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Chapter 2 by timtime timtime

Sweet Dreams

Author's Notes

Hello, I'm Timtime!
So tbh my writing comes in cycles (especially when it comes to this stuff). I've released the last backlog chapter I had (without updated it, but might as well put it out there). It'll be probably a few months before I write more, then I'll write a bunch for a week or so, and then disappear for a long while. At least that's the pattern so far.

Not sure if I'll write more on this story or write something every similar. I'll keep you guys posted.

Thanks for the comments, it's crazy to think other people are reading my story, lol. Also if you peps have any ideas or feedback, toss them at me. I really should put together a dare list so I can have a steady-ish intensity scale over time, also they're fun to think about.

Arthur's retrospective:
Probably the thing I'm disliking the most about this story is that I feel like I've limited myself. I like when she thinks over her choices, but it's ended up her doing all of them. I feel kind of like I've written myself into a corner a bit with how the system works and who Sarah is, idk, probably just in my head. In fact I'm not sure I'm happy with how the whole world feels (ie: tone), but it's kind of hard for me to gauge that not being a reader.

Then there is the fact this is a linear story, which is fine, but I feel like I could do something cool with that with more thought, idk. (preferably without making it take exponential increasing work to write, lol)

Anyways, I'm pretty happy with how it's turned out, this is my first story after all. Anyways, thanks so much for reading, gotta love the internet for letting us anonymously hang out with those with the same fetishes. If you want I can post links to some of my favorite stories here.

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