Go out or Stay in?
Authers Note:
Sorry to back to this after so many years but with some free time coming up in the next few months I'd at least like to add to it a bit more.
I really enjoy the idea of a mindcontrolled with little moral compass, trying to get a grip on himself, while the person who used to be the compass has become a hedonist.
Overall the master plan was either have our protagonist slip into compleate hedonism with Jess, or have him try to curb some of his, and Jess's urges.
Overall I still have some fun ideas and ways to interlink the cast. Different routes, seeing and different things but it was too ambitious.
Though I am going to open up the story to other writers as I don't think I'm the only person here who enjoys the idea.
TLDR: Writer is bad, over reached and lost interest. Promises to return, and opens up the story.
What's next?
- No further chapters
- Add a new chapter
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