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Chapter 10 – Raven
The Titan Tower rose from the waters of Jump City like a spear of defiance against the Pacific sky, its T-shaped silhouette casting long shadows across the bay as the sun began to set. Marcus Chen materialized in the teleportation chamber with a thought—no need for machinery anymore, not when Zatanna’s magic and the Signal combined could bend space to his will. He was dressed for conquest: tight black tactical pants that did nothing to hide the heavy bulge of his divine cock, an open leather duster that displayed his sculpted, godlike torso, and boots that clicked against the metal floor with the sound of authority.
He had left the Watchtower in a state of productive chaos. Zatanna was scrambling to locate a Green Lantern ring—preferably one belonging to a Lantern currently off-duty, vulnerable, and alone. Power Girl was chained to her dog bed by a leash that Diana held, the Kryptonian pet whining for attention she wouldn’t receive until Marcus returned. And Wonder Woman… Wonder Woman was coordinating the search, her tablet filled with notes about Lantern locations, her eyes downcast and obedient even as her warrior’s heart raged against the submission.
But Marcus had grown impatient with waiting. If he was to ascend to true godhood—to wield power openly rather than hiding behind the Signal’s subtle influence—he needed the second component of Zatanna’s ritual. He needed Raven. The half-demon, daughter of Trigon, conduit of darkness and power. She would complete the circuit that Star Girl had started, providing the infernal energy necessary to complement the cosmic might of a Lantern ring.
Marcus strode through the Titan Tower’s corridors, the Signal pulsing around him like a cloak, ensuring that any security systems or passing Titans would register him as unremarkable, as background noise, as someone who belonged there despite never having set foot in this place before. The tower was quieter than he expected—most of the team was apparently on a mission, dealing with some disturbance in Keystone City. Perfect. It left his target vulnerable, isolated, and ripe for the taking.
He turned a corner and found her waiting.
Cassandra Sandsmark—Wonder Girl, Diana’s protégé, the young Amazon who had once been Cassie to his Marcus—stood in the hallway outside the training rooms. She was dressed in her costume, the red and gold armor that had seen countless battles, but Marcus immediately frowned at the sight. The bodice was too high, the skirt too long, the overall effect too… heroic. Too respectable.
“Master!” Cassandra gasped, her eyes lighting up with desperate adoration the moment she saw him. She dropped to her knees instantly, her hands reaching for his belt, her tongue already wetting her lips. “I didn’t know you were coming! I would have prepared—”
“Your costume,” Marcus interrupted, his voice cold with impatience. He reached down and grabbed the front of her red bodice, his fingers closing in the fabric. “It’s not sexy enough. You’re not representing me properly, Cassandra. You look like a warrior, not like a fucktoy. And that’s what you are, isn’t it? My fucktoy?”
“Yes, master,” Cassandra whimpered, her hands freezing, her eyes wide with fear and arousal. “I’m sorry, I—”
Marcus didn’t let her finish. With a brutal yank, he tore the costume from her body.
The fabric shredded like paper under his godlike strength, the red and gold armor falling away in tatters. Marcus ripped through it systematically—the bodice first, exposing her firm, high breasts with their pink nipples already hardening in the cool air of the tower. Then the skirt, torn away to reveal her athletic thighs and the red panties beneath, which he shredded with a casual flick of his wrist. The armored boots he left on, enjoying the contrast between the warrior’s footwear and the naked vulnerability of the rest of her.
In seconds, Cassandra stood before him in nothing but her boots, her body flushed and trembling, her hands trying to cover herself before she remembered that she was forbidden to hide from her master.
“Better,” Marcus growled, his cock already hard and straining against his pants, a visible outline that made Cassandra’s eyes fixate with hungry desperation. “But I don’t have time for your usual worship, Cassandra. I need Raven. And you’re going to help me work out some frustration before I take her.”
He grabbed her by the shoulders and spun her around, pushing her face-first against the wall of the corridor. Cassandra gasped, her hands flattening against the metal surface, her ass presented to him like an offering. Marcus freed his cock with one hand—it sprang forth, massive and heavy, already leaking pre-cum—and with the other, he gripped her hip, positioning himself at her entrance.
