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Chapter 5
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What is the voice saying?
Fingers on the Train
“Girl, you got sweaty. Take your top off to cool down.”
Target > 80, 1d100 roll+6=12, failed suggestion.
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 6
Hannah’s pulse is pounding from having jumped the turnstile. She wants to take her top off right here on the subway, but she also feels so many strange men’s eyes on her. She has to settle for imagining herself strip. How would the strangers react? Would they grope her? Even the thought is exciting.
“Back your ass up on the hoodlums. It’s been a couple years since someone’s felt you up on the subway. A part of you misses the excitement.”
Target > 40, 1d100 roll+6=72, successful suggestion (+1 corruption points)
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 7
Hannah squeezes down the subway car to where the two dudes in hoodies are lounging. Carter and Xavier are manspreading and taking up a lot of space, and she pretends that it’s only natural for her to back up between Carter’s wide legs and stick her ass right in his face as she finds a new handhold.
She pretends not to hear them snicker and talk about her ass. The subway car fills up more at the next stop and now she cannot move away even if she wants to.
She feels Carter’s fingers on the bare skin of her leg. She stays perfectly still, and then his fingertip moves up, tracing the smooth skin of her leg up, up, up. She feels her skirt move as his wrist pushes up the hem, and then his fingers are on her inner thigh. Hannah’s lips part voicelessly, and then Carter’s fingers brush her bare pussy lips. She's not wearing any panties. Hannah moans quietly and stands very still.
Xavier’s hand joins Carter’s and gropes her too. She’s only three stops away from her destination. Carter brushes her pussy again. Hannah moans louder.
“Ask him if you can sit in his lap,” she thinks to herself.
Target > 80, 1d100 roll+6=60, failed suggestion.
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 7
Hannah shakes her head to clear it. She doesn’t need to proposition the guy. He’s already taken liberties all on his own. Her body is tingling with excitement.
The doors open and close. A woman in a skirt suit presses in on her left, and some guy in a sports team jersey presses in on her right. Hannah keeps her handhold. Two more stops.
Carter keeps his hand underneath her skirt and presses his daring, rough fingers deeper into her wet slit. Hannah trembles and struggles not to moan.
Comment a suggestion from the voice for Hannah.
What is the voice saying?
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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