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Chapter 36 by Genesis-Response Genesis-Response

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Day 3 Afternoon 2

Cassie noticed Van’s shoes before anything else.

They were still the rented bowling shoes: white panels, red stripes, rubber soles, one lace loose enough to drag against the carpet whenever he shifted his weight. The Hotel could summon corridors, classrooms, jungle ****-traps, and emotionally manipulative hometown replicas, but apparently it had decided the first minutes of her assigned bond time should involve Van looking like he had been sentenced to supervise a middle-school field trip.

He looked down when he realized she was staring.

“Is it that bad?” he asked.

“The shoes or the situation?”

“I was hoping those were separate, but I guess they aren’t.” He gave that a second of thought, then bent to change his shoes. He moved too quickly and the knot he tied fell apart.

He let out a breath and knelt again. “I should probably not begin the date by tripping over my laces.”

Cassie crossed her arms. “It’s a bond assignment, not a date. I’ve decided I’m not letting Verena steal my first date.”

“Right.” He wasn’t sure if he was supposed to agree with her or not, so he decided to tie the lace with unnecessary attention, buying himself three extra seconds before he had to look at her again. “I should probably not begin the assigned bond assignment by tripping over my laces.”

Celia had moved to the scoring table while they spoke. She did not look like someone concluding a class. She looked like someone closing up after a birthday party, cardigan sleeves pushed slightly back, one hand resting near the console while the ugly glow of the score screens washed over her fingers.

“You have until six before dinner,” she said.

The lanes hummed behind her. A ball rolled somewhere in the return mechanism, though no one had thrown it. The noise was small, ordinary, and therefore suspicious.

Fiona glanced at the clock over the snack counter. “Just under two hours.”

“Correct. Contestants not under a separate assignment are expected in the dining room at six. Until then, the common areas currently open to you will remain open.”

Katherine’s attention moved at once from Celia to the doors.

Evelyn caught the same word. “Currently open.”

Celia smiled as if she had been waiting for someone to catch the seam in the sentence. “Yes. The Hotel’s accessible spaces change based on schedule, need, and what Verena calls the ‘developmental phase’. I don’t recommend interpreting free time as unrestricted movement, but you do have more latitude than you had on the first night.”

“That is a generous way to say the cage is bigger now,” Fiona said.

“It’s,” Celia answered. “It’s also true that the size matters here. People behave differently when they can choose where to stand.”

No one rushed for the doors. The delay lasted long enough to become uncomfortable. For three days, the Hotel had moved them between meals, tests, lectures, transformations, and threats with the smooth entitlement of a hand on the back of the neck. When that hand lifted, even slightly, everyone seemed to feel the missing pressure before they trusted the freedom.

Claire was the first to act. She sat at the nearest booth, untied her bowling shoes, and set them carefully in front of her as if they might explode if insulted. “I am returning these before the Hotel decides they count as acceptable dinner footwear.”

“It wouldn’t.” Lizzy looked down at her own shoes. “Would it?”

The pause that followed was not kind to her confidence. She triggered a tiny bit of her power and stepped through the shoes before they could grow teeth.

The shoes vanished when removed. No flash, no sound, no helpful attendant. One moment they sat beneath the booth in paired rows; the next, the carpet was bare. The absence looked too clean, as if the Hotel had edited the evidence of their afternoon out of the room.

Van stared at the empty space. “I may never get used to that.”

“Good,” Cassie said. “Hold onto that. A healthy instinct like that might keep you human.”

He looked like he wanted to answer, then thought better of it. That was new, or at least new enough for her to notice. Earlier Van might have filled the gap with an apology or a joke. Now he let the comment sit without trying to sand off its edges.

Celia stepped back from the console. “The central lounge has a directory terminal if you want to know what is currently available. Walking works too. The Hotel is rarely subtle when it wants you somewhere.”

Fiona pushed herself away from the booth. “That may be the first practical thing you’ve said all day.”

“I consider that a respectable gain for an afternoon of bowling.”

Mara laughed under her breath. She tried to hide it by reaching for the empty nacho tray, but the tray vanished before her fingers touched it. Her hand hung in the air for a second, then curled back toward herself.

Cassie turned back toward Van. “So. You had a plan?”

Van shifted his weight. “I found somewhere not boring earlier.”

Her eyes narrowed. “Earlier when?”

“After breakfast. There was a directory terminal in the lounge, and I had time before training. You said not boring. I figured if I waited, it would be on my mind all day.”

That was reasonable, so Cassie disliked it on principle. “What kind of somewhere?”

He opened his mouth to answer, but she waved him off. “Actually, don’t tell me.”

Van stopped with the answer still on his face. “You asked.”

“I asked if you had one. I did not ask you to ruin the only good part of not knowing.”

“I thought not knowing was the part you hated.”

“I hate being ambushed. I also hate having a bad thing explained to me in advance so I can dread it in advance. If it’s terrible, I don’t want to spend the next hour getting mad early. If it’s good, I don’t want to spend the next hour waiting for the Hotel to contaminate it. You found a place? Fine. Keep it to yourself until we get there.”

He absorbed that with more seriousness than she had intended. “All right. I won’t tell you.”

“And if it’s a malt shop, I am going to blow up the soda fountain.”

“Understood.” His mouth tried for a smile and did not quite make it. “It’s not a malt shop.” he reassured her.

Across the room, Fiona had already started toward the exit. Claire fell in beside her, matching her pace deliberately.

“Where are you going?” Claire asked.

“Running.”

“Do you know where the Hotel keeps all the running?”

“I’m about to ask its enormous glowing suggestion machine.”

Claire considered that silently.

Fiona looked at her sideways. “You’re in a mood.”

“I was almost eaten by a dinosaur two days ago, went on a captivity date, and just lost an afternoon to educational bowling. I’m experimenting with perspective.”

Fiona snorted once, which was as much approval as she was likely to give.

The rest of the group began to break apart. Mara touched Lizzy’s elbow and mentioned the clothing store. Lizzy brightened, then immediately looked guilty for brightening. Naomi listened from beside the snack counter, one hand wrapped around a paper cup of water she had not drunk.

“I don’t have wardrobe access,” Lizzy said.

Katherine, who had been studying the hallway beyond the doors, answered without turning. “You don’t need personal wardrobe access to purchase clothing. You need BP.”

Lizzy blinked. “How do you know that?”

