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Chapter 129 by JZ01 JZ01

The End of The First Adventure...

First Adventure Wrap-Up

NARRATOR NOTE//:

So, what an adventure so far huh?

We've had sex, fighting, comedy, more sex and the thwarting of an evil plot to rule the world. It may be cliché but hey, nothing like one of the classics to kick off the first adventure right?

I know i've had some notes throughout the story and I say this every time but thank you all so, so much. I always wanted to write a story ever since finding this site but I was always nervous to do so until I eventually said, "Why the fuck not?".

It's been a weird, wild and (sometimes) ridiculous ride to get to this point but i've loved writing every moment. I've had so many days where I couldn't wait to get home and just write for this story and I hope that I never lose my passion to do so.

Now, what's next?

Well, I always planned to go back and edit all of the older chapters. If you have read every chapter, I hope you can see my improvement in writing both in spacing and punctuation (which still isn't great). Over the next couple days or so, i'm gonna go back and update it all so it's up to the standard that I hold myself to now.

Now for a few shout outs/mentions: First is someone that I'd consider my closest friend on this site, Hiddenblade! I've shouted him out before but I cannot say enough how much of a cool guy he is to talk to, ever since I stumbled onto his story. The IRLRPG System (which you should absolutely check out or i'll be very upset) I have been so stoked and excited to read every single new chapter he puts out. His writing has influenced mine and his story is just excellent with every published chapter.

My second shoutout is to the legend, Fiftyfiftyfifty! I know he probably doesn't even know who I am but his story, Party of Hopeless Hotties was my inspiration to even write this sort of story in the first place. A while back, I sent him a message asking how to keep people interested in a long story with so many characters and i've been trying to follow his advice as best I can and I hope it's been working.

Last shoutout is to the one and only, Fantasy! His story Affection Multiplier got me through some tough times in my personal life and his new stories, The Book of Eros & The Spirit of Lust have got me hooked and I love reading every new chapter.

I hope that one day, I can be not only noticed by both Fifty and Fantasy but for my story to be considered anywhere near as great as theirs. I also hope that one day my writing will be on par with Hiddenblade's but that mans light years ahead of me, hahaha.

Now. I know that many of you are gonna just skip past this chapter to get to the start of the next adventure (whenever I write and upload it) but again, I wanted to thank you all so much for reading this far and for all those who leave likes, comments and all those that bookmark. Every single time I get a notification about one of those, I get so happy that anyone would actually take the time to do that for the story.

The next question I know you're asking (if you're reading this not long after I publish it) is; When is the next adventure starting?

As I said earlier, I plan to go back and update the earlier chapters but if all goes well and I get the edits done relatively quickly, I should (hopefully) be starting the next adventure next week (the week of August 30th).

Until then, I will be here as much as I can. It will be after work of course and if my advisor doesn't twist my grapes too much (and not in the fun way) but if you ever want updates on the story, all you have to do is leave a comment.

Thank you all once again and I will see you all in the next adventure!

This way to the next adventure, weary traveler...

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