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Chapter 3 by mjor144 mjor144

What do you do?

/// A little side note from author

Hello,

this post will have in purpose messages, logs, etc. So nothing interesting to see here.

10.07.2020

I know I'm only few chapters in, but I already noticed some off putting inconsistencies, like switching from present to past when it comes to narration. Gonna fix that whenever time allows.

I really appreciate every single like, and comment. It makes me really happy to know that there are people that actually enjoy the same things I do. As for the writing times and releases of new chapters - I'll try to put up a few every week. I believe that this genre/fetish in barely explored at all and I have few ideas on how to go deeper in it. I also have in mind what I believe will be a fitting ending to the story, but it will not arrive any time soon.

Anyway, I hope everyone will have a jolly good day as well as weekend. I'll try to come up with chapter (or a few) today or tomorrow. :)

EDIT: I think I fixed the past/present narration inconsistencies. Staying with present, as it's a bit more immersive. I also 'fixed' slightly some of the sentences, unfitting phrases, repetitions, etc. No changes to the story, but it's a lot easier to read now through that barely edited mess.

11.07.2020

So yeah, your goddess/superhero girlfriend is now kinda a hive mind. One mind controlling however many bodies she can, but I put a limit on it. No need for her to overrun the world just yet.

I learned how to add tags. Gonna add them in next few days.

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Lost the interest in the story. I might come back to it one day.

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