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Chapter 65
by FINN 0815
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Yeah, well... I think you'll like this chapter... But somehow a short introduction turned into a whole chapter. About Tammy. Maybe it's because I've grown some balls, but I feel much freer with Daddy's little girl now that I'm fully responsible for her. Maybe you'd like to tell me how you feel about it, but this time I'd even be happy if you just enjoyed the chapter. Have a good time.
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Chapter 64
"Tammy." The quiet voice penetrates the veil of my dreams into my consciousness.
"Mmmh, what..." I don't want to wake up. My dreams are so...
"Tammy, Honey. Wake up."
Gone. The beautiful dream dissolves into smoke as the world around me becomes clear and I lose the pictures in my head, only remembering the feeling I had. The perfect feeling. Sleepily, I rub my eyes as the first clear thoughts come to me.
Daddy is probably angry with me for not listening to the Sandman.
"Tammy."
"Sis?" I murmur and sit up. Groggy, I look around the dark room. Bright light penetrates through the gap in the hallway. "Did I oversleep?" I look at my sister, who smiles at me in a way I've never seen before. She seems a little rushed and very fidgety, and has a healthy pink blush on her cheeks as she gently rocks her upper body from side to side. She shakes her head.
"Your daddy wants to see you." I don't ask the time or why my older sister just came into my room like that. I'm a good little girl, and my elders are allowed to come into my room whenever they please. And besides, I don't want to think about adult things. I much prefer it when others think for me and I only have to worry about the one person who really matters.
"Daddy?" I swing out of bed and stand up so quickly that I almost fall back down, which makes Rose giggle. Her arms support me when she sees my nightgown.
"Mmmh. Yumm. Daddy definitely will like your cute little dress." I hug my sister as she puts her arm around me and leads me outside. "Come on now," she says, amused, but with that urgency in her voice that I know only Daddy can evoke in us girls. "Your father has something planned for us." I look up at my big sister curiously, but don't ask what she means. It's not my place to say what happens to me. I tug at Rose's blue shirt and hear the soft, suppressed moan that I also recognize from my own mouth when I think of the only man in my life.
"Sis, I want to go to Daddy."
Big sis Rose leads me safely downstairs to the living room, and my heart fills with warmth and security.
"Daddy!" With my arms outstretched, I want to run toward him, but Rose holds me back by the shoulder.
"Your daddy's talking to his wife," she informs me, and I pout.
"But I want to go to Daddy now." Rose giggles, then strokes my cheek.
"Good girl. I like you much better this way." And I too like me so much better like Daddy wants me. So I watch as Daddy gives me a warm look, but then turns back to Jasmine, the two standing in the middle of the room.
My oldest sister, queen of the house, former queen, stands shyly in front of him, all greatness forgotten, her gaze lowered as he strokes her cheek and speaks to her in a calm but determined voice, her own voice uncertain and fast. Like me, Jasmine is only an empty shell, ready to be filled how Daddy likes.
"...wanted to make clear that I'm always ready to serve you and she said..." Jasmine rambles on feverishly to make Daddy understand.
Silly girl. Daddy will understand better than girls do. Daddy is smart and strong and powerful and...
My legs press tightly together and I feel my lower regions throbbing as I watch Daddy grab Jasmineat her jaw and press his lips on hers. It's like electricity in my body, and I have such a lust for him that even my bottom tingles and twitches slightly as I watch my oldest sister sink into his arms, her knees going weak, and she has to hold on to him as he dominates her.
"You're my wife," he growls with this dark undertone in his voice that makes my pussy tingle and my ass throb. I lick my lips, it seems all my holes scream for him to take me. But I wait.
Daddy will fuck me when I'm his obedient little girl. Good girls wait for their Daddy to take them.
"Yes, hubby. Your obedient wife. I'm obedient. I promise." Jasmine hangs limply in his arms, hanging on his every word as if he gives meaning to her life. I understand her.
"And what do good and obedient wives?" Jasmine doesn't have to think twice.
"Everything that pleases their husband." His hands dig deep into her breasts, making my eldest sister whimper like a small child. My finger moves to my lips, and I kiss it as my hand presses between my legs. I hope so much that he notices my chic black nightgown, but Daddy is so strong and powerful. I could never manipulate him, so I wait in silence that he sees me. Then he turns to me and Rose, and I take a step towards him.
"Rose." My lower lip begins to tremble. I feel hot and cold at the same time, and it's like a fantasy dream to see Rose quickly but carefully step to his side while me heart sinks and me little nipples grow stiff and pointy. She stops next to the two of them and looks at Daddy. He moves Jasmine and places her in front of the other girl. "This is my sister, honey," he says to his wife. "I like her." He looks at Rose. "Very fucking much." And back to Jasmine. His hand caresses her neck, his thumb strokes her skin, tingling like mine would do if he touched me.