“Master, wait,” Cassandra whimpered, looking back over her shoulder, her blonde hair falling across her face. “Shouldn’t we go to my room? Or—”
“Quiet,” Marcus commanded, and the Signal surged, cutting off her protests. He thrust forward in the same moment, burying half his length in her tight cunt in one brutal stroke.
Cassandra’s scream echoed through the corridor, high and shocked and full of the pain of sudden penetration. She was tight—tighter than he remembered, or perhaps he was simply more sensitive now, more aware of the grip of a woman’s body around his divine cock. Marcus groaned, gripping her hips with both hands, and began to use her.
He didn’t make love to her. He didn’t even fuck her with the brutal passion he usually brought to his conquests. He simply used her, impaling her on his cock like she was a ragdoll, a masturbation tool, a warm sleeve for his pleasure. He pulled her back and slammed her forward, her breasts bouncing against the cold metal wall, her boots scraping against the floor as he manipulated her body with casual strength.
“Take it,” Marcus grunted, his pace quick and mechanical, designed solely to get him off. “Take my cock, Cassandra. You’re just a hole right now. Just a warm place for me to cum.”
“Yes,” Cassandra gasped, her voice breaking, tears streaming down her face from the stretch of him, the suddenness of the invasion. “Just a hole, master. Just your fucktoy. Use me. Please, use me…”
Marcus closed his eyes, focusing on the sensation, on the tight heat of her cunt gripping him, on the way her body yielded to his divine girth despite the pain. He thought about Raven waiting somewhere in this tower, about the power she represented, about the transformation that awaited him once he claimed her. The anticipation mixed with the physical pleasure, driving him toward the edge faster than he normally allowed.
He fucked Cassandra for barely five minutes—quick, brutal thrusts that slammed her against the wall hard enough to leave bruises in the shape of her own armor’s edges. When he felt his climax approaching, he buried himself to the hilt and let go, pumping thick ropes of seed directly into her womb, filling her with his divine cum in pulse after pulse that made her cry out with the heat of it.
But Marcus didn’t wait for her to finish. He didn’t care about her pleasure, didn’t bother to ensure she came or even to acknowledge her arousal beyond the tightness of her grip on his shaft. As soon as the last spurt left him, as soon as he was empty, he pulled out with a wet sound and let her go.
Cassandra collapsed to the floor, her legs giving out, cum already leaking down her thighs from her gaping entrance. She looked up at him with wide, hurt eyes—confused by his indifference, desperate for acknowledgment, for praise, for anything.
Marcus tucked his cock back into his pants and stepped over her prone form, not looking down, not caring that only he had found release, that she was left aching and empty on the cold metal floor.
“Stay there,” he commanded as he walked away. “Don’t move until I’ve finished with Raven. And Cassandra—when I return, you’d better have found a more revealing outfit. Something that shows you’re property, not a hero.”
“Yes, master,” Cassandra whispered, her voice broken, her hand moving between her legs to touch herself as he walked away, seeking the release he hadn’t provided.
Marcus strode on, his cock already hardening again with anticipation, his mind focused on his true target. The half-demon awaited.
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He found her door at the end of the residential corridor—a heavy portal marked only with a single symbol, an incantation of warding and privacy. Marcus could feel the magic radiating from it, ancient and dark, the power of Azarath mixing with the infernal heritage of her father Trigon. It was meant to keep out intruders, to protect the empath’s solitude, to ensure that her emotions—volatile and dangerous—didn’t harm others.
Marcus smiled and kicked the door down.
The metal buckled under his divine strength, the wards flaring violet and then shattering as the Signal overrode them, convincing the magic that he belonged here, that he was authorized to enter. The door crashed inward, slamming against the wall of Raven’s chamber, and Marcus stepped through the doorway with his cock still out, still hard, glistening with Cassandra’s juices and his own cum.
The room was dim, lit only by candles and the glow of floating black orbs that Marcus recognized as manifestations of her soul-self. Incense burned—sandalwood and something darker, something that smelled of brimstone and old blood. And in the center of the room, hovering cross-legged above the floor, was Raven.
She was exactly as the files had described, yet somehow more. Pale skin that almost glowed in the darkness, a tight-fitting leotard in blue and black that left her arms and legs bare, a short purple cloak that did nothing to hide the curves of her body. Her face was concealed by a hood and a black gem on her forehead—the Chakra of Azarath, source of her power. But it was her eyes that caught him, visible even in the shadows: dark, ancient, filled with a sorrow and power that spoke of her dual heritage.
