Do you let her keep going or push her off to focus on the game?
Authors Note
Thank you for showing interest in my story. This is my first story on CHYOA. I plan on adding many more chapters and optional play. Everything is brand new to me and Im learning how the site functions. Including accidentally publishing earlier than I intended. So, bare with me and give me some time for the full story to take form. I am also drafting chapters that need editing. Phone keyboard and auto correct allow for more grammar errors than I like.
Update:
Your comments and likes are what keep me coming back to add more. I appreciate all my readers.
I have ran into some issues where CHYOA editing and scripting pages like to jump around, add a ton of extra spaces, copy random words into places as I type, delete things, and freezes periodically not saving my work. If I try to edit a page with a picture it becomes an invalid file. As a result my errors are much more frequent and very difficult to correct. Regardless, I will continue to push this story forward and into new pathways.
Would love feed back and suggestions.
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