The Tale of The Barbarian
A medieval fantasy
Chapter 1
by
Snorlax
The sun was sinking behind the western hills when Crombie first saw the stone walls of Havenford. Eight feet of blue-furred muscle, white mane stirring in the evening breeze, he stood out against the green landscape like a living myth. His self-forged halberd rested across one broad shoulder, the massive round shield strapped to his back. The red-brown garment at his hips and simple leather belt did little to hide the powerful lines of his body.
Travelers on the road gave him a wide berth. Some stared. A few mothers pulled their children closer. Crombie was used to it. He kept his yellow eyes soft and his deep voice low whenever he spoke. Gentle, his human father had always told him. You’re big enough to break things without meaning to. So don’t.
The gate guard — a tired-looking human in a faded tabard — straightened as the towering Bugbear approached. His hand drifted toward his sword hilt, then stopped.
“State your business, traveler,” the man said, trying to sound braver than he felt.
Crombie stopped a respectful distance away and lowered the halberd so the blade pointed at the ground. “Just looking for a place to sleep and maybe some work, sir. My name is Crombie. I’m a blacksmith by trade… and I can swing this if anyone needs a strong arm.”
The guard’s eyes flicked over the blue fur, the white mane, the clawed feet, then the well-made weapons. After a long moment he gave a short nod.
“Havenford’s open to honest folk. Five copper for the gate toll. The Silver Hart’s the best inn — straight down the main road, can’t miss it. Keep your nose clean and we won’t have trouble.”
Crombie paid without complaint, offering a small, careful smile that showed just the tips of his sharp teeth. “Thank you. I appreciate the welcome.”
Inside the walls the town hummed with evening life. Lanterns were being lit. The smell of baking bread, horse manure, and woodsmoke filled the air. Humans of every age moved about their business, most giving the huge blue stranger a second — and sometimes third — glance.
Crombie ducked under the low beam of The Silver Hart’s doorway and stepped into the warm common room. The ceiling was only a foot or so above his head. He had to mind his horns and the butt of his halberd.
A stocky, gray-bearded human behind the bar looked up. His eyes narrowed slightly at the sight of the Bugbear, but he didn’t reach for a weapon.
“Room and meal?” the innkeeper asked gruffly.
“Yes, sir. If you have one that’ll fit me.”
Before the man could answer, a young woman stepped out from the kitchen carrying a tray of tankards. She froze for half a second when she saw Crombie.
Lila was nineteen, with soft auburn curls that framed a gentle face, warm brown eyes, and a generous figure her simple wool dress could not quite disguise. Full breasts pressed against the fabric, and her hips swayed with a natural softness as she walked. She was pretty in the quiet, everyday way that made Crombie’s ears twitch and something unfamiliar stir low in his belly.
She recovered quickly, offering a shy but genuine smile.
“Evening, traveler. You must be tired from the road. Would you like ale, or something warmer?”
Her voice was soft, sweet, and a little breathless. Crombie felt the tips of his claws flex against the haft of his halberd.
“Ale would be welcome,” he rumbled gently. “And whatever hot meal you have. I can pay.”
The innkeeper — Harlan, Crombie would later learn — watched the exchange with a protective father’s eye. He didn’t look openly hostile, but his stance said clearly: That’s my daughter. Be careful.
Crombie nodded politely to both of them, then added, “If you’ve any heavy work that needs doing — barrels, broken hinges, a wagon wheel — I’m a blacksmith. I’d be glad to earn my keep and a bit extra.”
Lila’s eyes lit up with quiet interest. Harlan grunted, considering.
“We’ll talk after you’ve eaten,” the innkeeper said. “Lila, show him to the corner table. The big one.”
As she led him across the room, Crombie had to duck again under another beam. Lila glanced back and gave a tiny, sympathetic smile.
“You’re very tall,” she said quietly, almost to herself.
“I am,” Crombie answered, voice low so only she could hear. “It makes some doors… interesting.”
She laughed — a soft, surprised sound — and the tension in Crombie's chest eased a little.
He settled at the sturdy corner table, setting his halberd and shield carefully against the wall. Lila brought him a tankard and a bowl of thick stew with fresh bread. When she set the tray down, her fingers brushed his blue-furred wrist for the briefest moment.
Crombie felt the touch like a spark.
“Thank you, Lila,” he said, using her name without thinking.
Her cheeks colored. “You’re welcome… Crombie.”
She lingered half a second longer than necessary before hurrying back to the bar under her father’s watchful eye.
Crombie ate slowly, aware of the stares, aware of the way Lila kept glancing his way when she thought no one was looking. For the first time since leaving home, the road ahead didn’t feel quite so lonely.
When the common room began to empty, Harlan approached the table.
“You still offering that strong back and blacksmith hands?” the innkeeper asked.
Crombie nodded. “Yes, sir.”
“Good. There’s a stuck barrel in the cellar and a broken hinge on the back door. Do those tomorrow and we’ll call your room and meals square for two nights. Maybe a few coppers extra if the work’s clean.”
Crombie’s ears perked. Honest work. A reason to stay a little longer. And a reason to see the shy, sweet girl with the warm eyes again.
“I’d be honored,” he said.
Harlan gave a short nod and turned away. Lila, wiping a table nearby, caught Crombie’s gaze and offered the smallest, shyest smile before her father’s voice called her back to the kitchen.
Crombie finished his ale, paid for the meal anyway (he had a little coin from his parents), and climbed the narrow stairs to the largest room the inn had. It was still cramped for him — he had to duck to avoid the ceiling beams — but the bed was sturdy and the window looked out over the quiet street.
He sat on the edge of the bed, the wood creaking under his weight, and ran a clawed hand through his white mane.
Lila.
He didn’t even know her last name yet. But the way she had looked at him — not with fear, not with disgust, but with shy curiosity — had done something to him. His body felt warmer than the stew and ale could explain. He shifted, aware of the heavy weight between his thighs, and took a slow breath.
Gentle, he reminded himself. Always gentle.
Tomorrow he would work. He would see her again. And maybe, if the world was kind, he would learn what that soft smile meant.
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