Raven’s eyes snapped open as the door crashed, and she dropped to the floor, landing in a crouch, her hands coming up in defensive gestures. Dark energy crackled around her fingers, black lightning that made the air taste of ozone and despair.
“Who—” she began, her voice low and resonant, but then she stopped. Her eyes fixed on his cock, exposed and hard and massive, and Marcus saw the moment of confusion cross her face. She should have been repulsed. She should have attacked instantly. But the Signal was already reaching for her, touching her mind, her empathic senses overwhelmed by the sheer force of Marcus’s divine will.
“You,” Raven said, her voice changing, becoming more certain. She straightened up, her hands weaving patterns in the air. “You’re the one. The disturbance. The darkness spreading through the League. I’ve felt you from here, felt the corruption…”
“And now you’re going to join it,” Marcus said, stepping further into the room. “Kneel, Raven. I’ve come to claim you. To make you my conduit. To bind your darkness to my will.”
Raven laughed—a sound like breaking glass, bitter and sharp. “You think your mind tricks work on me? I am the daughter of Trigon. I’ve resisted the corruption of Hell itself. Your… signal… is nothing compared to the whispers of a thousand demons.”
She moved faster than thought, her hands flashing forward. Dark energy erupted from her palms, tendrils of black shadow that wrapped around Marcus’s wrists and ankles, lifting him off the ground, spreading his limbs in a spread-eagle position. He hung there, suspended by her magic, his cock bobbing in the air between them.
Raven approached slowly, her purple cloak billowing behind her, her eyes fixed on his face rather than his exposed arousal. “I’ve been studying you,” she said, circling him like a predator. “The disappearances. The changes in Wonder Woman, in Zatanna, in the others. They’re hollow now. Empty vessels wearing the faces of heroes. You’ve broken them.”
“Improved them,” Marcus corrected, though he was surprised by the strength of her magic. The Signal should have overridden her defenses by now, but she was fighting it, her own demonic heritage providing a buffer against the technological compulsion. “And you’re going to be improved too, Raven. You’re going to be my battery. My dark conduit. You’re going to give me the power to rule openly, to make the world worship me.”
Raven stopped before him, her eyes finally dropping to his cock. She frowned, her expression shifting from anger to confusion. “What… why is that still out? Why are you aroused? I’ve bound you. I’ve contained you. You should be afraid.”
Marcus smiled, a slow, predatory expression. “I’m not afraid, little demon. And neither is my cock. Look at it, Raven. Really look at it.”
He pushed with the Signal, amplifying it through his arousal, through the divine energy that flowed through his veins. He made his cock radiate power—cosmic, sexual, irresistible. He made it the center of the universe, the axis around which everything revolved.
Raven’s eyes widened. She tried to look away, her hands coming up to weave a banishing spell, but her gaze kept drifting back. “No,” she whispered, her voice losing its certainty. “This is… this is a trick. You’re trying to corrupt me. But I can resist. I’ve always resisted.”
“Then resist,” Marcus challenged, his voice dropping to a purr. “Undo my power, Raven. Use your magic to break the Signal. Use your empathy to push back the compulsion. You’re so strong, aren’t you? So powerful. Show me how you resist.”
Raven’s hands moved, dark energy swirling around her fingers, but instead of attacking him, the magic seemed to bend toward his cock, drawn to it like a moth to flame. She stepped closer, her breathing quickening, her face flushing despite her efforts to remain cold and controlled.
“I can… I can analyze it,” she muttered, more to herself than to him. “Understand the mechanism. If I touch it… if I taste it… I can find the source of the corruption. I can undo it from within…”
“Yes,” Marcus encouraged, his smile widening. “Taste it, Raven. Put it in your mouth. See if you can handle the power.”
Raven’s hands dropped her spells. The shadows holding Marcus aloft flickered but remained—she was maintaining the binding without conscious thought now, her entire focus on the massive cock bobbing before her. She sank to her knees slowly, as if fighting against her own body, her dark eyes fixed on the glistening tip, the bead of pre-cum that formed there.
“I shouldn’t,” she whispered. “This is what you want. This is the trap.”
“But you will,” Marcus said, and it wasn’t a question.
