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Chapter 84
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keron
What's next?
Follow Elsa
You get back into the minivan to see what happens with Elsa and the mini golf course manager for the rest of the ride, even though you're puzzled by Hernandez's behavior. He didn't have to abruptly stop fucking Elsa and if you had to guess, he probably could have finished his business in a couple of minutes and still met up with his fellow police officer without her noticing the delay.
It's probably nothing at all, so you decide to see how things play out between Elsa and the manager. You're quite tired anyway so if nothing happens, you're more than happy to just call it a night and go back to the estate.
The rest of the car ride is uneventful. It's almost completely silent except for them the manager occasionally asks Elsa for directions to her place. It takes about another 20 minutes to get there and you're so bored that you're dosing off in the backseat while still invisible. You snap to alertness when you hear the manager say, "We're here."
You look outside the car. It looks like Elsa lives in a condo building in a trendy part of town. It's not too busy on this street at this time of night, although there are a few people walking up and down the sidewalk.
"Thanks..." Elsa says. She tries to open the passenger side door to get out, but the lock is engaged. She tries again before turning to the manager. "Can you please unlock the door?"
The manager just stares blankly at her for a while, before he utters, "What?"
"The door. Can you unlock it?" Elsa repeats.
The manager looks like he's about to do as told, when he stops and pulls his hand away from the lock on his side. He then inhales deeply before he speaks again. "I just realized why you look so familiar..." he says, looking ahead instead of at Elsa.
"What?" Elsa says.
"You're a celebrity. Victoria's Secret model. I've seen you on billboards. Elsa something... I remember it's Elsa because of the Disney movie my daughter loves..." the manager continues.
Elsa doesn't say anything. You're not sure where this is going, but it sounds like an interesting direction.
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5 Rings
You come into possession of magic rings that give you great powers
By chance, you come into possession of 5 magic rings that imbue you with great powers. Each ring has a unique ability. How will you use them? For good? Or for evil?
Updated on Jun 3, 2026
by keron
Created on Nov 22, 2016
by keron
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