Chapter 8
by Jim_jones
What does our new mortal do?
Before he can decide, he is interrupted
A knock at the door breaks John’s train of thought. It’s Damiana and she’s changed significantly now seeming to tower over him at his lofty old height of 5’11”, she saw him shrink and has come to check up on him.
Startled from his reverie by the sudden noise, John quickly stuffs the note into his pocket, unsure what to do with this new knowledge for now. “Just a minute!” he calls out making his way to the small door at the front of the house.
Sliding the bolt aside, John swings open the door to be confronted with a pair of probably the nicest breasts he’s seen (except for those of the Goddess his almost blasphemous mind corrects him). Examining the tight red velvet dress clinging onto them his vision follows the plunging neckline which leaves little to the imagination as he becomes lost in the deep cleavage on display. He ponders how these two pale milky orbs sit so high and round on this woman’s chest, with barely a hint of a droop to them. John’s gaze continues to wander down to the soft gold sash at her waist, where he drinks in the subtle hint of a firm set of abdominals beneath the sheet fabric. He can’t help but notice how wonderfully perfect the narrow waist is. John’s examinations downwards is about to continue when a light cough startles him out of his trance.
“Ahem” comes the soft but familiar voice of Damiana, “my eyes are up here thank you very much”. While the voice was unmistakably hers, the face takes a moment for John to make the connection. Before, the raven-haired beauty in front of him had been average if not a little on the plain side, and while certainly a decent enough looking woman by his small-town standards, certainly not what he would have called ‘hot’. This is no longer true, with the Damiana standing before him having full, deep ruby red lips, a small and slightly upturned nose, wide eyes with rich hazel irises. Her face had not a single blemish, smooth pale skin unmarked by wrinkles, and framed by a thick mane of luscious shiny black hair, that only seemed to make her seem even more radiant as the sunlight reflecting through it threw off hints of blue highlights.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t realise, yo-yo-you’re…” he starts to blurt out but is silenced as she sets her hand gently on his shoulder.
“I know right!” she squeals out excitedly, “can you believe the Goddess has bestowed such a boon upon me?” As she says this, she carefully ducks her head beneath the door frame to enter the house, “and just look at this wonderful dress!”. And look he did, as she passed by, John couldn’t help but notice that her backside has been as wonderfully blessed as the rest of her. The dress clinging tightly to a smooth and shapely butt, jiggling lightly with each step she takes, suggestive of a layer of soft fat atop a firm and powerful core beneath. He can also finally see more of her legs now, with long round thighs giving way to powerful and smooth calves clad in exquisite soft brown leather sandals which extend all the way down to the smoothest and fairest feet he has seen, effortlessly supporting her graceful and elegant movements. John momentarily imagines what it must feel like to be the sole of those sandals, squished underneath those divine soles and drinking in the scent of her sweet sweat.
As Damiana seats herself at the table, John realises he’s been gawking at her like a teenager just discovering a big town brothel. Quickly closing the door and locking it behind him once more, he makes his way over to her in a stunned silence. A moment of tension seems to almost hang in the air, thoughts racing, is she angry at him? Is she here for another reason? What happened anyway? Do all women now look like this, or only a blessed few? Is it contained to the town? The kingdom? What does the queen look like now? Oh what a lucky man the king must be if the queen has been blessed like Damiana he thinks.
Finally, after what seems like an eternity, but is really only a few seconds, Damiana speaks, a broad smile on her face, “it’s ok”, wait a second, was she blushing?!? “it took me a few minutes to stop looking at myself and make my way over here.” John’s heart flutters, he were the first thing she thought of after transforming into this paragon of beauty. “I know you must be wondering why I’ve come here and well… I wanted to figure out what’s happened… together” and as she says this last word, she reaches out and places a hand in his.
How does he feel about this
The God Creation Device
Your own personal reality
Inspired by a branch over in the Unending BE Addventure (https://addventure.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/1450/1450406.html) to which I’ve contributed a number of chapters. A grey rainy drizzle starts the day as John Doe is awoken for the third time so far by his alarm. Rolling over, he slaps his hand around aimlessly until the noise finally stops. Pushing himself up slightly, eyes reluctantly open, he sees that it’s now 8:20am and he will be late for work if he waits any longer to finally get out of bed. With a big yawn, stretching both arms up above his head, John swings around and lands with a rough thud on the thinly carpeted floor of his ramshackle house in the outer suburbs. Looking around sullenly, he reflects briefly on his situation. 25 years old, working in the same dead end retail job he’s had since he graduated from high school, his apartment is sparsely furnished with the cheapest furniture he could find. Walking over to the bathroom sink to prepare for the day, he sighs at his reflection, “another day, another dollar”. It was his daily mantra to acknowledge his situation and with a wry grin, he noted that it had kept him going this long. John was halfway through squeezing out a thin line of toothpaste to brush his teeth, mentally figuring out how to juggle buying a fresh tube around his upcoming rent until his next pay came through when he was interrupted by a knock at the door. Confused as to who could be paying him a visit at this time, and certainly not having had the funds to purchase anything delivered recently. John figured it was probably something being delivered to the wrong address. Trying to be a good neighbour, he rushed to the door, hoping to stop the mailman from making a wrong delivery. “Wait!” he yelled out as he swung the door open ready to explain the situation. To his incredulous surprise, nobody was there, just a small brown box left atop his doormat. Not immediately seeing a label on the box, John brought it inside to examine it. Setting it down on his table, spinning it every which way, there was no clue as to who it was intended for. Curiosity getting the better of him, he grabbed a knife and sliced through the tape sealing the lid shut. Inside, lying amongst a pile of shredded newspaper was an unusual looking device. No more than two inches long, cylindrical and with a repeating metallic pattern crisscrossing its surface, it was unlike anything he had ever seen before. Figuring that there must be some instructions left with the device, he rummaged around through the newspaper shavings again, finding a crinkled note. The instructions seemed pretty simple, hold the device and imagine a universe to find yourself transported there as an all-powerful deity. It seemed that whoever had sent the device to you had even included some suggestions, fictional worlds, our universe in a different time, and even make your own universe. The possibilities were endless. A couple of warnings were also included, although John figured he didn’t need to take much note of these. The device will vanish once used, only returning should you return to this universe (“yeah right” John thought, “no chance I come back to this life”), as you won’t have the device once you use it, you’ll need to use your powers to return home. Some failsafes had been put in place to protect you from various forms of harm or from getting trapped, but the note warns that the device is a one-of-a-kind test version so may have some bugs not yet fully worked out. Tossing the note over his shoulder, John quickly dons a simple pair of jeans and a t-shirt, clutching the device in his hand he imagines a universe to rule over.
Updated on Sep 12, 2024
by Jim_jones
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