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Chapter 85 by Funatic Funatic

Read or read not, there is an Author's note.

A final statement.

HELLO!

So yeah. This is it. I am done. Wow. What a journey, eh? That hiatus in the middle – kind of a dick move I admit. However, you would not have gotten the Lisa scenes if it were not for that so, you know, not everything was bad.

This is officially the second story I have finished on this site and so far the only one I am largely happy with. There were some things I wasn’t completely okay with but I simply brushed over for the sake of story progression. I think some of you might have wanted Nize to play a bit of a more influential role in the whole affair but that was never the kind of story I wanted to tell and frankly not a story I think flies particularly good with the Normality set up.

On that note: Handling the power of Normality is fucking weird mates. There were passages where I was asking myself whether or not this should be affected by the power and where I am to this day not sure if I made the right call. Other times I admittedly act like they weren’t there for, as already mentioned, story progression.

Before I ramble myself into the ground I would ask of you to tell me which parts where your favourites what you think can be improved on in my writing and so on. If you don’t that’s okay as well, I will just take it as ‘Your work is perfect Funatic-Sama, TSUGOI!’ and silently judge you for your weabo talk.

If you are interested in what else I am doing I would point you towards my branch in ‘To Prove Superiority’ that being Uklag’s or consider following me. Also I might add another Normality story in the future. Current thoughts are either Shokugeki no Soma (Would be a lot more fucking and weird humour) or Danmachi (Original story this time).

For anyone interested on continuing the story through the shit arcs of Bleach, feel free to do so, personally I don’t accept that those exist. On the matter of the 'Remain in Soul Society' Branch...i really don't feel up for it. I know, dick move again, but i have run out of sex scenes i can think off with Soifon without recycling the old stuff.

Funatic out.

PS: Did anybody actually guess Prussia as Nize's home? I made it fairly obvious but nobody ever asked, i am slightly disappointed by that.

PSPS: I now have a patreon check it out if you like my stuff: https://www.patreon.com/Funatic

Oh no that's it, i am out bitches.

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