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Chapter 2
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Moistmaker
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This is a work in progress with the skeleton of a story.
I am trying to have a lot of options per tree branch so feel free to suggest ways the stories can go.
I am trying a new style of writing so leave some feedback on my prose if you have thoughts.
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