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Chapter 7
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What is the voice saying?
Confronted by Police
“Keep having fun! Write your number on the wall.”
Target > 20, 1d100 roll+10=89, successful suggestion (+1 corruption)
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 11
Hannah feels exhilarated. She can’t quite believe her little adventure with the two hoodlums is over. A part of her wants to go again. While Carter’s cum drips down her face, she finds a sharpie in her purse and writes her number on the back of the door. She licks her lips. It needs a nice come on, so she adds ‘For a fucking great time with a sexy bitch’ underneath.
The man outside knocks on the door again. “Are you using **** in there?”
Hannah licks the cum off her lips and tries to think of what to do.
“Manners! Tell him to wait while you masturbate.”
Target > 40, 1d100 roll+11=58, successful suggestion (+1 corruption)
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 12
“Hold on!” she cries out. “I’ve got to rub one out.”
Hannah hikes up her skirt and sits on the toilet seat. Her right thumb circles her nipple as she runs her left index finger along her pussy lips. She closes her eyes and thinks of Carter fingering her on the subway train, her helpless, him playing with her wet womanhood. She thinks of him and his friend taking her somewhere and having their way with her, not just a blowjob, not just a facial, but… She is so fucking close. She is going to cum. She pinches her nipple and gasps, and then…
*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK* “Open up now! Police!”
“Unlock the door, kneel there and say 'Complimentary Cock Sucking Sir?’”
Target > 70, 1d100 roll+12=40, failed suggestion.
Hannah Davis Corruption Points: 12
Fuck, she can’t finish here. She's so close, but they are about to break down the door. She quickly wipes some cum off her face with a paper towel, fixes her skirt, and then unlocks. A portly police officer named Steve slams it open.
Hannah makes herself small. “I’m sorry officer, is there a problem?”
Steve’s face is red from the exertion of getting here and screaming. He looks at the remains of cum on Hannah’s face, and then behind and around her.
“M’am, did you just have sex in this public restroom?”
Hannah trembles. “No, sir.”
“M’am, it is a crime to lie to a police officer. Did you just have sex here?”
Comment a suggestion from the voice for Hannah.
What is the voice saying?
The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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