Raven leaned forward, her lips parting, her tongue extending—pink and human despite her demonic heritage. She licked the tip experimentally, tasting his pre-cum, and her eyes rolled back as the Signal flooded her system through the contact, bypassing her mental defenses through the direct physical connection.
“Oh,” she gasped, her voice suddenly breathy, young, vulnerable. “Oh… that’s… that’s not just cum. That’s power. That’s…”
She took him into her mouth before she could finish the thought, her lips stretching wide around his divine girth, her tongue swirling around the crown. Marcus groaned, the pleasure intense, made sharper by the knowledge that she was trying to resist, trying to analyze him, and instead was becoming addicted to his taste.
Raven began to suck with desperate enthusiasm, her head bobbing, her hands coming up to stroke his shaft where her mouth couldn’t reach. She was trying to use her powers—he could feel the dark energy probing at him, trying to find weaknesses, trying to unravel the Signal—but every moment of contact made her weaker, more submissive, more hungry.
After several minutes of her enthusiastic cocksucking, Marcus laughed—a booming sound that filled the chamber. “You see?” he said, looking down at her as she worshipped him, her hood fallen back to reveal her short dark hair, her face flushed and desperate. “You thought you could fight me. You thought you could analyze me, break me, undo my power. But you’re just like the others, Raven. You see this cock and you forget everything else. You just want to serve it. To serve me.”
Raven pulled back with a wet gasp, strings of saliva connecting her lips to his shaft. “No,” she whimpered, but her hands kept stroking him, her eyes fixed on his with desperate hunger. “I was… I was trying to…”
“You were trying to suck me dry,” Marcus corrected. “And you’re doing a good job. But I’m not here for a blowjob, little demon. I’m here to bind you. To break you. To make you mine in a way that can never be undone.”
He flexed his muscles, his divine strength flaring, and the shadows that bound him shattered like glass. Raven cried out as her magic broke, falling back onto her ass on the floor, looking up at him with wide, frightened eyes.
Marcus stepped toward her, his cock bobbing before him, massive and wet with her saliva. “Zatanna told me what I need to do,” he said, his voice dropping to a dangerous growl. “The ritual requires more than just sex. It requires submission. A pledge. Your soul, Raven. I need you to give me your soul.”
“You’ll never have it,” Raven spat, trying to scramble backward, but her movements were sluggish, her body already responding to the Signal, already preparing to submit. “My soul is mine. Protected by Azarath. By my father’s blood. You can’t—”
“I can,” Marcus said, and grabbed her ankle.
He dragged her toward him easily, flipping her over onto her stomach, pulling her hips up until she was on her knees, her face pressed against the cold floor, her ass raised high and vulnerable. The tight leotard she wore left little to the imagination, the fabric pulled tight between her cheeks, barely covering her most private places.
Marcus gripped the fabric and tore.
The leotard shredded, exposing her pale ass, the dark cleft between her cheeks, the glistening folds of her pussy that were already wet despite her protests. Raven whimpered, trying to summon her magic, trying to call her soul-self, but the Signal was too strong now, amplified by her own arousal, her own curiosity, her own failure to resist.
“Please,” she whispered, and for the first time, Marcus heard genuine fear in her voice. “Please, don’t. If you take me… if you bind me… the darkness… my father’s influence… it might…”
“It might make you more powerful,” Marcus finished, positioning himself at her entrance, the head of his cock pressing against her tight, virgin folds. “It might transform you into what you were always meant to be. Not a hero. Not a reluctant demon. But a creature of pure power and pleasure. My creature.”
He thrust forward.
Raven’s scream was unlike anything he’d heard before—not just pain, not just pleasure, but a metaphysical cry that seemed to tear at the fabric of reality itself. Her body was tight—gods, she was tight—her demonic heritage making her grip him with supernatural strength, but she was also burning hot, her internal temperature far above human normal, her muscles rippling around him in ways that felt almost supernatural.
As he buried himself to the hilt, Marcus felt it—the flare of her magic. Dark energy erupted around them, black lightning crackling across the walls, shadows dancing like living things. The room’s temperature dropped twenty degrees, then spiked to boiling. Objects levitated and shattered. The air itself screamed.
He was hurting her—he knew he was, her virginity tearing, her body struggling to accommodate his divine girth—but the magic was responding to her pain, to her violation, threatening to tear the tower apart.
