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Freeing Your Corrupted Soul
With it being a few days from his anniversary, James is doing everything he can to make his anniversary gift for Sarah perfect. He's at the church where he and Sarah got married all those years ago. He looks around, happy to see the church looks almost exactly like it did on his wedding day. But there is a round, plump piece of art that also draws his attention.

The woman is oblivious that the supreme ruler of everything is staring lustfully at her ass. She's busy on the phone, ensuring that everything will be ready for the upcoming wedding ceremony. But even if she did know James was staring at her ass, she wouldn't mind. After all, a voluptuous body like hers should be seen and enjoyed by everyone around her.
"That's great. I know our Master will be looking forward to meeting you. Thank you again. Goodbye." The nude woman hangs up her phone. Her exposed breasts sway as she turns around to face her Master.

"Master. Good news. Many of the world's beautiful and sexiest women are coming. They all want to be here to see you relive your special day and swear their complete loyalty to you."
"That's great, Ava. And the entire ceremony will be streamed live and recorded, correct?"
"Yes, Master. All of that will get set up later today." Ava's eyes are filled with lust as she takes a few steps closer to James and kneels before him. She licks her lips as she stares hungrily at his crotch.

"Master. I know it's not my place to ask. I know I'm nothing more than a worthless whore for you. But since I've been doing such a good job helping you get everything ready for your special day, can I get a reward? Please?" It's taking all of Ava's willpower not to reach her hands out and unzip James' pants. There's no greater crime a pathetic slut like her can do than doing something without Master's permission. Fortunately for her, James goes to unzip his pants himself.
Just as James touches his zipper, he hears the doors of the church opening behind him. Turning around, James is shocked to see Sarah entering the building. Turning to Ava, James says, "Ava. Leave us."
While disappointed to be interrupted, Ava obeys James' command. She gets up off the floor and rushes out of the room, leaving her Master alone with his wife.
Facing Sarah again, James panics as he tries to figure out what to say as Sarah rushes toward him. "Sarah... W-What are you doing here? I... I... Uhh... So... My anniversary gift to-"
Sarah places her hand on James' arm. She looks at her husband. Her eyes aren't filled with hate or disgust for what he has done. They are filled with love and worry for the man she knows isn't himself right now. "It's okay, James. I'm here to help you." Opening the bag, Sarah takes all the items out and places them neatly on the floor.
Watching Sarah, James is only confused by what she's doing. "Sarah. Why do you have a clock, a mirror, a hammer, and binoculars?"
Sarah doesn't respond to James' question. She grabs the hammer and prepares to do the first step the typed-out instruction she's read and memorized tells her to do.
Seeing Sarah bring the hammer close to the binoculars, James hears the Watcher's voice inside his mind. "Wait?! She isn't... James! Stop her! Don't-"
The sound of the hammer hitting the binoculars fills the room. James was too late to stop her. But even though the binoculars aren't fully broken yet, James doesn't do anything to prevent Sarah from hitting them again with her hammer.
After hitting the binoculars a second time, James' mind feels clear, as if the Watcher's presence inside his mind is weakening. Hey, Watcher. Are you there?
The Watcher doesn't respond inside James' mind. James receives no response from the Watcher. For the first time in a while, the only voice inside James' head is his own.
"Sarah. What are you doing? Why are you-" James gets interrupted as a woman wearing lingerie enters the church. She rushes excitedly toward James, running past and ignoring Sarah. Once she's standing before James, she hands him the menu that she had been holding in her hand.

