ashamed of myself—do the same.
“Poor Gennaro,” Finn chuckles. “He wasn’t such an asshole in the books, but who cares, right?” He gets no answer, but as I hear the terrifying sound a human makes when being eaten by a thirty-ton beast, Finn strokes my head and calms me down.
"That sound is so cool!" I hear Jasmine’s pitying laugh, underscored by the soft panting of Tammy and Mom. Then the scene is over—Dr. Grant and the kids seem to have been thrown off a cliff or something, and the Rex roars one last time, so I can look again.
But in my head, I’m elsewhere. Not because the movie is too scary, but because my mind is swimming with girlish thoughts.
It isn’t the violence that turns me on, even though I have to admit I enjoy being scared. It’s the feeling—imagining those two kids in a supposedly safe car that gets attacked by an incredible beast and literally chewed up—that makes me get wet. An instinct.
But I know there is more inside me—in my body and my mind. But above all, in my soul.
When I saw Grant—the guy Finn thinks is so great—risk his life, step out into the cold, wet night, and light that red flare... I finally understand why my heart is still racing and why my pussy is twitching wildly, screaming to wrap itself around his iron-hard cock. All my female instincts are crying out for me to act like a woman. My feelings take over. Logic fades into the background. And in his arms, I become more animal than human.
I like the fear because it proves I’m alive. The adrenaline of being hunted by this man for my body and what I can offer him. Pleasure. I do what he wants me to. I obey. If he wants to chase me down like his prey, to conquer and then eat me alive, I would let him. Or he keeps me in a paddock like in the movie, sheltering and protecting me. I would love him for that. What else is family, if not sheltering and protecting from within while he defends us from outside? For that, he can have me however he wants.
But it's another feeling. The feeling of being… Normal. Just a girl watching TV with her boyfriend, being silly and not understanding the movie, while me must provide me with answers I can't seem to find for myself in the movie box. It's just normal, snuggling up and getting vastly different outcomes than he does, but all the while doing the same thing. And then I feel proud of myself for stepping into his world, seeing the movie and the messages he pulls out of it from his eyes, not mine. Subjugating myself for him, letting him lead and following him like a good girlfriend. That makes me proud.
But you're his best bro, it flows through my head while the movie continues. This Nedry Guy, the villain of the movie, I think, gets eaten by the creepy rattlesnake dinosaurs in his car. Tammy squeals and Jasmine rubs her little clit while I again rest my head on my lover's chest and look up at him. While the Car with the cool Livery shakes and the fat guy gets eaten, we share a quick look into each other's eyes. And I look away from him, towards the TV.
A good Bro shares the things his best bro enjoys in life I think.
Rose Lynchwood. +1 (PS +75)
I hear the MCD in his pocket vibrate and know I certainly got a lot of points there. I mean, I do all the things that are required of a best bro. Supportive and at his side and always him in her head. Always him in priority.
“Are you gonna be okay, Daddy?” Tammy asks when the trio of Adventures got stuck up in the tree. Or no, just two of them. I can't quite follow the movie anymore because I get lost in my girlish thoughts. Or, I try to think, with him at my side, it’s just normal feelings. I just feel the world around me. I feel the love he sends to Tammy when he says that they will be fine and that there will even be a funny scene.
“Maybe we should build a three-house for you?” he muses, and I could say that there aren’t any threes near our house to build on. I should tease. I should be his best bro.
But I just feel love for him. I can't say anything. I'm just a girl, hopelessly in love with this boy and lost without him. I want to live my life with him until the end of our days and I want it now. I hear Tammy giggle when the boy moans that the're in the car again and I picture what it would be like… to…
I'm his best bro. The MCD said I would be and it was right. My life is perfect the way it is. He goes first and I go second. Finally, one time in his life we work together. He's the superior and I obey. I'm happy and I love him. He loves me and he protects. Best bro Rose…
And best bro Finn?
It’s the first time in the weeks I’m bound by this unbelievable device, that I think this way.
Is that my destiny? To be his best bro?
We love each other, right? I love my life with him. He loves me.
We stick together as siblings should. We overcome the hurdles that life throws at us. We are…
Best bros?
But... I look up at him again. No clue how far the movie has come. Seems the Rex wants’s to eat the people in the car and I get lost in my boyfriend's / best bro’s eyes while he jokes about the rearview mirror and a song from this Meat Loaf guy I don’t know either.
I look up at Finn and…
My feelings are my thoughts. I'm a woman and the first time in my 20 years of life, I see how a healthy woman, sound of mind and, more importantly, in tune with her feelings, sees the world.
He isn't my best bro, I realize with such clarity it should shock me but doesn't. So Finn is back in the movie, caressing my head and making me shiver while I…
I do all the things a best bro should do. Support, provide and help.
But that's not how I feel.
I want to submit. I want to obey. I want to serve and nurture. I want to help and enable.
I want to be a wife.
Rose Lynchwood. +48 (PS +123)
And with that, I let my feelings be free. No suppression. No guard up high. No walls to prevent. I feel like I want to feel and I want to feel love for this man that I cuddle right now.
I want to watch movies with him forever and ever. I want...
What would it feel like… to be his wife?
Rose Lynchwood. +17 (PS +140)
Not his best bro… but… the mother of his children?
Rose Lynchwood. +86 (PS +226)
To be… his girl?
Rose Lynchwood+204 (PS +430)
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Rose Lynchwood. -805 (PS -375)
Rose Lynchwood. +174. Error. +274. Error. +374.
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Rose Lynchwood. +74 (PS... +3006… Error. PS +276 Error. Ps -203)
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Message from the author:
Oh, what's happening here? For the more curious ones, I already explained it at the beginning of the chapter. But over time - and your influence played a big role in that, being the nice guys you are - I realized Rose's path doesnt quite fit anymore with what I originally wanted to achieve. Maybe you know but the story was designed more like a revenge story. Well, you, the best readers I could wish for, turned it into something way, way... fuckinmg waaaay more valuable to my as a writer than I imagined at the start. Planned was that I bring the most fuckable chicks I could imagine in a situation with lots of kinks and a neglected boy just like me. Turned out that the gentle way you voted for constantly turned into the best story of my life and the best moments of my "career" as an author.
Thank you for that.
And with that, Rose breaking the MCD, the Lynchwood family gets a whole new meaning in the story, based on the characters you let me create. Don't worry about Rose too much, but she will have a bit of a rough time ahead after we dealt with the volleyball chicks.
Right now I'm writing the part where Lakota, Tana and Susan get introduced due to poor little Rania in her quest to steal for Finn.
And I need a more outlandish fetish that Lakota (Zendaya Coleman) is into. You know, to mix things up. Think of girl-on-girl things for that, so don't worry about how Finn deals with it. It's more to humiliate other chicks with it. (Verbal humiliation is a given, so no need for including it in the poll) I mean, I planned for her to be a real bitch. ;)
Oh and let me know if I missed some nice kinks for her. ;)
How does Lakota humiliate her female sex partners during sex?
Oh, and the sex scene that comes soon, I'm pretty proud of. Letting the audience decide how the characters fuck is pretty awesome for me to get onto paper. I should deliver the biggest wet 'thank you' from Jasmine and let you know she hopes you enjoy her pictures. :)

For me, I'm still working on presenting you with more options for payment and I focus massivly on a more reliable pace of publishing chapters.
As you can see, I think every Friday and Saturday should work quite fine, and I already have material for at least a week ahead. In terms of my writing pace, I managed to roughly triple my writing time and I hope it stays that way, as well as polishing older chapters as well.
Can't wait to present you the next part of the chapter. Stay safe out there. Cheers. :)
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