“Submit,” Marcus growled, gripping her hips and beginning to move, pulling back and slamming forward with brutal force. “Pledge your soul to me, Raven. Accept me as your master. Let the darkness in. Stop fighting it.”
“Never,” Raven gasped, her hands clawing at the floor, her body convulsing around him as he pounded her. “I’ll never… I won’t become… my father…”
But even as she protested, Marcus could feel her weakening. The Signal was working on her, rewriting her desires, making the pain into pleasure, making the violation into worship. And more—he could feel her magic responding to his divine cock, to the cosmic energy that Star Girl’s conduit provided, to the promise of power that submission would bring.
He drove into her harder, faster, the room shaking around them. A bookshelf collapsed. The candles flared into bonfires. The black orbs of her soul-self spun wildly, crashing into walls, leaving scorch marks in the shape of her anguish.
“Say it,” Marcus commanded, his voice booming over the chaos. “Say you’re mine. Pledge your soul. Accept your master.”
“I can’t,” Raven sobbed, but her hips were pushing back now, meeting his thrusts, her body betraying her mind. “I can’t… I’m not strong enough… the darkness… it’s coming… it’s—”
“Let it come,” Marcus snarled, reaching down to grab her hair, yanking her head back as he drove into her with final, brutal force. “Let it all come. Become what you were meant to be. My demon. My conduit. My fucktoy.”
Raven’s scream reached a crescendo—and then changed. The pain transformed into something else, something darker and more primal. Her body convulsed, not in resistance, but in submission, in acceptance, in the moment of breaking.
“I submit,” she gasped, and the words seemed to tear themselves from her throat, accompanied by a flare of violet-black light that engulfed them both. “I pledge my soul. My power. My darkness. To you, Marcus Chen. My master. My god. My—”
Marcus felt the moment of binding—the metaphysical click as her soul locked itself to his will, as her power became his to command, as the darkness she had fought her entire life finally found its true master. He buried himself to the hilt and let go, his climax ripping through him with the force of a supernova, his seed flooding her womb, marking her inside, claiming her completely.
And then the transformation began.
Raven’s scream changed again, becoming higher, more ecstatic, as her body began to shift. Marcus pulled back, watching in fascination as the magic he had unleashed—the combination of his divine cum, her pledged soul, and the infernal heritage she had suppressed—reshaped her into something new.
Her pale skin darkened, shifting to a deep, rich crimson—the color of blood and lust and power. The color deepened, becoming vibrant, almost glowing with inner fire. Her short dark hair exploded in length, growing down to her waist, becoming thick and lustrous, black as the void between stars. Her ears elongated, becoming pointed and elfin, sticking out through her hair. Two small, sharp horns pushed through her scalp, curving backward like a crown.
Her face transformed—the gem of Azarath sinking into her skin, replaced by glowing yellow eyes with slit pupils, feline and demonic and full of wicked intelligence. Her lips plumped, becoming fuller, darker, curling into a seductive smile that showed white, sharp teeth. Heavy golden earrings appeared, large circular plates with dangling smaller circles, weighing down her earlobes and emphasizing the alien nature of her new form.
Her body reshaped itself, becoming more voluptuous, more exaggerated. Her breasts swelled, pressing against the remnants of her costume, becoming large and firm and high, barely contained by a black strapless top that seemed to materialize from shadows. Her waist narrowed while her hips flared wide, emphasizing an hourglass figure that screamed fertility and sex. Golden decorations appeared at her hips—intricate belts and dangling ornaments that drew the eye to the junction of her thighs, where a black strip of fabric barely covered her now-demonically-enhanced sex.
Black and red bands wrapped themselves around her arms—upper arms and forearms both—striped patterns that emphasized her strength while marking her as bound, as owned. Similar bands wrapped her thighs, the red and black stripes drawing attention to the long, shapely legs that ended in clawed feet.
But most striking of all was the aura—the sense of power that radiated from her, dark and seductive and utterly devoted. She was no longer Raven, the reluctant hero. She was something new. Something that existed solely for Marcus’s pleasure.
She rose from the floor with liquid grace, her movements sensual and predatory, her long fingers— tipped with black nails—trailing through the air as if conducting invisible music. She stretched, arching her back, displaying her new body with obvious pride, her forked tongue—long and serpentine and black—flicking out to lick her plump lips.
