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Chapter 3 by FINN 0815 FINN 0815

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Characters with Pictures and paths. Spoilers! Only for readers who are up to date with the story.

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The Cast of The Mind Control Device

Finn Lynchwood. 21.

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That's me, but you knew that... uh... I, I knew that...

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After I saved an obviously crazy billionaire from one of those yellow cabs in New York, he gave me the MCD. With this apparently incredibly powerful device, I can now lead the people around me (mostly women... what can I say?) onto so-called paths, sexualized behavior that corresponds to an assigned kink. I often find this sexy, especially with girls I don't like. Sometimes I have to get used to it, and sometimes it's a real challenge to lead someone onto a path when I don't know how it will affect the girl, especially if I like her a lot.

But so far, the MCD has proven to be a godsend and not only given me free access to some of the sexiest and most charming girls I know, I've also found several loving relationships and gathered people in my life who mean everything to me.

And yes, sometimes I enjoy making some girls suffer, especially my enemies and those who deserve it. But in the end, one thing always becomes clear. The MCD ensures that we all feel safe and free in this crazy and sexually charged world full of fucking and loving.


Tammy Lynchwood. 18. Little Girl "I'm sorry Daddy" (Star Yuki)

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My annoying little sister, the youngest of the family. At 18, she's a naughty little beast who doesn't know how good she has it in life. I like her but sometimes she drives me to despair.

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Liking my sadistic, annoying little sister is really a challenge. When she's my sweet little princess, it's a lot easier. Now that I've activated and put her on the path to becoming an obedient sweet little girl, I just have to come to terms with the fact that from now on I am fully responsible for my Pumpkin. Tammy seems to like this role now, and even though she doesn't seem to have fully adjusted to her new life yet, she's completely comfortable in her role as a helpless thing that can snuggle up to me and rely on me. Sometimes I still see the old girl in her but more and more often she lets go and blossoms in my presence as a dependent but intelligent little creature. Okay, and sometimes her bratty attitude still comes out, but that's nothing a throughout spanking can't fix, again, something that Tammy seems to like. No work, no stress, no responsibility. Tammy has always behaved like this, but now this behavior is finally healthy for my little daughter.

The only thing that still concerns her and me in our relationship is how much she wants to embrace her role as daughter and how far she wants to distance herself from the (perhaps still salvageable) little sister. Can we make her both, or is Tammy happier with the obvious direction of her path?


Rose Lynchwood. 20. Best bro "Right behind you bro!" (Hanna Owo)

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20 years old. My middle sister. Adopted, just like me, we should really stick together in this... challenging family. Unfortunately, we don't do that often and like a rose, it's dangerous to hold Rose too tightly or too often. I wish we would stick together better.

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My God, I'm so lucky to have Rose in my life. After she became my Best Bro, she's become an indispensable part of my life, and it's not just the regular, incredibly good sex we have that makes her so precious to me. Whenever I have doubts, Rose is there to help me. Whenever I need advice, Rose is there to share her thoughts with me. Whenever I need closeness, Rose warms me with her body and her amazingly deep and pure soul... And whenever I want my cock sucked... Rose is always there for me. So much so that I feel like I'm starting to... I know there's more to this than just the friendship between adopted brother and adopted sister, and the question is just which of us will say it first.

But still, more than any of my other girls, Rose is her own mistress, and I see the conflict in her when she sees the progress score on my MCD and that she's falling behind other girls. It seems that she wants to find a way to bring her PS up to the level that her feelings for me already are.


Jasmine Lynchwood. 23. Caretaker "Let me take care of you hubby! (Mila Azul)

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23, two years older than me. She is perfect. And I hate her for it. And I respect her for it. She is really successful. I can't really say much more about her, as she is hardly ever at home, and when she is, then only halfway, always with her head in her work.

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With the dissolution of the old norms and values ​​in the Lynchwood family, and my rise as head of the house and undisputed owner of every woman in it, my big sister had to find a new path for herself. Now, after many fights, discussions, and ass-fuckings, as well as the use of various perks, she finally sees that submitting to me is the perfect path for her.

