How do Gwen and Max react to Heart Burn?

Gwen is terrified, Max is shocked.

Chapter 5 by Kingofthefutamonsters Kingofthefutamonsters

You see Gwen and Granpa Max eating pizza. Grandpa Max's eyes go wide as he sees Heart Burn. Gwen screems at the sight of her. You explain everything to them, from what the watches are to what you plan to do with them.

Since you are all adults and not 10 year old kids, Max sees no reason to hide his past. "Since you all trust me with your secret, its only fair I trust you with mine. I was once apart of a secret organization called the Plumbers. We faught alien threats to earth and kept it a secret from the general public to stop mass hysteria. Well eventually the American government found out about us and gave us an ultimatum. Become a branch of the CIA, or we couldn't continue our work. Besides my old partner Phil, we all chose to retire instead of becoming subservient to the whims of the government. If you really intend to become superheros, we'll need to fetch some tech from mount Rushmore."

You smile. "I had a feeling I was going to like you Max." Ben is a grinning mess. "I told you he was the coolest grandpa ever, but I didn't know he was this cool. I know exactly what job I want. I'm going into the family business. The plumbing business." Max shakes his head. "And what happens if you lose your watches? Then you won't be able to get a career. You need a regular job to be your fallback plan." Ben sighs. "Aw man."

You speak up. "Going straight from hear to mount Rushmore will alert the US government. We should continue the road trip as normal until we get close enough that going there won't attract any unwanted attention." Max nods. "Smart thinking." Gwen sighs. "As if this family wasn't weird enough."

You all have pizza for dinner before you head to bed. Seeing the bedroom, theres no way Max isn't expecting you all to fuck like rabbits. Him putting up a sound proof barrier between him and you guys only prooves this fact. Ben sends Heart Burn to the pocket dimension inside the watch. He then cuddles up to Jen in the top bunk. You cuddle up to Annie in the bottom Bunk. Gwen sleeps on the couch.

The next day you wake up to leftover pizza for breakfast. You'll have something more nutritious for lunch. After washing up, you, Ben and Jen train to run out of danger quickly and to accurately throw stuff as a distraction. Heart Burn and Annie train in combat. Max is making sure this place is a good spot to train without getting spotted, then he gos to buy lunch. Gwen is on her laptop trying to pretend the rest of you don't exist.

A few hours later Max returns with some natto and beef liver. A little bit more palitable then live worms but not by much. After that you have some free time to talk to everyone. You go to Heart Burn. If you can't get her to fall in love with you, the watch will force you to go out on a quest to go find her true love. So this is really important. You take a deep breath and walk up to her. "Hey Heart Burn. You did great during todays training." She nods. "Thanks. You did good too. You can sprint really fast." You smile. "Thanks. Hey, want to go a little deeper into the woods? That way we can get to know each other a little better." She smiles at you brightly. "OK!"

(So the plan is for everyone to stay in the woods until Heart Burn, wildmutt, diamond head and there predators all join the harem. Maybe Gwen too depending on how slow burn I want her romance to be. This is probably going to take awhile so hope you enjoy the woods as a setting.

Then after that they're going to spend awhile with in the city for XLR8, Grey Matter, 4 Arms and Stinkfly and all there preditors. Then Ripjaws, Upgrade and Ghostfreak in the next area. Then once the full classic starting line up have been introduced and seduced, the story will go alot faster. So for awhile the story is going to be on a halt for character development and sex sceans, but after that it should speed up again.

Oh yeah, so I'm planning for Ben to go through the same life lessons as in the original series. So hes still going to be a major character in this story even though hes not the main character anymore. The worst part about classic Ben 10 is that Ben kept having to learn the same lessons over and over and that hes still the same litte shit at the the beginning of the series as he is at the end.

So in this story hes going to go through the same life lessons as the classic series but more mature version's of the lessons since hes an adult. On episodes where he relearns a lesson it will be more proof that the lesson sank in then him forgetting hes learned it before. Then by the end of the classic series he'll have the personality he has in Alien Force if I ever make it that far.

These books take a long time to make any progress not only because I get bord of them, but also because I'm more of a character wrighter. I don't want to continue a plot until all the characters have had some character development. Also the sex sceans themselves put the character development and the plot to a complete halt. Yet they're kinda the point of these books and I wouldn't like these stories nearly as much without them. I enjoy writing these books alot since they alow me to expirence these franchises I love all over again but in a more mature way. I'd never want to remove the sex sceans.

Sorry about the rant. I was just feeling emotional and wanted to share my feelings on my books and my experience wrighting all of them. Please get plenty of sleep, drink plenty of water and be kinder to 1 another.)

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