Katherine smoothed one sleeve. “I conducted an earlier field test.”

Evelyn gave her a look. “You bought a dress to impersonate Verena.”

“I conducted an earlier field test involving the daring use of clothing as a disguise and reckless improvisation under **** by Van-Droid.” Katherine’s expression suggested she was willing to let the inferior summary live for now.

Naomi looked down at her Hotel-provided clothes. The tank top and cotton pants had been clean, practical, and humiliatingly neutral when they first appeared. After three days, neutrality had begun to feel like another form of ownership.

“We can buy things there?” she asked.

Celia answered from near the counter. “Yes. The store will explain prices and access.”

Naomi gave one small nod. It wasn’t hope, exactly. Hope required more trust than anyone should be spending casually here. But she looked at the hallway differently afterward.

Mara saw it. “Come with us. We can just look.”

Lizzy nodded quickly. “Looking should be safe.”


The central lounge looked less formal when no announcement was waiting inside it.

It still did not look comfortable.

The furniture was arranged in conversational clusters that assumed intimacy without enforcing it. Low tables held bowls of fruit no one had requested. Lamps gave off warm light in measured pools, careful not to leave corners dark enough to feel private. The central terminal stood in the middle of the room, tall and glassy, its screen asleep until Fiona approached.

Claire drifted toward the bookcase instead.

Fiona tapped the terminal awake. “Running paths.”

The glass brightened. Options arranged themselves into a neat list.

INDOOR TRACK — STANDARD LOOP
GARDEN PATH — LOW INTENSITY
CLIFFSIDE SIMULATION — MODERATE INTENSITY
URBAN ROOFTOP COURSE — CURRENTLY UNAVAILABLE
OBSTACLE RUN — REQUIRES SUPERVISED COMBAT CLEARANCE
RIVERSTONE TRAIL — SOLO ACCESS AVAILABLE

Fiona read the last line twice.

Behind her, Claire pulled a heavy red book from the shelf. Gold letters formed, blurred, then settled into English across the cover.

SELECTED HISTORIES OF THE HAREM HOTEL
VOLUME III: CLASSICAL AND LATE ANTIQUE SEASONS

Fiona looked over her shoulder. “That’s your plan?”

Claire weighed the book in both hands. “This is either history, propaganda, or bait. All three seem worth examining. And besides, this book wasn’t here yesterday.”

“You know this place wants you to be curious.”

“I do. Unfortunately, I am already curious. Since I cannot currently fix that character flaw, I may as well aim it at something.”

Fiona touched Riverstone Trail. The terminal expanded the selection.

RIVERSTONE TRAIL AVAILABLE.
ESTIMATED LOOP: 4.2 MILES.
TERRAIN: VARIABLE.

Fiona memorized the route displayed on the terminal. “If I’m not back by dinner, assume the fake river got ambitious.”

Claire didn’t look up. “If I find a chapter called ‘How We Feed Redheads to Rivers,’ I’ll come looking.”

Fiona paused at the doorway. “That joke was awful.”

Claire’s smile stayed mostly in the book. “Noted.”

Fiona left before either of them could let the stress ruin their banter.

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The shopping area was a strange mix of real-world nostalgia and movie-set luxury. It was the kind of place with couture dried gum under the chairs. The clothing store sat at the end of a side corridor that seemed to have been designed by someone with a gentler imagination than the rest of the facility.

The sign over the door read “Haven Fabrics” in pale gold on green. The storefront used pale wood, wide display windows, and curtains in layers of cream and moss green. The mannequins had no faces, which Lizzy considered the first decent choice anyone had made all day. Soft sweaters hung beside fitted dresses. Shoes lined one wall in careful rows. A display table near the front held folded fabric so precisely arranged it might have been ceremonial.

Then Naomi saw the price tag on an oversized gray hoodie.

The Rainy Day Hoodie— 575 BP

This special fabric is guaranteed to fit in the comfortable oversized way. Perfect for when you want to disappear a little. In anything less than **** climates it is always warm and cozy.

Her fingers stopped an inch from the sleeve.

Lizzy leaned closer. “Five hundred seventy-five? For a hoodie?”

Mara checked the tag, then the surrounding displays. A pale blouse with embroidered cuffs cost 275 BP. A fitted skirt was 225. A pair of lace stockings displayed on a velvet tray cost 100 BP. Delicate panties in three colors sat beneath a card labeled “A Well Kept Secret”, also 100 BP.

“The pattern is not subtle,” Mara said.

The door behind the counter opened before any of them could touch the delicate silver bell on the counter. The woman who leaned out wore an oversized cream sweater that slipped off one shoulder and fell past her hands. Long honey-colored hair spilled over one side, full and soft enough to make the room look warmer around her. Her features were delicate and fine with a distinctly elven cast, including a striking pair of gracefully pointed ears.

“Hello,” she said. “I’m Lyra. You can come in, even if you’re only looking.”

Lizzy held her hands close to herself. “Looking is definitely free?” She was trying to keep her eyes off the woman’s ears, but failing.

Lyra’s smile turned sympathetic without becoming pitying. “It’s ok, I know you three haven’t been exposed to one of my kind just yet. I imagine it’s quite a shock.”

Naomi looked at her. “Yet?”

“Well, Ms. Wren came in a few nights ago and I imagine she reported in.” Lyra snapped to a parody of attention, complete with a badly angled salute that caused her ears to point down towards her shoulders.

“Alien creatures spotted on the flank!” She loosened instantly and released a musical giggle, “Or at least that’s how I imagine it.”

Lizzy and Mara were caught off guard and their laughter echoed through the room. Naomi gave a tight, pleased smile. “I’d laugh, but she’s my room mate so it feels disloyal.”

Inside, the store smelled of cotton, cedar, and a faint floral note that suggested a childhood memory that none of them could quite place. Racks formed soft alcoves instead of hard aisles. The mirrors were tall and framed in pale wood. A small seating area held overstuffed chairs beside a table with tea things already arranged.

Lizzy saw the tea and did not move toward it, deciding it might be dangerous.

Lyra noticed the flash of fear and gave a sad smile. “You came bowling?”

It was said like a question, but Lyra’s tone made it clear she knew the answer already. Mara’s attention sharpened. “You’ve been watching us?”

“No, gods no. I just know the schedule, and I know when people enter my store wearing the expression of women who have recently been **** to wear industrial shoes against their will.”