"Master! I have finished preparing the food menu for all the guests to eat at the wedding party. The top female chefs around the world will be making them. I know the guests will love the delicious meals they'll make. And I know the ladies will love the food more when it's covered in your delicious sauce, Master." The woman stares lustfully down at James' crotch.
Earlier, James would have perved all over the woman before him. But now, with a fresh mind and vision, he's slightly uncomfortable with the situation. "Uhh... Yes... I..." For a few moments, James fidgets with the menu he's holding before handing it back to the woman. "Now is not a good time. Come back... Uhh... Tomorrow! Yes, come back tomorrow."
With no ounce of disobedience, the woman bows her head before turning around. She purposefully sways her hips as she walks away, making James blush, ashamed that he looked.
Once the woman leaves the church, James turns his attention back to Sarah. The binoculars on the floor are now completely destroyed. The hammer used to break them lies peacefully next to them. In Sarah's hand is a hand mirror, which she uses to show James his reflection.
"Sarah. Why are you-" James stops as Sarah turns the mirror around to show him the back of it. Taped to the back of the mirror is James' and Sarah's wedding photo. Looking at the photo, James smiles as he remembers that beautiful day, the woman standing next to him being the main reason that day was so special.
For almost half a minute, James does nothing but look at the wedding photo. But then Sarah turns the mirror around to show James his reflection again.
During the next couple of minutes, Sarah flips the mirror around, changing what James sees every so often. It takes a while. But James notices something when he sees himself in the wedding photo, and when he sees himself in the mirror's reflection. The man in the photo and the reflection are the same person, but also different at the same time. The man has the same face, but his heart is different. It's been corrupted.
Realization of what he used his powers for the past month hits James like a truck. He collapses to his knees, feeling sick to the stomach of the man he has become. "Oh, god! What have I done? What have I become?"
Sarah places the mirror on top of the clock, the side with the wedding photo facing the ceiling. Being the ever-so caring wife, she comforts James by speaking in a calm voice and rubbing his shoulder. Tears start forming in her eyes. "James! You're becoming yourself again. It's all going to be okay. I was told we can undo all you've done. It's not too late to fix everything."
Grabbing the hammer, Sarah has a look of determination as she looks at the mirror lying on top of the clock. Without hesitation, Sarah smashes the mirror. The clock underneath the mirror glows as the sound of bells rings from it. The area quickly becomes enshrouded by a blinding bright light, preventing Sarah and James from seeing anything but white light. And then, a voice is heard.
"James... James."
James opens his eyes, finding himself standing at the altar of the church. Standing next to him is his best friend, Ethan, and a priest. Before him, sitting in the church's many rows of seats are members of his family on one side and members of Sarah's family on the other.
"Hey, James. You okay. You looked like you were spacing out?" Ethan asks.
"Yeah. I'm fine. I-" James is cut off as the church becomes filled with the sounds of the organ player playing 'Here Comes The Bride'. Everyone sitting stands up and turns to look at the church doors. Some family members are holding their phones, recording the moment.
The doors to the church open, and out walks the most beautiful woman James has ever seen. The wedding dress she's wearing doesn't enhance her beauty. To James, it's the woman wearing the dress that makes it beautiful.