As an obedient domestic housewife who doesn't place much value on education, a career, or social standing but finds her worth in fulfilling her beloved hubby's every wish, Jasmine has found her calling in keeping my belly full, my balls empty, and my life peaceful. Low maintenance and devotion to our common goals make her happier than she's ever been in her life, and since realizing this, it's been easier for her to say goodbye to everything that doesn't concern me.


Michelle Lynchwood. 38. Petplay "Are you my new owner?" (Magui Ansuz)

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My adoptive mother. Sometimes I think she only 'bought' me so she could have a man in the house who she could blame for everything bad. She can be nice, but more often than that she's a real bitch!

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While Jasmine has found a way after accepting her fate, this option is no longer available to Michelle. For her, it's still about dealing with losing her humanity and becoming a trusting, naive little puppy, completely dependent on me, with no agenda of her own and only basic instincts in her head. We're both still conflicted about whether I should keep my elderly mother, but unlike Tyammy or even Rose, perhaps even more so than Jasmine, Michelle is entirely responsible for my situation before the MCD, and I don't know if I need a maternal figure in my life. Maybe I don't even want her, since I have Jasmine. Mom is certainly better off as a puppy, even if she may never see it that way. But it's outside of her power to even decide what she'll have for dinner, and so the question of how much I turn Mom into a puppy or a bitch, and how much humanity I leave her with, is entirely up to me.


Lynchwood Home. "My Home. My Rules"

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We all live together in a small terraced house in the suburbs of New York. It's cramped and complicated with me and my family, and having to share a room with my sister Rose doesn't make things any better...

If the rich mysterious (and obviously crazy) multi-billionaire had told me I wanted to marry my big sister, I would have thought he was... well... I said he's obviously crazy. Now, with the MCD, not only do I have a changed, improved family, I also have a house of my own that bends to my every wish and strives to improve my life in it (her? is it a she?). From fresh fruit in the fridge to little favors like opening or closing doors, I believe this is just the beginning of the things my home can do for me. Who knows what the future holds or what surprises the Lynchwood Home will have in store for me.


Lisa Moreau. 19. E-Girl "Please look at me!" (Alice Delish)

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Lisa, along with Ryan is my best friend and buddy. Even though we are very similar in temperament, we get along brilliantly and while I prefer to hide my wild side because of my family, Lisa is a person who has always been extremely shy and socially awkward. After all, not even her huge efforts can ensure that no one would notice her magnificent body and warm nature. That doesn't bother me but I wish I could give her something that could bring Lisa out of her shell, even if only for a moment so that she could shine in a light deserving of her. This girl has something that she can show the world if she only would dare.

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I don't know who would be more shocked to see the changes happening to my best friend Lisa. Right now she's still shocked about how she's acting as a bubbly outgoing e-girl but I see it in her every move. Lisa Moreau enjoys being free and happy. She needs me for that but that's something that doesn't bother either me or her and if I can help her in any way with her transformation then I will do everything in my power to help her deal with the upcoming rum and notoriety that comes with her path. In the end she will be happy, I will make sure of that. The only question is how much she will cling to her old, cute life once she's famous on the internet.


Ryan Shaft. 20. The Wingman "Talk to me Goose"

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As my best friend since childhood, Ryan has been with me through every difficult phase of my life, just as I have with him. There is little that could divide us and so far we have not come across anything. Together with Lisa, we form a group of friends who support each other and stand by each other. Of course, there are sometimes tense situations with Ryan and he seems to be particularly thin-skinned when I have been in contact with other girls. Apart from Lisa, this is fortunately not often the case...


Bella Taubner. 20. The cow I need milking, Moooooo!" (Ellie Nova)

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I don't know much about Bella but she seems nice, if a little shy. But she smiled at me very sweetly. Maybe she's telling me more than her withdrawn behavior suggests?