Lizzy made a small sound that might have become a laugh in a safer environment.

Naomi walked toward the cardigan rack. The dark one she had seen from the window was softer up close. It had weight without bulk, a wide collar, and sleeves long enough to hide her hands if she wanted. The tag read:

A CLOSED DOOR — 625 BP
This modest outerwear reduces attention to your best features. Its drape is designed to conceal your charms for a while, allowing another woman to take center stage for a bit.

She let the sleeve fall back.

Lyra came no closer. “That one doesn’t seem to suit you, if you don’t mind me saying. And besides, it’s very expensive.”

“That seems intentional.”

“It’s.” Lyra folded her sweater sleeves around her hands. “The system prices concealment harshly when concealment is the primary goal. It prefers invitation, adornment, display, and garments that create strong emotional reactions. Comfort is allowed but hiding is taxed.”

Lizzy turned from a rack of blouses. “That is a horrible thing to say in a clothing store.”

“It would be more horrible if I pretended the pricing was random.” Lyra moved to a table and lifted a pale violet blouse from a folded stack. “There are ways to bargain. There are ways to find clothes that give you more of yourself without qualifying as refusal. I can help with that, that’s why they chose me for this. I cannot make the store stop being what it’s.”

Mara studied her for a long moment. “You sound practiced at that distinction.”

“I am. Some contestants need staff to be a target for their anger. Some need staff to be kind and cooperative. Most need a mixture of both. I am not built to give the first in a way that would help. So I do what I can with fabric, prices, and small mercies that pass inspection.”

No one answered immediately. Lizzy touched the blouse again. Naomi kept her eyes on the cardigan. Mara looked at the racks and saw the trap more clearly for being so gently lit.

Lyra held out the blouse. “This one is called First Impression. It’s flattering without being aggressive, and it really matches your eyes. It has a mild enhancement to fit and comfort, just a touch of elven magic to make sure it flatters you and takes one thing off your mind during a time when you don’t need distractions.”

Lizzy’s blush rose fast. “I wasn’t asking for that.”

“No. But I can tell you liked the cut and it flatters your complexion quite nicely.”

That could have been a sales pitch from almost anyone else. From Lyra, it landed softly enough that Lizzy only took the blouse and stared at the cuffs.

Mara stepped closer before Lizzy could retreat into distrust. “We’re stuck in an extra dimensional reality show, Lizzy. If they wanted to brainwash us, I doubt they’d use cotton.” She turned to Lyra, “How much?”

“Two hundred seventy-five. I can reduce it if bundled with a skirt and if logged as a first-time purchase.”

Lizzy looked from the blouse to Lyra. “That sounds manipulative.”

“It is. The system likes progress to be named in ways it can track.”

Naomi, still by the cardigan, said, “And you help it, the system. You help it track us and grade us.”

Lyra looked at her then. The kindness did not leave her face, but neither did it attempt to cover the answer.

“Yes,” she said. “I help it. I am loyal to this place in ways you would be right to find ugly. I also know that you have to live in your bodies tonight, and tomorrow, and the day after. If I can make that less awful, I will. If you want to know if that is enough, No it isn’t.” She paused for a moment to consider her next words, “But, I won’t apologize. I can’t betray Verena even in small ways.”

Mara let that settle. It wasn’t an absolution. It wasn’t resistance. It was a woman-shaped compromise standing in a beautiful store, offering discounted blouses inside a system that punished modesty.

Lizzy looked down at the violet fabric. “That’s a lot to unpack. I’m sorry you’re so conflicted, Lyra.”

Lyra’s soft smile never wavered. Her eyes locked on Lizzy’s and something seemed to pass between them for a moment. The moment passed quickly and the tension of the conversation evaporated like it was never there.

Lizzy seemed to have used up her reserves of confidence for the night and her shoulders shrank, “Ok, I’m sorry. I just…” she trailed off then looked down at the blouse. “I know I shouldn’t, but I still want it.”

Naomi’s hand returned to the dark cardigan. She touched the sleeve, then withdrew again. “The system being awful does not make the blouse less pretty.”

Lizzy gave her a surprised smile. “That is almost encouragement.”

Mara laughed, and this time the sound did not immediately apologize for itself.

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The Riverstone Trail began behind an ordinary door and opened into dusk.

Fiona stopped on the threshold because stepping from a hotel corridor into a river valley should have been impossible, and the fact that impossibility had become routine did not make it less insulting. Beyond the door, a narrow trail wound through wet black stones and low grass. Water moved somewhere out of sight. The air smelled of leaves, cold river spray, and soil that had never touched weather.

A small sign waited beside the path.

RIVERSTONE TRAIL
SOLITUDE PRIORITY ACTIVE
RETURN AVAILABLE AT ANY MARKER

Fiona read it, then looked back. The door had already vanished.

“Passive observation,” she said to the sign. “Solitude priority. Return available. You people can make a prison sentence sound like a spa brochure written by robots.”

The sign offered no response, so Fiona started running.

At first, she ran too hard. She knew it and did not correct herself immediately. Her feet hit the stones with more **** than the trail required, and her breath came fast because her anger was almost always there, just beneath the surface. The river appeared after the first bend, white water cutting between rocks dark enough to look volcanic. Trees leaned over the current, their leaves silver underneath when the false wind moved them.

It was a good trail. The stones had enough irregularity to demand attention. The incline rose just slowly enough to punish impatience. The air cooled the sweat at her neck without becoming comfortable. Whoever had built this knew how running worked, which meant the Hotel had managed to steal or copy even that.

Fiona pushed up the first hill and made herself find a real rhythm. Cassie’s laugh followed her anyway. Not the little scoff Cassie used when she wanted everyone to know she was above the joke. Not the cutting bark that usually came with an insult sharpened in advance.

The real one, startled out of her when Fiona stole Lizzy’s nachos and declared tribute rights over a single bowling frame. Cassie had looked offended by her own joy afterward, which somehow made it better.

Van had laughed too, that was what stuck. Fiona lengthened her stride.

Van was not yet the monster she wanted him to be. He was awkward, frightened, guilt-ridden, and visibly aware that the Hotel had placed him at the center of something he had not built. Evelyn had gone into his mind and come back with no accusation. Claire had returned from her date confused but not broken. Even Fiona had seen enough during training to admit that Van was not lounging on a throne demanding obedience. He was trying.