The world seems to move in slow motion as James watches Sarah approach him at the altar. He savors the moment, knowing it will be an experience he will never forget. Shortly after Sarah stands next to James at the altar, the family members behind them sit back down. Sarah and James stand before the priest, ready to become officially married.
"Dearly beloved. We are gathered here today to join James Cooper and Sarah Thorn in holy matrimony. If anyone has any reason why these two shouldn't get married, speak now or forever hold your peace." No one dares to object, making the priest continue. "James Cooper. Do you take Sarah Thron to be your wife, to live together, to love her, to honor her, to comfort her, and to keep her in sickness and in health, forsaking all others, for as long as you both shall live?"
Without hesitation, James says, "I do."
"And do you, Sarah Thron, take James Cooper to be your husband, to live together, to love him, to honor him, to comfort him, and to keep him in sickness and in health, forsaking all others, for as long as you both shall live?"
Without hesitation, Sarah smiles as she says, "I do."
"Then, by the power vested in me, I now pronounce you husband and wife. You may now kiss the bride."
James and Sarah turn to look at each other. James goes in for a kiss. But Sarah surprises James by leaping onto him, wrapping her arms around his neck, and pulling him in for a deep kiss. The room fills with the sound of people clapping and cheering while the organ plays wedding music.
"Ladies and gentlemen, I give you Mr. James Cooper and Mrs. Sarah Cooper."
Finishing their kiss, James and Sarah hold each other's hand as they walk down the aisle together as a newlywed couple. They pass by their family and friends. But they ignore their cheers. In their minds at this moment, they are the only people on Earth.
After exiting the church, James helps Sarah into the limo parked outside before climbing in himself. A second later, the limo driver puts the limo out of park and starts driving.
Sarah and James are still holding hands as they sit in the limo. As they look at each other, their eyes are filled with nothing but love for the other person. When Sarah laughs, James can't help but ask, "What's so funny?"
"Recalling the day we met. I remember you sitting next to me on the train, barely saying a word to me. And I remember you running after me when I left the train to ask for my number."
James' smile quickly turns to a frown. "Well, you forgot the part where I used my powers to make you give me your number."
Noticing her new husband's sadness, Sarah squeezes James' hand more. She had forgotten how much James hates himself for using her powers on her. "Hey. I already told you I forgive you for all the times you used your powers on me. I don't know how or why you have such powers, James. But I know the man you are. Anyone else with your powers probably would have used them to take over the world or something. But you're not like that. You're a good soul, which is why I married you. The fact that you chased after me to get my number, I probably would have given it to you even if you hadn't used your powers on me. I love you, James. And I always will. Just promise me one thing."
James smiles again, moved by his wife's words. "What is it, Sarah?"
"Promise me you'll stay the same man, that you're only use your powers for good and not evil. Keep that promise, and I will be happy to be married to such a kind man."
James slides closer to Sarah. He gives her a quick kiss on her lips before whispering in her ear, "I promise, Sarah. With you by my side, I know we can tackle anything the world may throw at us. And I promise to always be faithful to you. I'd rather die than cheat on you with another woman."
Sarah can see in James' eyes that he's speaking the truth. With joy, Sarah presses her lips onto James, pulling him in for a passionate kiss.
Once again, at this moment, to them, Sarah and James are the only people on Earth. They share a love that's strong and everlasting, a love that could never be broken by anything.
With their eyes closed, James and Sarah are oblivious to the inside of the limo suddenly glowing. The light grows stronger until it fully engulfs the happy couple, transporting them out of the relived memory.
Sarah and James open their eyes to find themselves in some kind of dark void. Their feet are on solid ground, but there's seemingly nothing they are standing on. All they see around them is black, with the only thing they can see is each other.
Looking into each other's eyes, they see confusion about where they are. But they don't have to say anything to each other to know they both experienced reliving their wedding day.
"Where are-"
Before James can finish his sentence, a bright white light appears before them. A loud, godly male voice is heard coming from the light. "Do you fully wish to relinquish your power and undo everything you did with your power in the past month?"
Sarah and James look at each other. They don't need to say a word to discuss the decision James should make. All they do is nod.
Looking back toward the light, James opens his mouth to speak. But before he can utter a word, an unwelcome friend returns inside his mind, the Watcher.
"James! I'm back. Don't worry. I'm here to stop you from making the worst decision of your life. The entire world will still be yours," the Watcher says in James' mind.
Turning his head to look at Sarah, James opens his mouth. The voice coming from his mouth is his. But the words he says are not his own. "Would you kindly strip for me like the good, pathetic sex toy you are?"
James watches in horror as the words he said immediately affect Sarah. Her eyes become filled with lust as she strips off her clothes, tossing them aside carelessly, only caring about getting fucked at the moment.

"Oh, James. You're so hot and sexy when you command me," Sarah says with a seductive tone in her voice. But James knows Sarah is currently not herself. Her mind was altered by the last few words he was **** to say.
The Watcher again takes control of James. But this time, he controls his body. James is helpless as his hands move down toward his pants to unbutton them. His hard cock springs free, making Sarah's lust grow more. To James' dismay, his mouth is used to say words he doesn't wish to speak. "Would you kindly spread your legs for me, slut?"
As James watches Sarah lie on her back against a solid floor that isn't visible, his body moves on its own again as he aligns the tip of his cock up to the entrance of Sarah's pussy. With one thrust, James slides his entire cock inside Sarah, making her let out a loud moan.

