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Chapter 21
by FINN 0815
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A free fire zone
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That was very exciting again.
At first Bella was way behind with 5 votes, then (luckily) she caught up a lot. But sweet little Lisa Moreau prevailed in the end despite her social anxiety. Well done Lisa!
Now, please enjoy...
Chapter 20
"Wow. Feels good to be back." My butt wipes my chair as I hold on to the table and make a funny face to make Lisa laugh.
It doesn't quite work, but the corners of her mouth turn up noticeably as I sit down properly and prepare for class. But she's far too happy to have me back here to laugh at jokes; she's just glad that the lonely, confusing period I plunged her into is over.
"You can say that." Ryan leans past Lisa, who moves a little so he can stick his fist past her to me. One fist punch later, I'm back in the circle of my friends.
Bzzzzt Bzzzzt.
I quickly look to the front but the teacher's desk is still free. I quickly pull out the MCD and... Ryan is in the MCD too? He's a boy and that raises... troubling questions... With a funny look on my face, I look at him and wonder if my earlier optimism came out too quickly. Then I look at Lisa and decide that there's probably no reason to worry.
And if there is, I'll handle it. That's my responsibility.
Even though I don't know what path the MCD and the crazy billionaire might have planned for Ryan.
As for Lisa...
Lisa Moreau / E-Girl "Please look at me!"
- As the subject progresses, it will more and more take on the personality of a bubly, nice and sweet E-Girl who develops a strong need to present herself in front of cameras of all kinds and to attract the attention of the masses. The user has a special place in this worldview and the subject will seek moral validation of her behavior in front of and behind the camera while the bond with him is further strengthened.
PS -85
So I have to treat Lisa like an E-Girl? What is that anyway? Luckily, the MCD also has a high-speed internet connection and Google...
AAAH! PINK!
Holy crap! Is that what Lisa will be like? Pink and... bubbly and... nice and... sweet and... damn sexy?
The change will be a hard step for her, that much is certain. I don't even know if my best friend has ever recorded a video on her cell phone ever. But I do know that not even in her wildest dreams would she dress so revealingly and... sexy... let alone so... pink and... neon... and... sexy...
Again I look over at Lisa, who doesn't know what to expect in the next few days and weeks, but I can't help but think that she might like it a bit too. I hope so, after all, it's my goal for her to be well. Okay, it will probably be difficult at the beginning but... An E-girl always seems to be happy, never having bad thoughts or fears. And they all seem so confident and cheeky and content. That's what I want for Lisa. And I'll accompany her on the way there. Maybe...
"You shouldn't be on your cell phone, Finn." I'm so startled that I almost drop the MCD and for a terrible second it dances wildly in my hands as if I were juggling. But finally I catch it, grip it tightly and look at the voice that scared me so much.
"Damn it, Lakota," I curse. "Stop sneaking up on me like that!"
"If you were preparing for class instead of looking at your cell phone, you might have heard me coming," jokes our class representative and grabs the MCD with lightning-fast hand movements.
"Hey!"
"What do you have there anyway?" she asks and takes a step back from the row of seats I'm sitting in as I straighten up.
"That looks expensive." That's Tana, Lakota`s friend.
She looks over Lakota's shoulder while she looks directly at the display. They can see Lisa's profile! I reach for the device in a panic, but Lakota is faster.
"Give it back to me," I demand in a voice that is much too high while the two girls look at the display. I fear the worst but then...
"Give it back to him, Lakota." I half turn to Lisa who is standing next to me, giggling.
Lisa Moreau. +1 (PS -84)
"You had your fun. Now be kind."
"It's okay," Lakota grins and holds out the MCD to me, on whose display the message that I will completely change Lisa is still displayed.
I look in surprise at our class representative who waves Tana to the front of the class, sits down next to her friend and confirms to me once again with her fingers under her eyes that she is watching me while Tana just rolls her eyes and turns away from me.
Can't others see the app, I ask myself and look at the MCD. Or is Lakota playing a fake game? Is she up to something? On the other hand, with everything the MCD can do, changing brains, etc., I wouldn't be surprised if I'm the only one who can see what's on the display.
"Finn?" In the meantime, Lisa sat down again and gestures attentively for me to do the same.
"Thank you for your help," I say as I sit down and put the MCD in my pocket. Lisa's reaction doesn't just surprise me. The shy girl is also surprised by what she has done.
"Yeah... no problem... I guess..." she murmurs quietly. Then she turns to me. "Maybe it was because I missed you so much," she suspects, but of course I know a little better, but I smile at her encouragingly.
"That was definitely good of you," says Ryan and grins. "Otherwise I would have had to intervene myself." Lisa giggles, a good sign, while Ryan does completely exaggerated karate moves that can't convince anyone. As I laugh about it with him and my best friend, I realize that it's nice to be back in my group of friends.
And it's not just us. There's a quiet giggle behind us and the three of us turn around reflexively.
"Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to interfere."
Sofia Wilkins apologizes with one of her typical warm smiles and then lets her white teeth disappear behind her hands.