Fine.

A victim could still be standing in the wrong place. A man could be dragged into power and still learn to enjoy the view from the top if enough people kept telling him he had ****. Fiona had known too many men who needed far less encouragement than a magic hotel and eight women assigned to orbit them.

Cassie would not orbit anything quietly. The thought hit with enough **** to disrupt Fiona’s breathing. Cassie would dig her heels in. She would spit fire at the first person who tried to make submission sound therapeutic. She would rather be hated than managed.

She was young, reckless, mouthy, volatile, and too proud to admit fear until it came out sideways as contempt, but she had stood in front of a charging tyrannosaur and dug in her heels.

Fiona respected that, respect was simple. Respect was allowed.

The trail bent along the riverbank. Fiona took the turn faster than necessary and nearly slid on loose stone. She recovered, swore, and kept moving.

Being angry at Van because Cassie was with him made no sense. So that was not what this was. This was a tactical concern. This was distrust of any male authority in a **** harem reality show. This was battlefield logic applied to a battlefield that had the poor taste to include date assignments.

It was not jealousy.

The trail did not challenge that conclusion. It only climbed. Fiona ran until the first layer of thought burned off and the second became harder to hear.

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Evelyn did not wander through the open facility so much as audit it.

Katherine accompanied her without needing to announce the same intention. They moved through the corridors at an unhurried pace, but neither woman treated the walk as leisure. Evelyn tracked turns, signage, and distances. Katherine watched the behavior of doors, decorative alcoves, and reflective surfaces with the concentration of someone cataloguing a hostile embassy.

“That alcove was not here this morning,” Evelyn said.

Katherine glanced at the recessed space. It contained a narrow table, a vase of white flowers, and a painting of a gray ocean under heavy clouds.

“No,” Katherine said. “Something else was.”

“A door?”

“Possibly. Or maybe a window. The Hotel wants us to doubt ourselves.”

Evelyn stepped closer to the painting. The brushstrokes were thick enough to look handmade. No signature. The ocean in the frame had been painted with great care and no love.

The first restricted door was almost refreshing in its bluntness. It stood at the end of a short corridor, black and unmarked, without knob, hinge, seam, keypad, or pretense of cooperation. Katherine approached it anyway. She pressed two fingers to the surface, then to the wall beside it.

“Not a door,” she said.

“The hotel is making a statement in the shape of a door.”

Katherine gave Evelyn a brief look. “Are you becoming fluent in system-ese?”

“I prefer to understand my captors’ grammar.”

A sign appeared at the next intersection as they approached.

CLOTHING
PERSONAL CARE
QUIET ROOMS
GARDEN ACCESS
TRANSFORMATION ATELIER

Evelyn stopped at the last line. Katherine did not move toward it. That, more than anything, told Evelyn the sign mattered. “You are avoiding that.”

Katherine’s mouth tightened slightly. “The Hotel has made stores available before dinner. One of those stores is dedicated to transformation. It won’t vanish because we postpone walking into it.”

“What if one of the others goes there?”

“I believe the Hotel prefers efficient cruelty. I doubt the room will spring a trap on one or two isolated contestants. They certainly transformed us all together before, and the screens don’t let us hide anyway.”

Evelyn looked back at the sign. “Should we ever go there, do you think?”

Katherine’s answer took longer than usual. “If we go there, we are participating in the system. Which is what Verena wants. If we never do, we add drama for the audience, which is what Verena wants. I say wait until we have more info.”

“I honestly hate this place.” Evelyn’s voice was heavy with regret. “But I don’t believe we can stop what is happening. And anyway, Van is on his bond assignment. My read is that this system won’t do anything outrageous without him present, they seem to require his cooperation. To a point.”

They passed a mirror set into a decorative arch. Evelyn glanced at it only long enough to confirm that it reflected them correctly. Katherine did not look at it at all.

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Van was trying too hard not to lead. He slowed whenever the corridor split, pretended to study signs for far longer than necessary to read the short text. He waited at each intersection for her to choose a direction. It was considerate. It was also irritating, because it kept interrupting Cassie’s pace.

“You can walk like you know where you’re going,” she said.

He glanced at her. “You told me not to tell you.”

“I told you not to tell me the destination. I did not tell you to become an NPC follow quest.”

He exhaled through his nose, nearly a laugh. “I am trying not to make the decision for you.”

“The Hotel already made the big decision. Here we are arguing about hallways.”

“I don’t like the feeling of choosing for you.”

Cassie looked at him sidelong. “That is a very Van answer.”

“I don’t know what that means, but it sounds like an insult.”

“It means annoyingly decent in a way that makes me want to check you for wires.”

He accepted that with a small nod. “If you find any, please remove them. I will have to file a maintenance report immediately,” his voice adopted a monotone and robotic cadence as he spoke.

Cassie’s eyes rolled hard enough to cause injury. “Ugh, don’t add corny jokes to the list of reasons to hate this place.”

The corridor changed after the next turn. The carpet gave way to dark stone. Warm hotel lighting cooled into a cleaner glow that caught along the baseboards and edges of the walls. The air lost the faint lounge scent of fruit, lamps, and untrustworthy flowers. Ahead, a storefront gleamed behind black-framed glass. The sign was graven into the stone over the door in thin, sharp letters, “Transformation Atelier.” Through the window, they could see shelves lining the walls inside, each lit from beneath, each filled with tiny crystal figures no bigger than Cassie’s hand.

They were beautiful but eerie with a sort of gravity to them that caught the eye and resisted when you looked away. Cassie stopped to stare at the shop front.

Van stopped with her. “Do you know what this is?”

“Why would I know what it is?” she demanded.

“I was hoping you had guessed something I hadn’t.”

“That has probably happened several times today. Not here, though.”

The door opened revealing a woman standing just inside, hands folded neatly in front of her. Her face was sharp and her hair was cut short in bright, angled layers of silver that framed her cheeks and made her eyes look more deliberate. The color of her hair was a single shade short of metallic, bordering on manufactured. She wore black and deep green in fitted lines, expensive-looking without being ornamental, the kind of clothes that implied a gallery opening where no one was allowed to touch the furniture. Her features were sharp and angular, with pointed ears and almond shaped eyes.

“Good afternoon,” she said. “Welcome.”

Cassie did not enter. “To what?”

The mystery woman stepped out of the door frame into the hallway. “To my store, of course.”

