.....Hyper Miranda

You know what? fuck it. Alex seemed to be getting really greedy. Apparently being better than the other 4 billion women on earth wasn't enough for her. she just had to be better than her sister. Well then that's the one thing she would never get. at least until she got over her envy.

As long as Alex is obsessed with being better than Miranda, Miranda will be better than Alex in every possible way she will be physically more attractive than her and more skilled both physically and mentally at every task. when ever Alex surpasses her sister by being better at a skill or more attractive in any way, Miranda will become twice as good at whatever category. This will repeat until she is better than Alex. The prior rule about Alex being better than her sister no longer exists.

As he finished his thought he herd a moan from where Miranda had been and he quickly maneuvered himself to the point where he could stand and get a better view. John could see as she grew and improved. he could almost hear her getting smarter, better at all kinds of things that Alex had cared about but she hadn't. He picked up alex bridal style and moved her far enough away that she wouldn't be disturbed. and when he turned around he could only think 1 thing. "Ho, ly, shit!"

There was Miranda, standing in front of him. and she was incredible. she stood at least 30 feet tall, with muscle definition that would require decades of work for even the most gifted of people, tits that hung down easily to her waist and an ass that was easily visible even from the front. this was combined with an insanely trim waist and perfectly shaped thighs to create an unbelievable figure. not to mention her impossibly smooth and radiant skin, her completely even limbs and her beautiful, now raven hair.

The changes didn't stop there either. looking up he could see her face. nearly perfect features all the way through and beautiful purple eyes that almost seemed to glow despite it being the middle of the day. Once he escaped his trance John realized she had been trying to get his attention. "Hello? anyone in there?" she seemed amused. "Sorry" he responded, unusually sheepish. "You see something you like handsome?" John knew she was teasing him now. "Definitely!" He responded a little too quickly. Miranda giggled "And you wouldn't happen to have anything to do with this, would you?" she questioned. Feigning guilt John responded with a hesitant "......maybe". "Well in that case." she said, licking her lips, " how about you come over here so I can say thank you"

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