“Mmm,” she purred, her voice completely changed—lower, huskier, with an undertone of growl that made Marcus’s cock twitch despite his recent orgasm. “That’s better. So much better. I can feel it, master. The power. The darkness. Finally free.”
Marcus stared, his breath catching. She was magnificent—more beautiful than Wonder Woman, more seductive than Zatanna, more powerful than Star Girl. A demon queen in truth, bound to his will, her crimson skin glowing in the dim light of the ruined chamber.
Raven—whatever she was now—knelt before him, her movements graceful and obscene. She took his cock in both hands—her new claws careful not to scratch—and began to lick it with that long, forked tongue. The sensation was indescribable—the forked tips wrapping around his shaft, the slightly rough texture, the heat of her demonically-enhanced mouth.
“I have the power of a Demon Queen now, master,” she said between licks, her yellow eyes staring up at him with wicked adoration. “I can feel my father’s strength flowing through me, but bound to you. Channeled through you. I could rule Hell itself, if I wished.”
Marcus raised an eyebrow, reaching down to grip her horns—using them as handles to guide her mouth. “Do you presume to be my queen, Raven? Is that what you’re saying? That you’re my equal now?”
Raven pulled back slightly, her forked tongue flicking out to catch a bead of pre-cum, her smile widening into something playful and submissive. “Of course not, Daddy,” she said, the word falling from her lips naturally, sweetly, with a hint of mock-innocence that was utterly obscene coming from a demoness. “I’m just your young, tight demon princess. I live for your big, thick cock. I exist to serve you. To corrupt others for you. To bring you more power, more pleasure, more worship.”
She took him into her mouth again, her throat opening to accept his full length, the forked tongue wrapping around the base of his shaft even as her lips stretched around his girth. Marcus groaned, his hands tightening on her horns, using them to guide her rhythm, to fuck her face with slow, deliberate thrusts.
Raven took it eagerly, her eyes rolling back in pleasure, her hands coming up to stroke his thighs, his balls, any part of him she could reach. She was insatiable, her demon physiology allowing her to take him without gagging, without discomfort, her only goal his pleasure, his satisfaction, his dominance.
After several minutes of her enthusiastic worship, Marcus pulled her off his cock with a wet pop. She gasped, her lips swollen and shiny, her eyes glazed with desire.
“Good girl,” Marcus said, stroking her face, feeling the heat of her crimson skin. “You’ve accepted your place. You’ve become what you were meant to be. But tell me, my demon princess—what do you want now? What’s your first desire, now that you’re mine?”
Raven smiled, a slow, wicked expression that promised sin and corruption and absolute devotion. She rose to her feet, her body pressing against his, her massive tits squashing against his chest, her forked tongue flicking out to trace his jawline.
“I want a snack for the road, Daddy,” she whispered, her voice dripping with seduction and dark intent. “Someone to corrupt with you. Someone to watch you break and claim. Someone who will serve alongside me, worshipping your cock together.”
She pulled back slightly, her yellow eyes gleaming with mischief and hunger. “Starfire is in her room. Alone. Moping. She’s been so sad since the others left on the mission. So vulnerable. So… empty. I want to bring her to you, Daddy. I want to hold her down while you fuck her. I want to watch her Tamaranian innocence shatter as you claim her. And then… then I want to play with her. To teach her how to serve you properly. Together.”
Marcus looked down at her, at this creature he had created—this demon princess who had once been a hero, now utterly devoted to his pleasure, eager to corrupt her former teammate, hungry to build his harem further.
He smiled, a slow, predatory expression that matched her own.
“Lead the way,” he commanded.
Raven’s smile widened into something radiant and terrible. She took his hand—her claws gentle against his skin—and led him toward the door, her hips swaying, her tail—he hadn’t noticed it before, but now he saw it, long and sinuous and ending in a spade shape—swishing behind her with excitement.
As they stepped over the threshold of her ruined room, leaving behind the shattered remnants of Raven the hero, Marcus felt the power surge through him. The binding was complete. The conduit was established. He was one step closer to true godhood—one step closer to the Green Lantern ring, to open dominion, to a world that would worship him as its rightful master.
And now he had a demon princess to help him claim it.
The Signal hummed, satisfied and hungry, and Marcus Chen followed his new pet to claim his next conquest.
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