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Chapter 86
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FINN 0815
What's next?
Good news. Next chapter tomorrow (Saturday). And on Sunday another one. And at least two polls.
God, that was a shitty time. And it's not over yet. But almost there, I hope. Completely messed up tight now but at home, mostly in bed and in front of the pc.
Anyway, I've already written two complete 4,000-word chapters. All on Skittle night with Sage and Sofia. I'm like Stalin/Putin when it comes to delays and problems (illness and writer's block). I throw bodies into the fire until the problem disappears or I have no bodies left. So I turned one chapter into three that I like better. More stuff, more details, but longer reading time for the evening.
I also worked on one, two, maybe three polls while I was sick so we could finally have a survey again. One of that today.
The plan for next week(s) is as follows: polish and post two chapters on Saturday and Sunday. Think about a third poll for Sunday. Finish a bonus chapter that already has 4,000 words but will probably grow to about 6,000. (Including a masturbation scene between Rose and Lisa).
As for the near future, I'll have to prioritize my health (mental and physical). Besides, I still have a lot to do for my family. Things are a bit chaotic there right now.
Finishing the third chapter (the last part of the game night with Ryan and friends) is taking a lot of energy. Once that's done, things should go faster (and easier for me/less tiring). I basically have the whole date with Bella in my head.
Today's poll is about spending the tokens. Invisibility (3200 Tokens) has already been decided in a former poll. I definitely want it to make things a bit more spacey. It will also help Rania with her path (and unlocking the storyline).
That means we still have 1600 tokens left, and I have the following ideas for how to use them.
Exhibitionism turns on 400 Tokens.
The subject is turned on when people or cameras watch it.
Note: Good for Lisa and her future in cute (and a bit naughty) gaming. But for the Volleyball Bitches (and other bad girls) too in more sinister terms. Good in combination with Sensitive Sex parts.
Choice of sexuality 400 Tokens
Let the user specify which gender the subject is attracted to. Only Men. Only Woman. Both.
Note: To make it easier for the harem to stick together. Make them all Bi. Maybe, If I can make it happen, I will include a pure lesbian option in an update later with only Finn as a male preference. "I like girls... but I looove him..." Although it would be interesting to see what happens to a girl (Lynn, for exampl,e who is on a dare with Finn) when suddenly her interest in Boy's vanishes... and when she is in bed with a hottie hits her again while she become 100% straight.
Extremely Sensitive Vagina II 800 Tokens.
The subject is always horny, and the production of vaginal fluid is massively stimulated. Always wet and horny, the subject's blood pressure drops significantly, and they are more often ready and willing for sex.
Note: Would come extremely handy in, well, all future encounters of sex. Can be used in good terms on tight Tammy and cunty Candice. Most usable I think. And I want to make her drool between her legs. Good combination with orgasm denial.
Extremely Sensitive Breasts II 900 Tokens.
Touching the subject's breasts is now just as stimulating as vaginal penetration without perks and can lead to orgasms. Thinking about breasts is just as stimulating for the subject as other erotic thoughts and can lead to desire for sex.
Note: Can be useful for threesoms and fousoms in the future. Getting her of by licking her tits (Rose, duh!) while fucking another girl. Can be used wickedly by making her think of her breasts while out in public.
Extremely Sensitive Mouth I 400 Tokens.
Oral stimulation of the lips and inner mouth area results in sensations similar to vaginal penetration without perks, making kissing more enjoyable for the subject.
Note: I want to include this, mostly for Michelle, but as a general improvement on threesomes and so on. I want to make one of my girlfriends (Bella or Lisa) really good at sucking cock. (Rose is focused on tits already. Only need to decide if Lisa will become an anal pro or Bella).
As always, this will be an multible choice poll where I focus on spending the most amount of tokens.
Note: In the next three chapters, there will be a number of new Tokens from the group to start the next round of spending.
So what do you want?
https://strawpoll.com/PKgle9pN4Zp
For the next polls.
In the bonus chapters, I introduced the buying of some sex toys and introduced other objects for the introduction of the MCD Shop. This will hopefully come in the near future. Mostly, I want the already established characters (Rose, Tammy, Jasmine, Michelle) to have a special object we (me and you) can interact with, in addition to their new situations in Act II. This could be a future poll.
Sage and Sophie are at PS-50 (Maybe even PS+0 If I manage). So we need to specialise their path at least, if not sexualise it. So there will be a poll.
Same for Ryan but this will be (surely) slightly different or, at least, speciualised with a polly by you.
I try to come up with some more polls in the next days/weeks. "Problem" here is I already know how I want to continue, what will happen in the story and we need to forstly get there for you to decide how things will play out.
I added a new perk and would suggest of you, thinking of the next perks to buy, more from an survival point of view in an histiole enviroment. Hence the invisibility and the new perk. But we can use the already existing perks for this as well.
I added some new "toys" for the MCD shop as well to finally get this started. I would love to hear your suggestions on that.
Note: Prices here aren't final for now.
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