"That was rude," she admits. Lisa turns away from her again immediately while Ryan and I remain facing the down-to-earth girl.
Actually, you could call it a bitch fight, but neither Lisa nor Sofia are bitches and they don't fight either. Sofia has been trying to get into our group of friends for some time now and I, and especially Ryan, are very keen not to leave the nice girl out in the cold. Unfortunately, Lisa, to her and Sofia's chagrin, is struggling with social anxiety and has so far simply not managed to open up to the other girl.
"No pr..." I begin.
"No problem," Ryan interrupts good-naturedly and smiles at Sofia. I'm happy to let my best friend go first with Sofia, as I have my own goal for the day.
"Thanks. And hey Finn?" Apparently, Sofia isn't finished with me yet. "New cell phone?" I nod.
"For real?" Ryan now chimes in. "Where did you get it? And where did you get the money for it?" I can't manage to make a face.
"A good question for another time," I say, but Ryan doesn't let up.
"Is that why you've been ignoring us all this time? Because you didn't have our numbers?"
"I had and still have all the numbers, Ryan, don't worry," I say defensively, but notice that Sofia is still leaning over her table towards us and wants to be part of the group.
"Then why were you so dismissive of us?" It seems that Ryan deals with my mistake differently than Lisa. I can accept that. Besides...
"He certainly had his reasons," says Sofia, causing Ryan to look at her with a strange look. She apologizes with a shrug. "I'm just saying. Everyone needs time for themselves, right?"
"Riiiigh..." grumbles Ryan and turns away from Sofia. The nice girl, on the other hand, gives me a good chance.
"You're right, Sofia," I say kindly and put my arm on Lisa's shoulder. She flinches slightly and lowers her head. "I needed the time. But I would have been better off spending it with my friends.” I tighten my grip on Lisa’s shoulder slightly and finally she sighs audibly, something that makes Sofia’s face darken, but then she turns around. “My three friends.”
“Yes?” Sofia asks excitedly, completely forgetting to hide the fact that she wants to be part of this group. I like her attitude and I have to hold Lisa but she also turns to Sofia while I reach into my pocket.
“How about it?” I ask and swipe Lisa’s profile to the side to be on the safe side while I activate the camera on the MCD.
“Okay,” Ryan shrugs.
“Gladly!” Sofia exclaims.
And Lisa just mumbles something. I turn to her.
“Please Lisa,” I say and hold out the camera. "I've missed you and I want you to be in the first photo I take with the new... phone." I nudge her weak body and make her wiggle. "I'm sure you'll like it," I encourage her, knowing it. "Please."
"Yes please," Sofia begs, her voice an octave higher. "I really want to be in a photo with you and your friends." She tries really hard to be nice to Lisa.
"Hmm... ... ... o-okay..."
"Great!" I, Ryan and Sofia exclaim. Then Lisa squeaks as I put my arm around her and press my body against her while Ryan presses himself to her other side. We turn back to the class, I lift the MCD and Sofia almost falls over her seat while the buttons of her overalls scrape across the table.
Snap!
Three grinning faces and one slightly smiling face appear on the display.
"That was great!" Sofia calls out and catches a warning look from Lakota, which she ignores. "Thanks!"
"Yes," says Ryan and looks at Sofia. "Great."
"I thought so too," I grin and look at Lisa. “And you liked it too?”
Lisa has a thoughtful expression on her face. Then she looks at me, thinks about it, then nods, lips pressed together buy eyes trusting.
Lisa Moreau +1 (PS -83)
A good start.
“You have a message,” Sofia informs me when she hears the device vibrate. “Sorry. I’m sure you know that yourself.” But I just smile. Hello Sofia. Welcome to my world.
We continue joking for a few minutes and I try to bring Sofia and Lisa a little closer together. Then the door to the classroom opens and I almost expect Lakota to shout 'Attention on deck!' while F-18's soar across the sky.
“Hello class,” Miss Susan Webster’s rushed voice rings out.
Her conservative clothes wrinkled and her hair slightly disheveled, our teacher is late again, which is not only evident from her, but also from Lakota's dissatisfied face, which I cannot see, but can tell from her tense posture. She, along with Tana, are the best in the class and always strive to maintain their status, a status that Sofia also aims for (in vain).
"Let's get started right away," says Miss Webster, wiping her hair, which does not help the order on her head. "Who remembers what we went through last time?"
Lakota's hand shoots up like an arrow.
"Does anyone have any questions about this?" Miss Webster wants to know, looking around the room.
"Finn? Maybe you?" I crane my neck. "You've been so quiet lately. Do you want to tell us something? Maybe give an answer?"
"To the question or why I was so quiet?" I want to know, and I don't even mean it as a joke. Susan Webster is a very good, very caring, if somewhat clumsy teacher and I respect her for her hands-on art of teaching.
"The question Finn," she says good-naturedly. "You'll have plenty of time to talk to your friends later." While Lisa sinks into her seat, Ryan and Sofia grin.
"Well... The colonization of the Western USA resulted in..."
Peng!