If only he would touch me. Please, Daddy, touch me and... No. I will be good. I wait and be a good girl.
"You obey me" he commands his wife.
"Yes, Hubby. I obey."
Yes, Daddy. I obey.
"Look each other in the eyes." The two girls do what Daddy asks and I try to follow the adults. He is so wonderful. We can feel so safe with him.
Without him, I'm scared. With him, I'm safe.
Tammy Lynchwood. +3 (PS +56)
Daddy steps between them and makes them hold hands. Then he kisses Jasmine gently on the cheek while massaging her ass. M yown but cheeks tingle slightly and I feel a dim throbbing deep in me, radiating trough my ass and my innder self while my pulsatung pussy lips rub against eachother.
"You obey me. And if I'm not around, you obey Rose as if her word was mine. Understood?"
"Yes, Hubby." Jasmine doesn't hesitate for a second. She's a good wife to Daddy, and I hope I'm as good a daughter to him, obeying everything he says with a smile and wet holes. "She is my best bro, and I trust her more than you." This makes Jasmine look at him for help. I Daddy would say such things to me, I would start to cry.
Never! I will never be such a bad girl and disobey the peace in his home! Never be a bad girl Tammy!
"Hubby, I'm sorry! I tried my best to be..."
"You're not capable of living an independent life... Jasmine." No cute nickname for her. I see the pain in her eyes. The frantic hope to show him that she will behave. "Rose is. So you listen to her. Understood?"
"Yes, Hubby." Jasmine looks at Rose. "Rose, I'll listen to you if you tell me something. I'm sorry." My sister opens her mouth, but Daddy is faster.
"And Rose. Jasmine is my silly little wifey. She may not be as independent as you are, but she deserves a second chance after submitting to me. Don't you agree?" I feel something on my leg. Mom... Puppy Mom has laid down by my legs without saying a word, curled up on the floor, and rested her chin on her hands while her almost naked bud presses against my naked legs. She watches her children in fascination while Daddy dominates us girls. "I need my wifey to be submissive within the family, but you also have to understand that outside of the family, she represents me as the head of this house, okay? She is subordinate to you, but that also means you bear the responsibility to protect this family when I'm not there. Look around." Rose, without saying a word, looks at me and Mom. My face heats up as I realize what Daddy thinks of me and I feel my black panties getting wet.
He knows I'm not good for being smart, I realize, and am... happy. I'm lovin' it. To be free of all these things and only allowed to live the life Daddy wants me to. And I'm lovin' it soooo much to be Daddy's empty little thing. I love it because now I can be happy with him and not being such a mean bad girl anymore. Thinking easy things and being free feels soooo goood. Thank you Daddy.
Maybe it's the time, so early in the morning, or my dream, which I can't remember. Or maybe, definitely, it's my Daddy that makes me happy with being a silly little girl. I know I'm capable of more, speaking, thinking, and planning. But I don't want to. I want to be his good little girl and make him happy.
"Tammy and Mom can no longer take care of themselves. And as of today, I have two girlfriends: Bella and Lisa. I have to provide for and protect this family and the people I love and care for, and I need your help with that."
The thought of being helpless, small, and weak makes me wet. I want that so much. Nothing can happen to me in the arms of my strong, protective daddy. And Rose is...
"She was a monster." Rose's voice is quiet, hesitant, but no one dares to interrupt her. "All these years." She sounds sad. "To me. To you." Jasmine says nothing, knowing that it's not important what she thinks.
Daddy decides for us from now on. We're nothing without Daddy.
Tammy Lynchwood. +1 (PS +57)
Daddy approaches Rose, but doesn't let go of Jasmine's hand, pulling the sisters closer together. I can clearly see that there's no anger in Rose and only regret in Jasmine. Daddy has them both under control.
"We're a family, Rose. You, me, Tammy, Michelle. And Jasmine too. You know..." He suppresses a grin, but only nearly. "You're largely responsible for me being able to improve my life so much. And I'd like to ask you to trust me with the decisions I'm going to make regarding our family." When my sister turns to my Daddy, it's me who sucks in a loud breath.
"Are you saying I'm the problem?" My lower lip is no longer trembling with desire, but with worry. I don't want my family to fight. Fighting scares me. I want Daddy to make sure everyone gets along.
But Daddy just grins as Rose walks over to him, clenches her fingers into a fist, and playfully punches him in the chest. Then she puts a finger to his chest.