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Bella is one of those cases where I'm really glad to have Rose by my side. If it weren't for her, I would probably cope worse with the change from the fun-loving, witty Bella to a human cow than Bella herself. She, as well as I, still have to find out how our lives will change once my new girlfriend's PS increases. One thing is certain: I'll be by her side once she changes. And one thing is also certain: Bella will find a home with me that will guarantee her protection and flourishing. What isn't certain is how the sex with my sonn to be girlfriend will go and what we'll do with the excess milk that will soon be in our fridge.


Heather Taubner (Molly Little)

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She's the best friend of my sister Rose. I don't know much of her besides that she can be a little much sometimes and likes to go out partying and clubbing with my sister. All in all I don't think she is a bad influence to Rose, but neither a particular good one.

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Candice Barber. 21. The Painslut "That hurts so good!" (Little Caprice)

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Candice is the leader of the group of friends that have come together in the volleyball club where I help out part-time. She is a real pain in the ass, rich, arrogant and self-confident, she makes no secret of how much she despises me. I don't know why though. Maybe she's just evil?

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Pain is what she wants and pain is what she gets. Fuck, pain is what she deserves. Candice is one of the few people with whom I am glad that the MCD has given me the opportunity to live out my all too human, dark thoughts. So far we have specialized in humiliating her and inflicting only a little pain on her body, but since our last encounter, I know how good it feels to ram my cock deep into her until she crushes. And Candice seems to see it exactly the same way. Driven by guilt, as well as a desire for punishment, she is the one who offers herself to me as a punching bag so that I can treat my other girls well and more favorably. At some point, Candice and I will have to ask ourselves how far her desire for pain and humiliation goes, but until then we will both have a lot of fun punishing my little painslut.


Lynn Huoa. 20. The Rival. "I will destroy you!" (Lucy Mochi Doll)

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Lynn has her family's money to thank for her ability to play in the club I run. But she's really good at volleyball. Unfortunately, that doesn't stop her from constantly picking fights with me and so far (before the MCD), I haven't been able to stand up to her.

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Turns out, being the child of rich and famous parents is no guarantee that you won't suffer from inferiority complexes and anxieties. Lynn discovered that when I, even unintentionally, turned her world upside down and left her naked and humiliated in front of a stranger. And all because she lost a bet. Now fun and games are her life. Well, more games than fun, because I make sure to use her path to keep her on a short leash. And even though I certainly sympathize with her, the fact that she enjoys repeatedly using her body as collateral for our bets is something I can definitely benefit from. Especially because I find her cute little titties very attractive, even if I would never tell her that. That wouldn't be very funny.

I'm still trying to understand what it means to have the daughters of a super-rich father in my hands, but as long as I don't lose myself and Lynn has fun with it, the world is our oyster. As for their humiliation, just as much as my gains. But if I'm not careful, I'll be the one who loses, and not just my dignity, but also something I hold dear.


Sonya Mackintosh. 20. The Robot "Beep boop beep Yes Sir!" (Lerabuns)

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Calm, distant and calculating, Sonya practically has the engineering degree in the bag. And if not, then her parents' money is enough to buy her a place at university. She makes no secret of the fact that her mind will get her ahead, even though I know that she knows how to use her killer body to her advantage (and my disadvantage).

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I've always been fascinated by technology. And now I have my own robot that does everything I command! I don't know how anyone can rationalize this, but after I got her on her path in the gym, Sonya slowly but surely realized that she no longer controlled her mind and body. With a word from me, I can make her do whatever I want. With a gesture, I can control her thoughts. On the one hand, it's scary to think about it... On the other hand, with the many pages she sent me, her instruction manual, it's incredible to imagine all the things I can do with her. With her slavish devotion to me and her inhuman abilities, I've only just scratched the surface of what I can do with Sonya... and what Sonya can do for me.

Aside from the incredibly good sex, I'll surely have with her soon, I absolutely have to try out what abilities she brings with her now that she's my robot. The sky is the limit.


