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Chapter 23
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elmerstories
Do you accept the responsibility, or do you have other plans?
Hell no! You want to intrude on their date!
You feel intoxicated by Melanie's milk and voluptuous presence. There's still so much you want to do with her... So while it's sweet and touching that your new parents want to go on a date, you're definitely coming along. It'll be the perfect opportunity to make your relationship with Melanie a little more public!
"Actually, can I come along with you guys?"
Melanie and Greg both look surprised, then uncertain. Your "father" clears his throat, putting on an unconvincing smile as he gets ready to dissuade you.
"Um, that might not be for the best, Son... Your mother and I need our alone time! Besides, now that Hannah has her brother back, it would be good if you got to know her a little."
Fair enough, you think. I'll have to bring out the big guns.
You shake your head sadly, then look to Melanie. "Please let me come, Mommy," you say, giving her your best puppy-dog eyes. "If you leave me here, who will breastfeed me?"
Melanie shivers. Thanks to all the mental rewiring, it doesn't take long for her common sense to be overridden by her deep-seated desire to please you.
"He's right, Dear," she begins, facing her husband down. "We haven't seen him in ages, and we should spend as much time with him as possible. We can just hire a babysitter, like we usually do!"
Greg sputters for a moment, then gives in. "I... I suppose so, yes." He clears his throat again. "Sure, of course you can come along. We usually go somewhere pretty fancy for date night, though... Do you have anything more formal to wear?"
You do, but it's back at your apartment... Along with Erica, and nearly all of your other possessions. This might be a good time to grab some of that stuff and move it to your new household.
"Sure do," you answer with a bright smile. "I just have to go grab it from my place."
Greg nods, then looks at his watch. "Well, I have to get a move on. Melanie can bring you wherever you need to go, right Love?" When she nods happily, he continues. "We'll buy you anything else you need, of course."
Melanie clasps her hands, delighted at how this is turning out. "I can't believe we were being so selfish... This dinner should be a celebration for John! Our son is back, for God's sake!"
Greg chuckles at her enthusiasm. "Yes, yes... You've got a point, Dear. See you soon!"
Melanie hops to her husband's side as he grabs his suitcase, giving him a kiss on the cheek. "Safe trip, Dear."
Greg nods, stealing another kiss while you dig into the toast that was laid out by Melanie. You feel the urge for another kiss yourself... One that will top anything Greg gets to experience.
The moment your new father heads out the door, Melanie seems eager to start planning. "I'll make a reservation for three... I know this beautiful place near the bay--"
While you're happy to see Melanie so excited, you stop her short. "Mommy, I want another kiss, please. Like you gave Dad, only... Deeper."
"Oh, did Mommy make you jealous?" You can't tell whether her concerned expression is real or sarcastic, but nevertheless she hops back onto your lap. "I'm sorry... Here..."
Her lips and tongue meet yours, more passionately than ever; she has a faux-pas to make up for, after all, and Greg isn't here to make things awkward. Your mind goes fuzzy as she leans into you, ignoring your hands as they snake their way up her thighs and toward her perfect ass.
How do you prepare for this evening?
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The Choice
The ability to do whatever you want—in 3 different ways.
Control the minds and lives of anyone you encounter with any command or suggestion, or become a nonexistent apparition and enjoy having fun with people who aren't even aware of your presence. Or become...both?
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