“That is not an answer. That is what people say before selling cursed jewelry to foolhardy peasant children.”

The woman’s smile warmed. “Then let me begin more properly. I’m Nixie. This is the Transformation Atelier.”

Van’s shoulders tightened at the title before Cassie had time to understand it.

Nixie turned to him with a courtesy so perfect it made him feel clumsy. “Master Van.”

“Van,” he said. “Just Van.”

“Of course, sir.” She did not sound corrected. She sounded accommodating.

“Katherine told us about you guys,” Cassie made the statement sound like an accusation. “I have super powers and an army of beast men is disassembling my world one day at a time, I get kidnapped by the high priestess of space bureaucracy, chased by dinosaurs, and now because why not, elves too. Go ahead and skip the lore dump Galadriel, nice to meet you.”

Cassie stepped inside because refusing the doorway would have left the room in charge of her imagination. The shelves ran in long black rows along the walls and down the center of the store. Each crystal figure depicted a woman in miniature, every detail carved with impossible precision: hair falling across shoulders, hands lifted in demonstration, bodies posed to show strength, pleasure, health, sleep, beauty, concentration. Small plaques stood before each sculpture.

The nearest statue, one of a tiny woman tucked into a perfect bed, read:

POWER CYCLE — 2,000 BP

Sleep requirements dramatically reduced. Restorative cycles become more efficient.

Van stared at it over her shoulder and made a low sound. “Hmmm. I’d be wary of anything changing the way I sleep.”

Nixie looked pleased. “It’s not one of my premium pieces, but it is very practical. It’s popular with soldiers, students, caretakers, new parents, and anyone who has ever resented the amount of life surrendered to **** maintenance.”

Cassie moved to the next plaques.

CHIPSET — 2,500 BP

Memory retention and recall improved.

PAGE TURNER — 2,000 BP

Reading speed and comprehension improved.

CLEAN BILL — 4,000 BP

Resistance to illness, infection, and common biological contaminants greatly increased.

Miracles. Sold in neat crystal rows and labeled like clever stationery.

Cassie folded her arms tightly, then made herself loosen them. The store was full of crystal. Every shelf glittered with small bodies and stored alterations. A spark of plasma in the wrong second could turn the room into shrapnel, and she did not know whether breaking a transformation container released anything. She did not intend to learn by accident.

Nixie watched her hands, then her face. If she understood the calculation, she chose not to say so.

“You sell transformations,” Cassie said.

“I do. I also design some of them. The simpler ones anyway. Verena crafts the custom jobs herself.” Pride was evident in her voice.

Cassie was reading the labels intently. “Some of these are things people would kill for.”

“Yes.” Nixie allowed, “But that wouldn’t do them any good.”

“And some of them are things people would kill to avoid.”

“Perhaps.” The agreement landed too smoothly.

Cassie walked farther along the shelf. The plaques changed.

SOFT FILTER — 3,000 BP

Skin clarity, facial harmony, and conventional attractiveness improved.
CUP OVERFLOWING — 3,500 BP
Bustline enhanced. Postural and support adaptations included.
SWEET SPOT — 2,500 BP
Physical sensitivity increased. Pleasure response broadened.
DADDY DEAREST — 2,000 BP
Speech and address protocols adjusted toward the selected authority figure.

Cassie’s eyes passed over the last one, caught, and came back. She didn’t ask. Asking would give the thing more space.

Nixie did not step forward. She did not explain, defend, or apologize. The crystal remained where it was, one grotesque little product among many, no more spotlighted than sleep reduction or better memory.

This place was a different kind of terrible. A monster in a cage could be hated properly. Treating people like Inventory required a different kind of fear.

Cassie turned to Nixie. “You know what all this is? These transformations?”

“Of course I do, Ms. Lin. I and other members of the staff research the relevant technologies and power systems thoroughly.”

“You know none of us asked for it.” The accusation was seething in her, seeking an argument, a fight, some kind of release.

“Yes.” Her response was calm and smooth. No room for dissembling or moral double speak.

“And you are still standing here with mood lighting and cute names like the problem is presentation.”

Nixie’s expression shifted into something almost tender. “Presentation matters because fear makes people clumsy with the truth. A harsh name does not make a painful thing less painful. It only makes the person hearing it bleed sooner.”

Cassie laughed once, without warmth. “That might be the prettiest sentence anyone has ever used to avoid taking responsibility. It’s a violation is what it is.”

Nixie did not flinch from the word. “Violation is sometimes accurate. It’s not always complete. If a surgeon removes a limb to stop poison from reaching the heart, the patient may experience that moment as mutilation, betrayal, theft, and salvation all at once. Her terror is real. Her grief is real. Her lack of consent may be real if the fever has stolen the time for consent. None of that means the surgeon should let her die whole.”

Van’s voice came in low. “We are not infected limbs.”

“No,” Nixie said. “You are people. That is why the work must be done so very carefully.”

Cassie felt heat gather under her ribs. She pressed it down until her voice stayed level. “Carefully. That’s your defense.”

“It’s not a defense. It’s an obligation.” Nixie stepped to one shelf and straightened a figurine by less than a finger’s width. “You are free to hate the premise. I would think less of you if you did not. Resistance is not failure. It tells us where the old self still believes survival depends on remaining unchanged.”

Cassie took one controlled breath and watched light sparkle across the room from a hundred crystal edges.

“You talk like resistance is another ingredient.”

Nixie met her gaze without shame. “It is. So are pride, fear, shame, and a hundred other mortal feelings that tangle up in a person and keep them from growing to their full potential.”

Van stared at her. “You can’t mean that.”

“I mean it precisely.” Nixie turned back to them. “A transformation that meets no resistance is usually shallow, decorative, or already desired. The deeper work touches identity, shame, fear, hunger, loyalty, power, and the lies people need in order to reach adulthood. Of course the self fights. The self has been doing its best with the tools it had. But this season does not have the luxury of leaving everyone limited by the tools that failed them.”

Cassie wanted to call it a trick. She had seen men sell certainty before. She had seen smooth voices turn bruises into lessons and control into protection. Nixie’s calm did not impress her.

What bothered her was the shelf behind the calm.

Power Cycle. Clean Bill. Page Turner. Chipset.

Useful things. Good things, if they were chosen freely. Gifts, in a **** universe. The same store that sold a transformation called “Daddy Dearest” also sold disease resistance and reading comprehension. The same system that had shredded dignity had taught Cassie’s plasma not to kill Claire.