"If you say something stupid like I don't support you ever again, I'll punch you so hard in the face that your wifey here will only be able to feed you with a tube for the next few weeks," she growls with a deadly smirk. Then she turns to her sister. "I don't forgive you for what you did. Not enough time has passed for that." She looks back at Daddy. "Not yet." Back to Jasmine. "But I won't attack you when we're alone, and when... your hubby is here, we'll work together to get this... thing working." Jasmine looks questioningly at Daddy, asking him what she should answer.
"Thank your sister and promise her that you'll earn her trust." Like me, Jasmine can't help but obey our leader.
"Thank you, Sister, for helping me serve my hubby. I will earn your trust and help you keep this family happy." She hesitates briefly. "Thank you." Rose hesitates briefly.
"You're welcome." In the end, the situation is so uncomfortable that even I'm glad when Rose turns to her brother one last time. And then I press the heels of my hands, both of them, into my crotch and press down on my lap, rubbing my hands over the black fabric of my dress and nibbling on my lower lip as I watch my sister massage her breasts and moan softly. "I see you've been fiddling with the M... phone again."
"The way you all look." Daddy walks up to his girl and kisses her on the lips, long and tenderly. It's so nice to see Daddy getting what he wants. Back then, I would have been surprised to see my siblings kiss and grope each other, but now everything is so beautiful.
"So..." Rose also nibbles on her lip and forces her hands to lower. "Master Finn." He chuckles.
"Master Finn likes."
"And what does Master Finn like?"
"His girls." Rose steps next to Jasmine, who waits politely to see what her husband wants from her.
"And how does Master Finn want his girls?"
While the two are kissing, I'm just happy. Happy to have a family that isn't as icy as it was back then. Happy that Mom, panting at my feet, no longer favors one person over everyone else. Happy that Jasmine has found someone who shows her that life isn't just about work, but about something more. And I'm glad that Daddy is here to teach us all about it. Because I know we wouldn't be capable of something so complicated.
So I'm glad that I'm a good girl who will surely get permission to come today.
Best of all, through my caring daddy, whom I love more than anything.
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The next chapter is about Michelle and Rose, and Tammy will be friends with her mother. I should be mad at myself for messing up my plan, but to be honest, I'm glad I'm still putting so much emphasis on character development and not jumping straight into sex. Especially since I only have 1,000 to 2,000 words instead of 4,000. I think the balance between sex and plot is okay. What do you think?
After that, though, there will be a lot of sex. As I said, I'm trying to make it a bit more pornographic, especially with Michelle and Jasmine. Rose will end the whole thing with a really cheesy scene.
Thanks to everyone who liked the last few chapters. I was surprised to get 20 likes in one day. My core readership seems to be staying stable, and I'm very, very grateful for that.
As for Tammy, she swears she'll be a good girl, even with her low Freedom Score (which I'll introduce later in her chapter), but she'll surely fill the rest of her progress score by admitting that she actually wants to be a good little girl.
This point is important to me. I know I'm not very consistent with some girls' character development. There are many reasons for this, and often it feels to me like a stuttering curve on a graph, if you see what I mean. Not very consistent, but the transformation comes in spurts. Then, sometimes, I set the girls back a bit. We'll certainly see that with the volleyball bitches.
There are two reasons for this. First, it gives me the opportunity to cover several kinks at once. So, breaking the girls and accepting them at the same time. But later, when some time has passed in the story, the realization of what it means to follow the path really sinks in, and the resistance returns. When I started, I was aware of this, and I wanted to write the story that way. But I also know that it can sometimes be confusing when a girl rebels even though her PS has already progressed. The other reason is that the polls (and my skills as a writer) give me the freedom to make decisions on the fly. Like the polls about Tammy, for example. But the volleyball bitches are also a good example.
At the end of the day, hopefully, one can say that following the MCD path is a very special adventure that none of the girls have experienced before. Some are fine with it, others actively fight against Finn, others just fight against their path and seek Finn's help.
So, with Tammy and the other girls, I'll take the liberty of moving them further along the path, but still include obstacles and hurdles for them (and Finnas well) to overcome, which may lead to a slight decline in their behavior.
For example, I plan to bring Tammy closer to Jasmine, as mother and daughter, but this may lead to its own challenges for the girls, especially with Jasmine's path, which can also lead her into the outside world. If the poll had been about barefoot and pregnant in the kitchen, the two would get along better, have less friction, and I would have placed other obstacles in Tammy's path.
And hey, I actually wanted to do something with Apaches in this chapter too, because of the AH-64 Apache, you know, Chapter 64? Well. The Big Mac is my absolute favorite burger, but here in Germany, we only have basic fast food chains. It was a real highlight that we once had KFC in our area. In any case, the next chapters are fast food-related.
I'm lovin' it. ;)
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