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Chapter 11 by ziechenheisen ziechenheisen

What do you decide?

Here and now

You walk across the street and approach her.

"Hi Sarah!"

She straightens up at your voice. As soon as she recognizes you she turns beet red.

"Hi John" She avoids meeting your gaze.

"I assume you heard about my new job?"

"Yes." She looks directly at you now. "Is it my turn?"

"Yes it is!" You smile at her palpable nervousness. "How about we go to your room?"

She brightens. "OK!" She looks visibly relieved to not be inspected out on the open street.

"My parents aren't home." She explains as you enter her house and climb the stairs to her room.

"Why don't you take off your clothes?" you suggest as you enter the room behind her, closing the door and setting the clipboard on her dresser.

Sarah quickly discards her hat, gloves and sweater but begins blushing again as she slowly lifts the tank top over her head revealing an worn looking light-blue bra covering her breasts. After dropping the tank top on the floor, she unbuttons and pulls down her jeans. Her white panties are slightly sweat stained from her yard work. You feel yourself getting even harder than you already were. Without waiting for her to finish undressing, you put an arm around her bare waist and pull her close.

"We'll start with basic oral technique. Have you ever kissed anyone?"

She somehow manages to turn even redder. "Yes. A boy at school. Don't tell my mom!"

"I don't see any reason to mention it." You begin kissing her passionately. She responds, timidly at first, but with increasing enthusiasm. She's surprisingly good at it and you suspect she's had more practice than she's willing to admit. As you kiss, you slide your hands up her hips, across her stomach and around to her back. Undoing her bra, you pull it away and grasp her tits in both hands. They're the perfect size, not too big, nor small. You feel Sarah's hard nipples press against your palms as you squeeze. She gasps and pulls away from your kiss.

"I... Sorry, I.. No one else has ever touched them before."

"It's OK. Quite understandable." You quickly strip off your shirt, shorts and boxers. Your hard cock springs out, fully erect. Sarah gasps again, transfixed by it.

"It's so big! Is that because of me?"

Smiling, you nod. "You're very cute"

She blushes again. "Can I touch it?"

"Of course. I need to check your handjob proficiency."

Sarah timidly reaches out with one hand, touching and then grasping you. Her hand is cool on your cock and you groan. This is clearly outside her experience and you encourage her to stroke you, telling her what feels good. Before long she's jerking you off vigorously. As she pleasures you, you continue fondling her tits and running your hands across her body. You grab her ass, sliding your hands inside her panties and pulling them down. Sarah may not be experienced, but the sight of her naked, innocent body and the feel of her hand on your cock are enough and you come, sending your seed splashing across her arms and stomach. You sit down on her bed to recover and she sits beside you, covering her now exposed pussy with her hands.

"Is there always so much... stuff?" She asks.

"Usually, for a girl as beautiful as you."

After a moment, she whispers "Are we done?" You can't tell for certain, but you think you detect a hint of disappointment in her voice.

"Oh no, we're just getting started." You begin kissing her again. This time, she responds eagerly and her arms wrap around your neck as you push her back onto the bed. You reach between her legs and run a finger across her slit, sliding over her clit. She moans into your mouth. You slide your finger back and forth twice more, each time eliciting a moan, before sliding it into her increasingly wet pussy.

"Ooooh, oh, oh." She breaks off your kiss, arching her head back as she moans. Still sliding your finger in and out of her, you begin kissing down her body, starting with her neck, moving to her shoulders and at last capturing a breast in your mouth.

"Oooh, yes, yes, yes!" The dual stimulation of your finger and mouth causes Sarah to moan and writhe about on the bed, her hands clutching at the sheets. You add another finger to her slit and switch to her other breast.

"Yesyesyes! Oooh, God yessssss" You feel her body become suddenly taut as she comes, her body arcing up against yours. She collapses back to the bed, and you lay beside her, kissing her gently. After a few minutes, she turns to you.

"Wow. I had no idea it could be like that!"

You smile and kiss her again. "Still not quite done yet."

You get up from the bed and kneel between her legs, spreading them apart. The smell of her aroused pussy is intoxicating. Propped up on the bed with her hands, she looks down at you.

"What are you do- Oooh!" You begin licking her pussy, tasting her juices and running your tongue across her slit. She immediately collapses back on the bed moaning and writhing. You flick your tongue across her clit and her moans become screams. Her legs start to close, threatening to crush your head. You can tell she's getting close again, so you stop and stand up. Her protests end abruptly when she feels your cock head press against her entrance. You slide into her virgin slit, feeling her hymen give way. Sarah gives a yelp of pain. She is incredibly tight and you're glad that you came earlier. You begin moving your hips back and forth, sliding in and out of her. After the initial shock of losing her maidenhood, Sarah quickly joins in, moving her hips up to meet your thrusts. You lie down on her, feeling her soft tits against your chest and kissing her mouth. The room is quickly filled with the sound of your bodies coming together. Your moans and groans mingle together as you fuck her.

"Oooh, yes, yes, oh please, YESSSS!" Sarah screams as she comes again. Her vaginal muscles convulse around you, pushing you over the edge. You flood her womb with your cum, feeling it spill out around your cock.


"Well, how did I do?" Sarah smiles shyly at you.

"Let's see." You retrieve the clipboard from the dresser and look down at her, considering. Your cum dripping from her slit, mingled with her virginal blood, is incredibly sexy. You briefly consider making her pregnant, but you're not sure how far the powers of the Female Body Inspector extend and you don't want to ruin her life. Under any other circumstances if she got pregnant her parents would probably disown her. Still, you would like to see her again...


Name: Sarah Sullivan Age: 24

Attractiveness: 8/10

Breasts: 9/10

Mouth: 7/10 - Oral Proficiency: 6/10

Vagina: 8/10 - Vaginal Proficiency: 6/10

Ass: 8/10 - Anal Proficiency: __/10

Handjob Proficiency: 3/10

Vocalization: 8/10

________________: __/10

________________: __/10

________________: __/10

Additional Notes: Additional training by a Female Body Inspector recommended as well as regular inspections.

Inspector's Signature: ____________________________


"Not as good as I was hoping" Sarah frowns.

"But your natural assets are excellent, I'm sure with time and training you'll be amazing" you encourage her.

"Will you help train me?" she asks hopefully?

You stifle a laugh at the absurdity of the request. "Of course!"


As you descend the stairs, Sarah following behind you, you see Fiona and Katharine at the bottom.

"Are you alright Sarah?" Fiona asks. "We heard screaming."

The twins' clothing conceals most of their curves, but after what you just saw of Sarah you're confident they're worth inspecting. The question is, now or later? As you ponder the question you hear the sound of their mother calling from the front door.


Inspect the twins now or later?

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