Nixie followed her gaze. “Your first transformation has already preserved a life.”

Cassie went quiet enough that Van turned toward her.

Nixie’s voice softened but did not become gentle in the way Lyra’s had. Lyra softened to make the room bearable. Nixie softened because she believed the cut was necessary and wanted the patient not to thrash.

“Claire Mercer survived the tyrannosaur because your plasma could be trusted inside impossible proximity. That wasn’t a theoretical benefit or future potential. In that moment, you didn’t have to calculate the blast radius. Your transformed power recognized an ally from the enemy and held the line your unaltered power could not have held.”

Cassie could see it too clearly: Claire trapped, the tyrannosaur’s jaws, the flash of decision arriving before thought. The blast. The beast collapsing. Claire unharmed on the ground afterward, clothing blasted away, body exposed, terror and survival tangled so tightly that neither could be separated from the other.

“You don’t get to use her survival as proof you’re righteous,” Cassie said.

“I am not righteous.”

That stopped her for half a second.

Nixie continued, “I am skilled. I am loyal. I believe the work is necessary. Righteousness is a dangerous word for anyone who alters another person.”

Van stepped closer to the shelf nearest Cassie, not blocking her path but placing himself between her and the most crowded row of crystal. It was not a heroic gesture. It was practical. If her temper slipped, he was closer to the breakable things than she was.

Nixie noticed and smiled at him with genuine approval.

Van saw the approval and disliked it enough to speak more sharply than before. “These girls are people, not accessories.”

Nixie looked puzzled only briefly, then understanding moved across her face. “Of course not. Unless they are eliminated, I suppose. We don’t design accessories here. We are elevating these women for a purpose, Master Van.”

Van’s expression emptied of everything except refusal. “Don’t call me that.”

“As you wish.”

Cassie did not move, that word “eliminated” sat with her like a stone too large to move.

Verena had explained it on intake night with her beautiful voice and administrative calm. Fail to reach one hundred VP by the final challenge and the Hotel would apply an exit transformation. Not ****. Something worse than a clean ending: a person turned into a warning, a household fetish, a pet, a shape that continued after the girl inside had been buried alive.

Nixie had mentioned it as a category distinction.

Cassie’s anger became colder. Easier to hold. Harder to spend.

“What purpose?” she asked. “You keep saying purpose like that makes the rest of the idea better.”

Nixie’s hands folded again. “Purpose does not cleanse. It directs. The Architect has spent years turning your world into a disaster. He does not care whether his Alters kill, maim, or destroy. This system, for all its violations, is attempting to make you harder to break, harder to isolate, harder to waste. I understand why that may not comfort you. It may even insult you. But your anger won’t make incomplete powers better at defeating this impossible foe. It won’t build trust quickly enough to face an enemy who aims for your complete destruction. It won’t teach bodies, instincts, and desires to stop working against one another.”

Cassie stared at her. “You think that’s what you’re doing? Making us whole?”

“No,” Nixie said. “Not by myself. I make changes. Wholeness is what happens if a person survives their changes and keeps enough of themselves after.”

Her voice was too honest to trust, but the words were too reasonable to ignore.

Van’s attention had shifted to a black shelf near the back of the store. “Those have names.”

Nixie followed his gaze. “Public special stock. Lowest-scoring options from the first transformation vote. The options discarded by the audience. They were crafted with care and retain a high degree of compatibility, so they wait here for the contestants to claim when they are ready, at a price of course.”

Cassie turned, reading the four larger plaques that waited beneath four crystal figures.

CLAIRE — BEST IN CLASS

Workouts become more productive and require less recovery time.
NAOMI — BANDIT HONOR
Copy abilities via brief skin contact, borrowing traits to adapt quickly in varied trials.
MARA — WORLD TRAVELER
Natural talent for learning and decoding languages.
EVELYN — PARTNER IN CRIME
Telepathy develops a permanent partial link to the Master, allowing communication but not mind reading at nearly any range.

Van read Evelyn’s twice. His face did something small and unhappy at the word Master.

“That one shouldn’t be sitting on a shelf,” he said.

“It was announced during the ceremony.”

“That explains why people can recognize it. It doesn't explain why you’re selling it.”

Nixie inclined her head. “Because unused paths remain available. Audience rejection is not the same as erasure. It’s redirection into choice, purchase, temptation, and later consequence.”

A light pulsed near the counter.

Nixie turned toward it, then back to Cassie. “There is an available upgrade you are permitted to review.”

Cassie’s answer came before thought. “I am not buying anything.”

“I didn’t ask you to.”

A recessed display case opened beside the counter. A crystal rose from within, larger than the general stock but still small enough to fit in one hand. The figure was stylized, yet Cassie recognized the thin build, the squared stance, the flare of plasma around one hand like frozen fireworks. Her stomach pulled tight at the sight of herself converted into merchandise.

Van did not approach until she did. The plaque brightened when she stood before it.

UPGRADE — COVER GIRL

Cassie’s instincts sharpen for coordinated action. She gains heightened awareness of her teammates’ positions and movements. To capitalize on these gains, her explosive powers become selectively weakened; they no longer injure her teammates. Her own clothing becomes tough enough to withstand the **** of small explosions and impacts.
UPGRADE EFFECTS:
Plasma selectivity improves. Teammates’ clothing and held items are no longer damaged by Cassie’s plasma. Cassie’s own clothing provides increased protection to her entire body regardless of actual coverage.

COST: 5,000 BP

Cassie read it and it felt like being slapped.

The visible effect reached back into the tyrannosaur’s mouth and rewrote the worst aftertaste of saving Claire. No burned clothing. No rescue that left a teammate exposed on the ground. No moment where doing the right thing still gave the Hotel another angle to humiliate someone.

The other effect was worse because it was smarter. Her own clothing provides increased protection to her entire body regardless of actual coverage.

The Hotel had already shortened and tightened what she wore. Now it offers to make that less tactically foolish. It had created the insult, then placed armor underneath it, then priced the correction at five thousand BP.

It offered to turn the violation into a strategy. Cassie’s throat tightened. Nixie did not speak. For once, the silence did not feel like a performance.

Van looked at the crystal statue in front of her. After a moment, he turned his eyes away, not dramatically, just enough to give her the privacy the system had refused.