Rania Naziri. 19. The thief "My precious!" (Emily Willis)

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As a newcomer to the volleyball club and its toxic group of friends, Rania still has to prove herself. Her sweet behavior is a sign that the Lebanese woman has not been in contact with her friends for long, but perhaps long enough for them to steal her kind nature.

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I had such high hopes for Rania. Of all the devilish volleyball bitches, she was the one I most hoped would become a good friend to me. Now she's stealing everything I declare as my "most valuable possession." So far, only worthless things and my pillow, especially things I don't miss, but which will earn me a hot, willing fuck with the Lebanese beauty. The disappointment is great within me, but my desire to fuck her is greater.

Perhaps a more lucrative opportunity for her skills will arise in the future since she managed to break into my house, the Lynchwood Home. Or I can experiment with her skills, just as I would with the definition of my "most valuable possession." What if it's not physical? What if someone else owns it? What if she herself is supposed to be my most valuable possession? Even if Rania is a criminal, she's bound to me in this strange way, and I won't let her go, neither away from me nor into prison. But she doesn't need to know that.


Lakota Johnston. 21. (Zendaya Coleman)

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The undisputed leader of our class and, after Tana, her best friend, the most intelligent. With an iron will and a clear mind, our class leader leads us through the battle of life. And if one of us isn't paying attention in class, then they have to deal with her quick reflexes and sharp humor. Lakota has a rebellious spirit, that's what I like about her, and she fights for those who stand by her as well as for the weaker members of society.

Tana Hinata. 20.

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Daughter of a Japanese father and an American mother, Tana is the valedictorian of our school and lets everyone who doesn't live up to her (unattainable) expectations know it. Achievement and concentration on the task are her top priority. No wonder that I, with my life thrown off track and with a difficult family, must seem like a caveman to her and her well organised life.


Susan Webster. 28. (Karen Fukuhara)

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My favorite teacher, she is nice, social and really used to the fate and life of her students. A little too young to be respected by the rest of the class, but I am glad that Susan... Miss Webster is so patient and polite with us. And even if the others don't realize it, I see her as a strong, mature woman and a valuable support in my difficult life.

Sofia Wilkins. 18. Two in one "We're so alike!" (Emma Myers)

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I have liked Sofia ever since she sat behind me in class. We often talk in class, as long as it doesn't get too much for Lisa. Sofia is open-minded, bright and tries to be funny, something that I, and Ryan, really appreciate about her. Unfortunately, she is constantly trying to measure herself against the two intellectual leaders of our class and I see that, sometimes, can get a bit too much for the nice and sweet girl.

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Sage DeSanto. 19. Two in one "We're so alike!" (Jenna Ortega)

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I quickly learned to enjoy Sage only in small portions. Not that she's evil or anything, but if the universe is a center full of order, strictness and healthy behavior, then Sage is the furthest thing from that. She always seems to be in a good mood, if a little distant, but I'm also a little too afraid to look into the eye of the storm and see what Sage is really like.

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As the newest member of our group of friends, Sofia is doing surprisingly well. She's bright and funny, and she's just as good to all of us as we are to her. We make a good team. And that's necessary, since her path has inextricably linked her to her opposite, Sage De Santo.

Sage is someone who still has trouble fitting into our group. Being connected to Sofia Wilkins on an intimate and inseparable level must surely be an even bigger shock for her than for the other girl.

At least Sofia is open to Sage, and Sage tolerates Sofia for now. The three of us form a team, not only studying for college but also for the upcoming adventures and exams that two girls, who will develop a combined spirit, will have to face, along with a boy who feels responsible for both of them.

I can't say what the future holds. Sofia is sweet and kind, Sage is spicy and mean. The two of them together could become something great if I take good care of them. After all, it's my responsibility and my actions that will guide them, and no matter how the girls get along with their shared minds and two bodies, I will take care of both of them, even if they have different needs.

And who knows what the future will bring for me and this uneven pair?

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