Despite having no control over his body, James still has his mind. He realizes everything he has done to conquer the world wasn't him, the real him. The man he was all of last month was an imposter, an evil version of himself that the Watcher created. And James hates himself for what he has let himself become. But he holds dear the words Sarah told him earlier, 'It's not too late to fix everything.'
Staring at Sarah, James doesn't have any perverted thoughts or lewd desires. There's only love in his eyes, love for the woman who said 'I do'. His thrusts, while full of depraved passion, slowly transform to thrusts of genuine love as James thinks of pleasant memories he's had with Sarah. Their first date, the first time they danced, the first time they said 'I love you' to each other, all flood back to James' mind, reminding him of why he loves Sarah.
Ignoring Sarah's pleas for rough sex and the Watcher's voice inside his head trying to recorrupt him, James closes his eyes. A new memory appears in his mind, the first time he and Sarah had sex, the day they both lost their virginities. When James opens his eyes, he finds himself in that memory.

Feeling like he has full control of his body again, James' thrusts slow down to become more gentle. The younger Sarah wraps her arms around James' neck, pulling him closer to her face to make out. The kiss is inexperienced, but still perfect. Everything about the moment is perfect as it was a time before the Watcher showed up in James' life.
Breaking the kiss, James willingly thrusts his cock faster inside Sarah. "I'm so close to cumming, Sarah! Would you kindly tell me if you're on birth control or not?!"
"No, I'm not, James!"
"Would you kindly let me cum inside your pussy, Sarah?!"
With a smile, Sarah wraps her legs around James' waist, not willing to let him slide his cock out of her. "Yes! Please cum inside me, James! I'm so close to cumming as well! Let's cum together!"
Like Sarah wanted, they cum together. Her pussy clamps down tightly around James' shaft from cumming as she feels his warm, hot jizz filling her womb.

At the time of this moment many years ago, James was ashamed of himself for using his powers to cum inside Sarah. But reliving it, James is happy, as it helped him remember that he doesn't want to rule the entire world, he only wants Sarah.
"I love you." Those three words are the only words James needed to hear Sarah say.
"I love you too, Sarah," James says before he blinks. The memory he was just in has vanished. Lying before him now is present Sarah, her pussy leaking with cum after James slides his cock out of her.

Discovering he has full control of his body again, James looks at the bright white light in the dark abyss he's in. The loud, godly male voice can be heard again. "Do you fully wish to relinquish your power and undo everything you did with your power in the past month?"
Without hesitation, James says, "I do."
The light dims until it is fully gone. Then suddenly, the dark abyss starts to shake like an earthquake is happening. Despite not being able to see anything clearly but Sarah, James feels like his surroundings are crumbling around him.
"James! What have you done?! You-" The feeling of the Watcher inside James' head vanishes as a light emerges from his forehead. The light separates from James' head and floats in front of him, slowly taking the form of a person who James assumes is the Watcher. But to his shock, the light forms into a woman instead of a man, like he expected.