Her anger did not know where to go with him when he did that. Five thousand BP was far beyond her reach. Even if it were not, she would not buy the thing. Obviously. She would rather chew through a table leg than thank the Hotel for improving its own damage.

But the Architect was real. Claire had almost died. Before being transformed, Cassie’s power could kill a teammate if she misjudged one terrible second. Even if her power could no longer harm someone directly, it could damage life saving efforts, it could strip Claire in the midst of a battle. A practical fix sat in a crystal case, named like a magazine feature, waiting for the day she had enough points to hate herself over the question.

“How generous,” she said.

Nixie answered softly. “It’s a strong upgrade.”

“It’s bait.”

“Yes. Most transformations are. The moral question is not whether desire is being used. It’s whether the thing desire leads you toward is a trap, a tool, or both.”

Van looked at her. “You really believe that makes this better.”

“No. I believe pretending desire is not involved would make me worse at my work.”

Cassie stepped back from the display. “You know what the difference is between you and the Architect?”

Nixie’s posture did not change, but her attention sharpened.

Cassie kept her voice low because the room was still full of crystal, because her blood wanted heat, because one broken figure might become a story she did not get to control.

“He wants to destroy everything and says so out loud, all at once. You want to turn people into whatever your system thinks they should be, and you wrap it in care, craft, survival, purpose, all these pretty little words that make you feel clean enough to sleep. You want to destroy people a bit at a time and call it improvement. Maybe you’re right about some of the benefits. Maybe I am alive longer because of what you people did to me. Maybe Claire is. Maybe the Architect is bad enough that we have to use every ugly advantage this place puts in our hands. But don’t stand there and tell me resistance is part of the process like my fear is raw material for your machine.”

The crystal shelves caught the last word and gave nothing back. Nixie looked at Cassie for several seconds. When she spoke, her voice was quieter than before. “I won’t tell you that your fear belongs to me.”

Cassie almost answered.

Nixie continued. “I will tell you that fear left alone often becomes a smaller cage inside the larger one. I have seen contestants cling to untouched suffering because no one was kind enough, or cruel enough, to insist they could become more. I have also seen transformations used badly. Vulgar work. Lazy work. Punishment pretending to be art. I know the difference, even when that does not absolve me.”

That last sentence landed in the room with no ornament. Cassie did not forgive her. The idea was absurd. But the shape of the enemy changed.

Van said Cassie’s name, very softly. Not a warning. Not an instruction. Just enough to remind her he was there and trying not to touch anything that was not his to touch.

Cassie looked at the crystal version of herself one more time, then turned toward the door. “We’re leaving.”

Van followed at once.

Nixie bowed her head. “I hope you return when you are ready.”

Cassie stopped at the threshold. “I hope someday you understand that being gentle while you hurt people does not make you better than people who enjoy it.”

For the first time, Nixie looked genuinely wounded. Only a little but it was enough. “I know,” she said.

Cassie left before that answer could become another thing she had to carry.

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Naomi bought the wrap after telling herself for five full minutes that she was not going to buy the wrap.

It was not the dark cardigan. She could still take credit for refusing that. Six hundred twenty-five BP for a garment whose primary sin was letting a woman feel less watched was offensive enough that even wanting it had become embarrassing. The wrap Lyra found afterward was different, and Naomi resented the difference because it was clearly the point.

It was pale blue-gray, soft without being fragile, light enough to drape over the shoulders but shaped so it could cross at the front if she needed the extra layer. It did not hide her. It did not display her. It allowed some undecided space between those two demands.

The card read:

STEADY HAND WRAP— 225 BP

This soft and versatile wrap clings comfortably to the shoulders and never slips when tied. Its sturdy fabric and textured weave give something to hold on to.

Naomi had put it back twice.

Now it sat on the counter beside Lizzy’s purple blouse and a dark skirt Lyra had found for a bundle discount. Lizzy kept glancing at her own purchase as if it might vanish if she enjoyed it too openly.

“I can still put it back,” Lizzy said.

Mara, who had not bought anything, leaned her hip against the counter. “You have said that three times, which means you are not trying to decide. You are asking permission to buy it.”

Lizzy’s mouth twisted. “That sounds like something Celia would say.”

“I will accept the insult because it means you think I’m right.”

Lyra folded tissue paper around the blouse. “Wanting a nice thing is not a contract with the system.”

Naomi looked at her. “That depends on the nice thing.”

“Yes,” Lyra said. “It does. A blouse is usually safer than a vow, though I would still read the tag.”

Lizzy laughed, then seemed surprised that she had.

Mara rested a hand near the folded wrap, not touching it. “Naomi?”

Naomi wished everyone would stop being so careful with her. She picked up the wrap. The fabric settled over her fingers with a weight that did not feel like a trap.

Lyra’s hands stilled around the tissue paper.

Naomi kept going because stopping would make the words harder to restart. “I hate that the price is lower because it doesn’t cover enough to count as hiding. I hate that the discount makes sense if you think like this place. I hate that I can feel the enchantment in it, just a little. But I also hate standing in every room feeling like my body is a problem everyone has to route around. If this makes one hour of that easier, I’m not sure refusing it proves anything except that I can suffer neatly.”

Mara’s face softened, but she did not rush into comfort.

Lizzy looked down at her blouse. “That makes me feel better and worse about buying this.”

“Good,” Naomi said. “Then I am not alone.”

Lyra smiled, sad and pleased in equal measure. “I can reduce the wrap to two hundred BP since it’s a first time purchase.”

Mara said nothing, but when Naomi glanced at her, the approval was there without being made into a speech.

Lizzy touched the blouse with a little more confidence after that.


Fiona returned before eighteen hundred because she couldn’t stop thinking about the clock. The third marker opened a door in the air leading back into the hotel when she touched it. She stepped through with sweat cooling at the back of her neck, her pulse finally doing useful work instead of inventing arguments. The lounge was quieter than when she had left. Lamps had brightened toward evening. Somewhere out of sight, dishes clinked faintly, probably preparing dinner.

Claire was still near the bookcase with the heavy history volume open across her lap. Two smaller books sat on the table beside her, along with a pencil and several pages of notes the Hotel had apparently decided to provide. Her hair had slipped forward over one shoulder. She had the expression of someone trying to interrogate an uncooperative witness.

Fiona leaned against the back of the nearest chair. “You’re still reading. Find anything useful?”

