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Chapter 2 by Seezoe Seezoe

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Author's Log

6-27: Created author's log. Beginning rewrite of first 3 chapters to better capture mood, and trim unneeded details. I wound up rewriting everything, and wrote a lot more than I thought I would. Did some minor plot restructuring to speed things along. Sorry that there hasn't been an opportunity for a lemon yet. I want to build to something more satisfying. LATE: I feel like fucking stephen king. Holy fuck dude Have you guys ever had a reign energy drink? Just fucking imagine what coke must fucking feel like. I'm either gonna start writing more at midnight, or spend the rest of the time I'm awake cleaning everything up. I am on shift for another 11 hours though, so I'll probably fix a lot if I get to fixing.

6-28: I just wrote three pages of lemon, and when I tried to publish it logged me out, and all the progress was lost. I'm honestly heart broken. There goes two hours of my life. Might rewrite it tonight, but probs just gonna take a break. Sorry if anyone has been waiting.

7-1: I realize that I'm pretty late to the punch with this one. That 24 hour shift was absolutely brutal, and I managed to shit out quite a lot of writing. Unfortunately on a secondary inspection, I realize a lot of the thoughts didn't quite make it to the written word. I'm assuming you all aren't psychics, so I went and cleaned up the dialogue, and interactions to actually say something about the situation. I have cool stuff planned after I finish the lemon with Aiden. There's 7 characters right now that I intend for you to work around. A few of them are not gonna be part of the canon ending, but when I get to later chapters they will be. There will be more Lemons too. Wrapping my head around how to structure this all efficiently to provide multiple routes has been somewhat difficult. I have a timeline, and a three page document about all the shit that happens, and when it happens, and how long chapters are taking. Planning on finishing the Aiden lemon after I rewrite the first half here in a moment, and concluding the fleshing out of the build-up while I'm here.

7-1: I think I lost some of my touch when it comes to making the words do what I want them to. Some of that is coming back now, which is nice. Today will be the final bit of stripping, and cleaning up I do for everything written so far. I need to go through, and moderate everything to ensure all I wrote actually serves some objective. Wish I did it right the first time, but sometimes things don't work out quite how you'd like them to.

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