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Chapter 34
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Roar of The Winning Punch
What Upgrade Did you Choose, also... did you just fucking die?
COSMIC DRAW +
Cosmic Draw+ - The Only One For Me
As Cosmic bodies are drawn towards another they are inevitably drawn away from others. The subject passively gains 3 Submissions Points a day. In addition for every submission point you gain with the subject, their relationship decreases by an equal amount with every other person in their life.
Upgraded!
- Cosmic Draw++ - Until The End of Time
Celestial events happen over the course of centuries, so what is a few months to your love? The subject passively gains 5 Submission Points a day. In addition every Submission Point the Subject has or will gain is considered to happen in the same scene, for the purpose for achieving locks on the target. There is no longer a cooldown on any traits or upgrades to the Subject, all features are available immediately, and the subject will not suffer any mental distress at rapidly changing submission scores, or traits quickly being added or taken away. Finally for every submission point you gain with the subject, their relationship decreases by an equal amount with every other person in their life. You may edit which relationships are affected by this and which are not.
Congratulations!
You got 25 points on subject Jasmine Fischer in one day! You have unlocked a bonus effect on Jasmine Fischer
-ORGASM LOCK-
Activating this effect makes the subject unable to orgasm, no matter how hard they try. Only you can allow them to orgasm now. The subject will be unaware of this, until you reveal this to them. They will believe this fact without suspicion, and understand now, that they can't orgasm without your approval. The subject will use their own reasoning for why this is, usually believing that you hold an erotic power they can't find elsewhere.
Activate?
Cosmic Draw wins out again! We must be in the canon route, where he saves Jasmine. We'll just have to explore all those other timelines at a different date. I thought Trickle Down Economics would win for sure, and started writing the upgrade for it, but when I ran the numbers I was wrong!
Lots of wonderful suggestions as always. You guys always give me a lot to think about and some great ideas. So don't be shy with giving suggestions and coming up with your own stuff I love it. For example I completely forgot about personal traits. So Brett will just have to look at his watch more closely in the upcoming chapters.
Let me know what you think of the upgrade, worth the price of admission?
But Seriously... Are You Dead?
The Submission Accelerator
Because sometimes you just want to dominate bitches.
You are a person living in an environment with many dominating and bossy women. Be it your job, home or school. You have always secretly fantasized about having more power in your life, but for some or other reason you just can't get people to listen to you. That's where The Submission Accelerator comes in. A handy little app, that lets you radically change everyone's submissiveness towards you. Consider this a darker version of "The Affection Multiplier", where the goal is not love, but total domination of everybody around you. Build a harem, humiliate people, make them dance to your whistle. The world is yours.
Updated on Jun 13, 2026
by Spars2023
Created on Nov 2, 2020
by drek
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