Claire turned the book around. Half the page was in English. The rest was not. “I can’t read this shit.” Her voice demonstrated a deep frustration and she covered her mouth in sudden shame. “I’m sorry.”

Fiona smiled at the expletive then stared at the text. “What is that? Is that Greek?”

“Apparently the Hotel was extremely active in ancient Greece.”

“Why?”

“I was hoping the book would tell me, but it’s difficult.” Claire tapped one line with the pencil. “There are references to patronage, household structures, hero cults, sacred hospitality, and several terms I cannot read because I don’t know Greek. The English sections imply entire seasons were built around classical social frameworks, which is fascinating in the same way a venomous animal is fascinating.”

“Can the terminal translate it?”

Claire pointed to a small side screen glowing beside the chair.

LANGUAGE COMPREHENSION AVAILABLE THROUGH APPROPRIATE TRANSFORMATION PATHS, STORE OPTIONS, OR ASSISTED STUDY.

Fiona read it twice, then laughed without humor. “Of course. They left you a history book you can only partly read, then suggested you buy the missing half.” Fiona glanced at Claire again, “And you are still reading it.”

Claire looked down at the book. “Yes.”

“That is how they get you.”

“I know.” Claire turned a page with care. “The irritating part is that partial information is still information. If the Hotel wants curiosity to become a purchase route, refusing to learn anything only gives it a monopoly.”

Fiona had no immediate answer for that. She pushed away from the chair. “I’m changing for dinner.”

“You have twenty minutes.”

Fiona left before the history book could become another thing she would have to think about.


Evelyn and Katherine reached the dining corridor with no map and more certainty that a map would have been insulting.

“The facility is not open,” Evelyn said. “It’s curated.”

Katherine walked beside her, hands clasped loosely behind her back. “Recreation, clothing, personal care, quiet rooms, some garden access, selected exercise spaces, reading material, and at least one store dedicated to transformation. Strategic areas remain blocked, staff-only areas despite no visible staff, and decorative spaces may replace functional spaces without warning.”

“That was a very thorough report.”

“It’s a preliminary report only. A complete one would involve stolen keys, floor plans, and less cooperation from the building.” Katherine’s fingers curled possessively, itching to steal something, to be useful.

They turned a corner and saw Mara, Lizzy, and Naomi emerging from the clothing corridor with small bags.

Lizzy lifted a hand in greeting, then seemed to check her enthusiasm. Naomi carried her bag close to her side. Mara’s hands were empty, but her expression had changed in a way Evelyn would not have called lighter.

Katherine saw the bags. “Evidence ripens quickly.”

Evelyn looked toward the corridor behind them. “Should we ask?”

“Not out here, they’ll want to show everyone at dinner.”

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Cassie did not speak for three corridors after leaving Nixie’s store.

Van respected the silence, which was either wise or lucky. The Hotel shifted back to warmer lighting around them, as if gold lamps and soft carpet could rinse the memory of black shelves and crystal bodies from her skin. Cassie kept the store intact in her mind instead. Power Cycle. Chipset. Clean Bill. Daddy Dearest. Cover Girl in a case with her own body turned into a sales model.

When she finally spoke, her voice came out flatter than she expected, “You read the upgrade.”

“Not closely, it seemed intrusive.”

“Say something stupid and I’ll throw you through whatever decorative painting the hallway gives us next.”

Van took that in, then answered slowly. “You seemed to think it could be useful or you wouldn’t be so angry.”

Cassie closed her eyes for one step, then opened them.

She wanted to shout, but took a deep breath, “Yeah.”

“I also hated that she was proud of it. Not smug. Proud. Like someone made a tool that worked and wanted us to appreciate the craftsmanship.”

Cassie looked at him despite herself.

He kept his eyes forward. “I don’t know how to talk about any of this without making it sound like I think my opinion counts. But I saw that plaque and thought about what happened to your clothes. Then I hated myself for thinking about something that embarrasses you, even privately. That’s exactly what this place wants.”

That was the first thing he had said since the store that did not make Cassie want to cut him off.

“You have a bad lying face,” she said.

“I wasn’t lying.”

“I know, that’s why you remain un-exploded.” then after consideration, “Non-exploded?”

Van refused to help her choose. Instead he gestured forward.

They reached an intersection. One sign pointed toward the dining wing. Another pointed back toward the lounge. A third direction held only a small symbol Cassie did not recognize: a stylized curve inside a square, no words attached.

Van looked at it too quickly.

Cassie caught him. “Is that it? Your mystery spot?”

“That is the direction, I think. It’s supposed to be out by the lake, but every restaurant I checked seemed to be there.”

“Don’t tell me, this surprise is your greatest challenge yet.” Her voice was comically firm with mock seriousness.

The voices from the lounge reached them faintly. Lizzy saying something too bright. Mara answering with her gentle voice. Fiona complaining about having twenty minutes to change. Claire talking about ancient Greece with the exhausted fascination of someone who had found a locked door in book form.

Cassie looked down the wordless corridor. “You found this earlier and didn’t tell anyone?”

“Yes.” Then as she seemed to be waiting for more, he continued. Van rubbed his thumb against the side of his hand, then stopped when he noticed himself doing it. “Because you told me to find somewhere not boring. Not everyone. I figured if I announced it, the Hotel would either make a production out of it or someone would feel obligated to approve it. I didn’t want a committee deciding whether your assigned bond time was acceptable.”

Cassie stared at him. He looked nervous now. Not guilty. Not apologetic. Nervous and prepared, which was a different combination on him.

“If this is stupid,” she said, “I am blaming you.”

“That seems reasonable.”

“If this is secretly a malt shop with better branding, I am setting something on fire.”

“You said that already.”

“This is not a romantic date. This is assigned bonding period. If you picked something romantic, it’s gonna make me want to bite through a fork.”

Van considered the corridor. “I can’t promise it won’t make you want to bite through a fork. I don’t yet have a complete fork-biting profile for you. But it’s not the kind of romantic I think you mean.”

Cassie almost smiled.

He saw enough to look away before she could punish him for it.

Cassie stepped into the corridor first. After half a pace, she glanced back and found him following behind her.

“No,” she said.

He stopped. “No?”

“You don’t trail after me like I’m an escorted prisoner. Walk beside me.”

Van moved up at once. They went forward together, the hallway curving ahead before either of them could see what waited at the end.

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