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Chapter 2
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Deathcon
Which Woman Will Hear The Comments of Corruption?
Bianca Phoenix, 22, Criminal
Bianca Phoenix:
Corruption Points = 0
A 22-year-old woman wearing a professional red business suit was walking home with a bag of groceries in one hand and a cellphone in the other. The blonde woman didn’t seem so happy with what she was hearing on the other end. “What do you mean they said this isn’t their daughter!?” She shouted before the person on the other hand spoke up. “I don’t care-fix this and don’t call back until you do!” The woman screamed before hanging up as she entered the apartment she was renting out.

The woman was Bianca Phoenix, a rising name in the criminal underworld who was just arguing with the henchman of her’s that was meeting with the family of the person she most recently kidnapped. “How could those Davenport bastards claim this isn’t their daughter? Sure she clearly was a failure to the so-called Davenport name but she is still their daughter and from the looks of her home a successful one.” Bianca said to herself before opening a locked door and throwing the groceries she bought inside. “Wake up CandiTits69, or should I say Candice Davenport?” She called out to her hostage who was cowering in the corner.

The woman didn’t move an inch so Bianca sighed as she walked inside the room. “Wait, don’t come any closer!” Candi, as she liked to be called shouted towards her captor, Bianca merely rolled her eyes as she already heard what she was about to say before. “The voices want to inhabit your body next so if you come any closer they will-!” As she warned her captor Bianca fished a thing of bananas and ripped one of them off before shoving it down Candi’s throat shutting her up and causing her to ****.
Just then Bianca felt a ringing in between her ears and clutched her head causing the banana to fall out of Candi’s mouth. “Oh no they got to you too!” Candi shouted after her as Bianca rushed out of the room, forgetting to lock it behind her, and rushed to the bathroom. The ringing began to quiet as she washed her face. Then the ringing was replaced by voices.
What do the voices tell her?
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The Curse of Corrupting Comments (Open)
A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
Updated on May 20, 2026
by MegaMarshmallow
Created on Feb 26, 2023
by MegaMarshmallow
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