Will there be someone sitting next to you?

ACT II : You arrive at your hotel

Chapter 2 by yollandy yollandy

You enter the hotel lobby, dragging your suitcase up the stairs behind you. The space is grand but eerily empty, your footsteps echoing off the polished marble floors. Behind the reception desk stands a short Chinese woman, her dark hair pulled into a neat bun, her sharp eyes watching you with a mix of curiosity and amusement. She’s petite, with a delicate frame, but her presence is anything but small. A hint of a smile plays on her lips as you approach.

"Passport, please," she says, her voice smooth but firm.

She informs you that your room was canceled yesterday evening.

You insist she checks again, carefully spelling out your name. She raises an eyebrow, muttering in Chinese under her breath.

{lock "How one say to fuck in mandarin? (answer in pinyin without the tone" answer "cao"}

"He thinks I’m too stupid to type his name. How many foreigners does he think we check in per day?"

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Her tone is playful, almost teasing, as if she’s enjoying the back-and-forth.

While she pretends to look again, you pull out your phone. A new notification pops up. You dismiss it without a second thought.

She confirms your room has indeed been canceled and offers a half-hearted apology, her lips curling into a knowing smirk.

You ask to book another one.

She shakes her head, her eyes glinting with mischief. The only available room is much more expensive. You can see the calculation in her gaze—she knows you’re probably desperate.

You tell her you’ll think about it and come back.

Stepping outside, you pull up the hotel’s website on your phone. Of course, they do have regular rooms available. She was lying to you. You’re about to march back in and confront her when another notification pops up. This one’s from an unknown number.

You open it.

Annie

Hi, it’s Annie from the plane, remember? I sent you our address this morning. Did you receive it? Are you on your way?"

"Fuck." The realization hits you like a punch to the gut. She did cancel your hotel. She actually did it. And now, thanks to the clerk’s little game, you’re standing outside with nowhere to go.

What should I write next first?

129 votes Closed
Continue with the main character being a push over 31% (40 first-choice votes)
Stare a glow up and let the character become less of a sub 34.1% (44 first-choice votes)
Create a new branch from the start with a choice to have a more dominant main char 34.9% (45 first-choice votes)
Ranked choice rounds
Each round counts every ballot's highest-ranked remaining option, then eliminates the lowest option until one option wins.
Round 1
Continue with the main character being a push over 40 Stare a glow up and let the character become less of a sub 44 Create a new branch from the start with a choice to have a more dominant main char 45
Eliminated: Continue with the main character being a push over
Round 2
Stare a glow up and let the character become less of a sub 69 Create a new branch from the start with a choice to have a more dominant main char 52 Exhausted 8
Winner: Stare a glow up and let the character become less of a sub
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