"Sorry!" I breathe a sigh of relief when the door to the classroom flies open and Lisa isn't the only one who gets a fright. "The traffic was murderous."
The whirlwind Sage is once again visiting the classroom, but unlike the winds that blow up from the Gulf Stream, there is only one thing you can rely on with Sage. That you can't rely on anything with her. Without paying attention to the class or Miss Webster, Sage storms up the steps to the last row of benches, giving me an apologetic look.
"Sorry dude." Then she throws her bag on the seat next to her and falls into the chair, panting.
"Miss Webster, this can't go on!" Lakota complains from the front. "Sage keeps disrupting the class and..."
"Eat my ass," Sage shouts from behind over all of our heads. "Colonization is evil. It's that simple." Grinning, she turns to her cell phone while Lakota rages in front of Miss Webster below.
"Let's all calm down," our teacher admonishes us. "Sage, please come to me after class."
"Whatever," she shrugs and leans back in her seat in her leather jacket and ripped jeans.
"I hate her," Sofia mutters behind me and leans down towards me. "She thinks she's better than everyone else just because her parents are always away and she lives her life alone..."
"And you too, Finn," we hear Miss Webster say. Sofia falls back into her seat while I look questioningly at my favourite teacher.
"You've already missed too much of class without distracting poor Sofia."
"Yes, Miss Webster," I say. I used to be embarrassed. Today? Today my thoughts are indeed elsewhere.
"Sorry," Sofia whispers... and puts her hand on my shoulder. I pat her hand with mine without turning around and see out of the corner of my eye how Ryan glances at me briefly.
The rest of the lesson goes quietly and I actually pay attention to the topic of colonization of the USA, which Lakota obviously shows much more, much more intense interest in than I do. Finally the lesson ends, we pack our things and the moment of truth has come for Sofia.
"Can I eat with you today?" she asks and suddenly doesn't seem so confident anymore. She looks at Lisa and misses Sage pushing past her, probably to get Miss Webster's lecture over with quickly. I almost expect Sage to burst into flames but her leather jacket keeps Sofia's angry looks away.
"What do you say to that, Lisa?" I ask and pat her shoulder. The girl looks at me as if she thinks I'm throwing her to the wolves. "I would like it if she could join in," I admit. "We could have fun. Could take more photos together?"
"Okay," Lisa finally says, even a little faster than before. And then she smiles friendly towards Sofia. "The more the better, right?"
"Right," I grin.
Lisa Moreau. +1 (PS -82)
And I'm happy that Lisa is so open and friendly with Sofia, even if she still needs a bit of practice. Then I turn to my teacher while my friends, two old and one new, will save a table for me in the cafeteria.
On the way down I quickly glance at the MCD.
New profiles found:
Ryan Shaft. 21.
Lakota Johnston. 21.
Tana Hinata. 20.
Susan Webster. 28.
Sofia Wilkins. 18. And Sage DeSantos 19.
Hm? Most of them are self-explanatory but...
Why are their names listed together? That's interesting.
But the other ones are here and available as well. And I can't forget about the volleyball bitches.
Seems to be a free-fire zone.
Message from the author: Skies above. I've finally managed to get Emma Myers and Jenna Ortega into one story. I've been waiting for this since Wednesday. The show, not the day. ;)
Otherwise, the poll should be self-explanatory. The four members of the volleyball team and the girls that Finn met today are available, along with Ryan.
This poll will allow multiple choices because I'm toying with the idea of being able to activate multiple girls at the same time. I think we've reached the point where we can pick up the pace a bit and concentrate on collecting points. That's why I'm setting up the poll today. Based on the results, I will then decide how to proceed. Either I will stick with one girl, the MCD allows the activation of entire groups (school, friend group, work, family), or I will simply allow Finnto activate 2-4 girls at the same time. I haven't decided on that yet because this chance must fit into the narrative of the stry of course. But I know a way or two for that.
By the way, Finn's reaction was also mine when I first saw Alice Delish as an e-girl. For someone whose favorite color is gray (as the camouflage color of airplanes and ships), it was really an experience. But I'm looking forward to making Lisa a little more confident in her body and mind.
And we need another 100 tokens, then we can buy and use **** honesty. That should go quickly and after that we can see which Perk comes next. I would guess Pregnancy Control? ;)
And the next chapter will continue to deal with the girls at school and will go into the characters a bit more. So I hope it's okay that I'm burdening you with the decision now.
And one more thing about sex. There will of course be more and more sexual situations and encounters in the near future. The timing at the beginning of the story is a point that I couldn't quite get right, as all the subjects had to be introduced first. But I'm working on making this happen more often and at least showing you some bare skin more often in the meantime.
Otherwise, I went to school in Germany, to an old, rickety school without hope or color. If someone has something to say about life at college, I'm happy to listen, otherwise, I have to learn from Google like a boomer.
Okay. Big poll. Multiple choices possible. (I'll leave this poll running until I get to the end of the next chapter while writing, which is longer than usual, so you have more time to decide and plan.)
Have fun.
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