Jack the 19-year old Time Stopper
The power of Time Stop
Chapter 1
by Drezzy03
Jack stumbled upon the peculiar antique shop on the corner of the dusty town square. The sign above the door, barely legible, read "Curiosities and Treasures of the Ages." It looked like it hadn't seen a customer in months, but something about it called to him. The bell on the door jingled as he pushed it open, the dusty chime echoing through the musty room. The shop was crammed with a seemingly random assortment of items, each more intriguing than the last. His eyes scanned the shelves, taking in the various knick-knacks and oddities.
Among the clutter, a gleaming metal object caught his eye. It was a stopwatch, not unlike one you'd see in a cartoon or an old-timey movie, except this one had a peculiar glow to it. The face was a deep, mesmerizing blue, and the hands ticked away in a rhythmic pattern that seemed almost hypnotic. He reached out and picked it up, feeling its weight in his palm. It was heavier than he expected, and the moment his thumb brushed against the button, everything around him stood still. The chatter of the townsfolk outside the shop faded into a muffled silence. The dust motes hovered in the air, unmoving.
As you walk outside the shop, the world around you remains frozen in time. The townsfolk are stuck in various poses: a young couple mid-laugh, a child with their hand outstretched to catch a ball that hangs in the air, a group of teenagers frozen in the midst of a dance routine. Cars are stationary, their engines silent, and pigeons hover above the pavement. You realize the extent of your newfound power, and the endless opportunities it presents for mischief and pleasure. You look down at the stopwatch in your hand, its blue glow pulsing in the quiet afternoon light. The town is yours to explore and manipulate at your whim.
You then spot a beautiful lady, frozen as she's standing on the sidewalk waiting for the pedestrian traffic light to turn green.
What's next?
19-year old Jack Thatcher gets his hands on a time stopping watch. He uses it to cause mischief for his own pleasure and satisfaction.
Updated on Jun 25, 2025
Created on Jun 25, 2025
by Drezzy03
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