End of Act I

Oh, hey, you made it!

Work on Act II will begin as soon as the list here has been crossed out completely. Also, yes, we're going with acts. Cho-chooo, all aboard train pretentious, going non-stop between the village Symbolism and our great capital of Fancy-Smancy!

W.I.P.

• Wrote End Branc 1
• Write End Branch 2 (I am so sorry, all of you, coming from that ending.)
• Edit current writing for plot holes
• Edit current writing for clarity
• Beautify the hell out of everything
• Learn grammar and then fix that
• Write both start branches and convergence

Do throw some likes and comment on what you liked, didn't like, what you'd want to see, or your general impression. It would be much appreciated!

Especially any comments on parts lacking clarity. I can get a little too much in head with some set-pieces, to the point where I can picture it clearly, but others can't due to lacking context not written.

Stuff You May Have Missed

• Jorrel's cult of coffee bots
• Shiv's actual height
• Emalie's pov on Rolph
• The beginning of what was the end
• Shiv teasing Mute
• The Machine's intended purpose
• What fuels robots
• At least a hundred Arrested Development references. Yes. At this point I should probably just go write AD fanfic.

Music Referenced

• Love on the rocks (No Ice), The Darkness
• Should I Stay or Should I Go, The Clash
• Stress, Jim's Big Ego
• Making Plans for Nigel, XTC
• Inexplicable, The Corrospondents
• Original Things, Dustin Hatzenbuhler
• Skrig Det Til Træerne, De Eneste To
• Første Kærester På Månen, TV-2
• Isterija, Siela
• You Want It Darker, Leonard Cohen
• Monster, The Automatic
• As much Electric Six and Frank Zappa as I could cram in there.