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Chapter 2 by qwer0717 qwer0717

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From Feminist Activist to Tradwife girlfriend

Plot summary:

An unattractive nepo kid named Jack slowly corrupts a feminist liberal activist named Sarah who is protesting his father's company with mind control technology. Using this technology, he eventually transforms Sarah into his misogynistic stepford wife girlfriend who is obsessed with taking care of her man, pleasing him sexually, and helping him have sex and corrupt other women.

The pace of the transformation is pretty fast. It is a four chapter story, with most chapters between 1500-2500 words.

Key observations:

  • Sudowrite is a useful tool for writing because it doesn't have the same restrictions on sex acts and nudity. I encountered a couple of blocks, but given the content I was able to be quite explicit.
  • Some of the scene transitions aren't great: I would have given this a couple more iterations, but I have a word limit on my account. I might revise if I get feedback in the comments.

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