"I can't believe it," the woman standing before James says. Her voice sounded masculine, sounding like the voice James was hearing inside his head. But when the woman speaks more, her voice sounds fully feminine. "You could have had everything, James. The entire world, millions of women as sex slaves, total power over everything. But you gave that all up for one woman?... You really are something, James. A unique kind of man with a unique kind of heart." The godly woman looks at James in silence for what feels like an eternity before she says her last sentence ever to James. "I hate you."
The woman vanishes into thin air right in front of James. One moment later, a blinding light appears, forcing James and Sarah to cover their eyes. Then, everything goes dark once again.
Present
Sitting comfortably in their home, James and Sarah cuddle next to each other as they listen to the news. They hear the latest devastating story about someone getting murdered. But despite the horrible news, they're happy that the world is back to normal.
It's been a few days since Sarah came to James' rescue, and James was fully free of the Watcher, or, at least, that woman who claimed to be the Watcher. Since then, everything James had done with powers under the Watcher's influence was erased as if it had never happened.
James' coworkers at his office job are themselves, Laura having sex with James never happened, and James no longer sees women wearing revealing outfits when out in public anymore. He sees the world as it truly is now instead of through the Watcher's eyes.
Sarah and James are the only ones who remember everything. But even though he fully remembers the horrible things he did, James has forgiven himself. It took around two days for James to come to terms. But he understands he wasn't himself at all when he did those things. And if Sarah can forgive him and move on, then so can he.
The man he once was can never remerge again. With his powers gone, the words 'Would you kindly' is just a simple phrase with no ability to get anyone to do anything against their will anymore. James is just an average man now, and he couldn't be happier.
With today being James' and Sarah's anniversary, they both took the day off work. Anthony is currently at school. But shortly after he gets home, they'll be going to a nice restaurant to celebrate their special day.
"Sorry that I couldn't give you a better anniversary gift than going to a restaurant this year."
Smiling at her husband, Sarah gives him a quick kiss on his lips before grabbing his hand to give it a gentle squeeze. "It's okay, James. I think we've both been through a lot this year. As long as we spend the day together, I'm happy." Sarah looks at James, eyes full of love. She gets up from the couch. "Well, actually. There is one more surprise this year. This year, I'm the one who has a big gift to give to you."
Sarah leaves the room, making James wonder what she could have gotten him. Less than a minute later, Sarah reenters the room, holding a small item in her hand that James doesn't know what it is at first. But when Sarah hands the item to him, he immediately realizes what it is.
"You're pregnant?!"
Sarah gently takes away the positive pregnancy test from James' hand before wrapping her arms around his neck. "Happy anniversary, James. I love you," she says before she plants her lips onto his for a passionate kiss.
In a location that's beyond space and time are two omnipresent gods, watching over the entire multiverse. The female god, Observer, slams her fist against the air as she watches Sarah and James being lovely-dovely with each other. "Damn it!"
"You tried, Observer. But I did tell you James is something special." The real Watcher laughs, finding Observer's anger entertaining.
Observer waves her hand, making the portal that's showing Sarah and James disappear. She turns to look at the Watcher, the god she was pretending to be while inside James' mind. "I just don't understand how Sarah figured out the ritual to get rid of the Watcher. No living thing in the multiverse should have that knowledge. The only one who knows the ritual is me and..." Observer gets a bit angrier as she sees Watcher laugh harder. "It was you?! You're the one who gave Sarah the information to get rid of me?! Why did you do that? You're the one who loves seeing worlds being turned lewd and corrupted."
The Watcher needs a moment to calm his laughter. "I wanted to test James, see if he really was the pure soul he portrays. Yes, we lost corrupting his world. But it was still entertaining to watch the whole thing. Wasn't it, Observer?"
Observer thinks for a moment. While it is frustrating to her that she has forever lost a world from becoming lewd, she will admit that watching all the events unfold in James' world was fun. Observer smiles, looking to move on from her latest failure. "I guess a bad ending isn't always a bad thing. Or, a good ending, depending on how you look at it."
"We can't always win them all." The Watcher waves his hand, and trillions of portals showing different universes appear before them. "There are still an infinite number of worlds and universes in the multiverse for us to interfere with to entertain us. Go ahead, Observer. You pick the universe we should go after next."
Observer scans the portals, carefully considering each one she sees. But there's one universe that catches her eye. "Let's do this one. Universe 1,703,541. It's a medieval fantasy universe. Giving a mortal living there the power to corrupt could be fun."
The Watcher smiles. "Let's do it."
A/N: I hope you all enjoyed the ending to my Would You Kindly series. I thought this ending was a good way to end James' and Sarah's story. Let me know what you guys thought of the ending and this series as a whole. How would you rate it out of 10? I think I did a good job with this series and am happy with it. But what do you guys think?
As for what I'll be writing next for Hypno Captions, yes, it is a medieval fantasy series that I'm very excited about. This medieval fantasy series I have in mind will have something I don't think has been done in Hypno Captions before. I don't want to give away anything yet. But I'm looking forward to seeing what you guys will think of the first chapter of my new series that I will start writing soon.
I generated all images in CivitAI. Until I see you all again, I hope you have a nice day.
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