Chapter 2 by PartyOn111
Go out or Stay in?
Authers Note:
Sorry to back to this after so many years but with some free time coming up in the next few months I'd at least like to add to it a bit more.
I really enjoy the idea of a mindcontrolled with little moral compass, trying to get a grip on himself, while the person who used to be the compass has become a hedonist.
Overall the master plan was either have our protagonist slip into compleate hedonism with Jess, or have him try to curb some of his, and Jess's urges.
Overall I still have some fun ideas and ways to interlink the cast. Different routes, seeing and different things but it was too ambitious.
Though I am going to open up the story to other writers as I don't think I'm the only person here who enjoys the idea.
TLDR: Writer is bad, over reached and lost interest. Promises to return, and opens up the story.
What's next?
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New beginnings
A man and his best friend explore Suburbia
Tim has always been able to influence people. Years ago prevent himself from going off the deep end, he recruited his best friend Jessie to help ground himself. Years later they've both changed and are moving to a new home. .
Updated on Jan 22, 2022
by PartyOn111
Created on Apr 19, 2016
by PartyOn111
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