Chapter 8
by Tnaisawesome
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It's Malena!
{if Time>=480}It's 3am.{elseif Time>=450}It's 2:30am.{elseif Time>=420}It's 2am.{elseif Time>=390}It's 1:30am.{elseif Time>=360}It's 1am.{elseif Time>=330}It's 12:30am.{elseif Time>=300}It's 12am.{elseif Time>=270}It's 11:30pm.{elseif Time>=240}It's 11pm.{elseif Time>=210}It's 10:30pm.{elseif Time>=180}It's 10pm.{elseif Time>=150}It's 9:30pm.{elseif Time>=120}It's 9pm.{elseif Time>=90}It's 8:30pm.{elseif Time>=60}It's 8pm.{elseif Time>=30}It's 7:30pm.{endif}
{if Drunkenness > 69}You stumble homewards, a bit drunker than you like. You suddenly notice Malena coming the other way, Jessica's colleague that you went on that disastrous date with a couple of years ago. You try to say hi, but she's with a guy, and they actively go out of their way to avoid you.
{else}
You suddenly notice a young woman coming your way. Her name is Malena. She's the barmaid you unsuccessfully dated - once - a couple of years ago. The 5'7 and lithe 22-year-old, with red hair and pale blue eyes, is wearing a hot little dress under a jacket, and it looks like she's on her way downtown for clubbing. {if Ring_active=true}God damn, she's so hot you want to tear her clothes off and fuck her right there and then.{else}God, damn it, how you wanted to fuck her...{endif}
{if Pics=true}
{if Ring_active=true}
{else}
{if Confidence >= 70}
{else}
{endif}
{endif}
{endif}
{if Ring_active=true}Her eyes light up when she sees you. You wonder if she remembers how you looked back then, just average with a bit of tummy. Now your clothes barely fit, stretching over your bulging muscles. You go over to her.
"Hi, Malena!" you say, smiling warmly.
"I can't believe it's you!" she says and runs her hand over your arm, "look at you!"
"Ah, yes," you say, so she does remember. That's weird. It doesn't seem to be consistent. You decide to play along.
"Been hitting the gym lately, yeah. But you, Malena, you look smashing!" you counter.
"Stop it!" she says, blushing. Her eyes fall on the ground, but she's smiling. This was not the mood when you two last met. You had been begging her for a date for months, but choked and the two of you did not hit it off at all.
"How have you been?" you ask.
"Oh... good, I guess," she replies. "I- I've been seeing this guy, and..."
You notice a guy in the distance saying goodbye to someone. He quickly comes up to you two.
{else}
"Hi Malena!" you say, smiling warmly.
She looks up and sees who it is. You almost can see her sigh, and it quickly takes you back to the mood when you two last met. You had been begging her for a date for months, but when she finally agreed, you choked, and the two of you did not hit it off at all. That was that.
"Oh, hi, it's you," she replies, looking back at a guy in the distance.
"How have you been?" you ask, and she shrugs. The guy says goodbye to someone and quickly comes up to you two.
{endif}
{if Ring_active=true}
"This is my boyfriend, I guess," she says and introduces you to the guy, Dave. He gives her a confused look, but doesn't say anything. There's nothing special about the guy. Average build, and nothing much to speak of regarding looks.
{else}
{if Confidence >= 70}
"This is my boyfriend, sort of," she says and introduces you to the guy, Dave. He gives her a confused look, but doesn't say anything. There's nothing special about the guy. Average build, and nothing much to speak of regarding his dress code. You notice a slight bulge, but nothing much.
{else}
"This is my amazing boyfriend Dave," she says and introduces you to the guy. He grins and shakes your hand. It hurts. He's towering over you both, and looks like he lives inside a gym. You can't help but let your eyes pass over a huge bulge in his pants, and your heart drops. You notice a gold ring on his finger, but she's not wearing one.
{endif}
{endif}
{if Ring_active=true}
"Nice to meet you," you say, and add, "lucky bastard!"
He chuckles, shrugs, then nods.
"You wouldn't chuckle if you knew I was already planning to be balls deep in your girlfriend by the end of the night," you think to yourself.
{else}
{if Trait=3}
"Nice to meet you, both," you say, giving a wink to Malena and a charming smile. "You look like the perfect couple."
"Aww, thank you," Malena says, and her boyfriend smiles back.
"Hey, do you want to come with us to the club?"
{else}
{if Confidence >= 70}
"Nice to meet you," you say, and add, "lucky bastard!"
He chuckles, shrugs, then nods.
"So Malena, I'm actually married now," you say and pull up a picture of your gorgeous wife.
"She's pretty! You're lucky too," Malena says and the guy nods.
"Nice rack!" he adds, and you chuckle.
"You have no idea!" you reply and feel your dick twitch as you think about your wife's knockers.
{else}
"Uh, hello," you say.
He chuckles.
"Who the fuck is this loser, Malena?"
"Fuck you!" you think to yourself, "and you too, Malena!"
{endif}
{endif}
{endif}
{if Ring_active=true}
You turn to Malena.
"So you're going downtown?"
"Yeah, to Inferno," she says enthusiastically, "It's amazing! The music is always great and the atmosphere is electric! You'd love it."
Is she really flirting with you in front of her boyfriend Dave?!
"Sounds like fun, but I should go home, really. How about we grab a coffee one day and catch up?"
"That would be nice," Malena says, a glimmer of hope in her eyes.
{else}
{if Trait=3}{else}
{if Confidence >= 70}
"It was nice seeing you again, Malena! Call me if this guy dumps you, I'll be your rebound!" you say and walk away with a grin.
You hear her giggling, and her boyfriend saying "what the hell was that all about?"
{else}
"Bye!" you say and walk on.
{endif}
{endif}
{endif}
{endif}
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