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Chapter 16
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What do the voices say?
Ava preps for the clothing swap
“It’s abductin’ time! Go both of you to the door, completely naked and drag neighbour inside the flat. Strip her naked and tie her up .”
Target > 95, 1d100 roll+23=81, failed suggestion
“Boss your girl around! Tell Laila to go to the clothing swap naked, then borrow her razor to shave while you wait for her to come back.”
Target > 40, 1d100 roll+23=89, successful suggestion (+1 corruption)
“Personal grooming! Have Laila to go answer the door just in her nipple clamps and tell her neighbour she is bringing a friend to trade clothes while you raid Laila's closet for some slutty outfits for the pair of you.”
Target > 40, 1d100 roll+30=85, successful suggestion (+1 corruption)
Ava Smith Corruption Points: 25
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Ava gets off Laila’s face and pulls her up by the nipple chain. “Get the door, bitch.”
Laila’s face is flushed and red. She’s been eating and breathing Ava’s pussy for an hour and half. “Yes, boss kitten,” she says and reaches for a robe.
Ava swats her hand. “I didn’t say put clothes on, bitch. Get the door as you are. You can swap for clothes later.”
Laila smirks playfully. Ava can tell she’s a little flustered. “Yes, boss kitten.”
Ava watches Laila swing her beautiful black hips and walk naked to the door covered only in the chain connecting her two puffy nipples. She hears the neighbour shriek in surprise when Laila opens the door naked. “Just getting ready for the clothing swap,” she hears Laila lie unconvincingly and then exchange small talk.
With Laila out, Ava breaks into her bathroom. She’s been having her rug munched for a long time and a nagging voice in the back of her head is self-conscious about her pubic hair. Laila’s pussy is smoothly shaved, not to mention moisturized. Ava wants Laila to like her. She wants to be like Laila. A part of her knows that if Laila wasn’t into her, she wouldn’t have eaten her out for hours, but another part is insecure. She wants to obey the voice in her head telling her to shave.
In the bathroom she finds a pink razor in the shower soap dish. She runs a quick shower, lathers up, and shaves her chaotic pubes until all her curly hairs run down the drain and her pussy is as smooth as Laila’s.
Back in the bedroom, she raids Laila’s closet. Laila is a grown, graduated woman with grown woman things like dresses and furniture. It’s not just a pile of college student clothes in the middle of the room like at Ava’s place. Ava picks out a dress from the hoochie mama section of Laila’s closet. The dress is white, contours Ava’s every curve, and has netting on the side that makes it very clear Ava’s not wearing any underwear. It makes Ava feel very fuckable indeed.

Ava heads next door where Laila’s neighbour Azha is having a clothing swap. The front door is ajar on the wraparound porch and there’s music playing. She finds Laila wearing a wide open jacket that reveals half her breasts and the chain that Ava put on her nipples. She’s covered her gorgeous pussy with a leather miniskirt.
Azha’s chatting with Laila and somehow not staring at either Laila’s pendulous cleavage or the hickeys on her neck. In the middle of the room there’s a dining table covered with other clothes for the swap. Azha’s friends Felicity and Luna are hanging out by the table, as is her boyfriend Tyler. Tyler’s having a beer.
When Laila sees Ava she hurries across to kiss her and then lustfully bite her lips. Ava nibbles back, groping Laila’s ass. Azha walks up and clears her throat. “Who’s your gorgeous friend, Laila?”
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A story in which you the reader tries to corrupt naive women into becoming sexual deviants with your comments. A dice game between writer and reader.
Corrupt and control women as they struggle to fight off the voice in their head (you) that keeps driving them towards sluttier, sexier and degrading situations. Build up their corruption points to make biggger and badder corruptions possible.
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