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Chapter 4
by
orangewithlegs
What's next?
(One-Shot Story): A way to a nerds heart, and her dog to: pt 2
If you haven't read part one, in basic terms, his girlfriend wants to watch the development of her parents' dog, Banana’s, puppies by being shrunk and being shoved into the womb of the dog, and now has to watch and record the development.
These are the basics, and I would recommend going to part 1 to read the whole thing
Day 1 (Week 4)
**** takes in his surroundings, his feet make impressions into the squishy floors, the womb is wrinkly, wet, and squirming. The air is damp and humid, making it hard to breathe. The sounds of organs moving and her heart pumping can be heard all around. The smell is surprisingly not too bad, as some other experiences have been before; it smells faintly of a wet dog, but with the humidity, it makes the smell more distinct. So, having to smell it for the next few months will be miserable.
**** looks to see the small puddle of anomic fluid at his feet, he notices it is slowly rising, when something pops into his brain.
“Wait a minute, won't this stuff make it impossible for me to talk to Paige?” he decides to try to tell her this fact as quickly as he can
He grabs the pill camera and clicks a little mic button, and starts talking, “Hey Paige, I don't think I will be able to talk to you after the birth liquid rises, so this might be are only chance to talk.” After saying this, he sat back and waited for a response
Paige was busy helping get Banana ready to be picked up by her parents, and explaining the situation and what they needed to do, she didn’t notice the message as she was lifting the Golden Retriever into the car.
**** waited for a response for five minutes, but got none. He started to get tired and thought a little nap wouldn’t hurt.
He slept for much longer than intended. The anomic fluid rose to the rest of his body; he was almost fully submerged, but thankfully, he floated to the top. He slept until he got a message from an apologetic Paige
“Hey ****, sorry I didn’t respond immediately, was super busy, hope you can forgive me, as for your concern, yea I forgot that little detail, well I guess I can still talk to you, so if there is anything you wanna say do it know” **** got up and realized that know his toes where barely touching the bottom of the womb, he realize he must have slept longer than intended. But he still quickly as possible responded, trying to go on a spiel of questions and concerns, but it was hard to distinguish due to his speed talking and the muffled speaker, so he just said “Love you, can’t wait to see you again.” She responded, “Love you too.”
**** floated around and decided to swim a bit. While he had to be careful whenever the pups arrived, he would be fine for now, so he swam for a bit and went back to sleep.
Day 2 (Week 4... still)
**** woke up and realized he was fully submerged in the anomic fluid, which had almost filled the womb. He dives downward and looks at his surroundings, the wrinkly walls move in a pattern that feels both calming but also wacky.
He decides to rub the wall, which feels soft and kinda velvety. When doing this, he notices his hand gets smooshed, and he realizes that he must have been softened up by the liquid around him
“I better be careful, if these walls can squish me, what could those puppies do when they get older?" he worries, puppies and squirmy, and they could overpower him.
He decides to get some fresh air by swimming up, but he can't find any pockets. He realizes the womb is full; he knows the eggs will be here any minute
**** waits and waits, already missing dry land. He notices little bubbles like dots, he realizes, that's the fertilized eggs, he makes sure to point the camera at them and point all of them out.
On the outside Paige gets Banana ready to go back to her parents. She has been playing with and bonding with their dog, and is already missing her sweety, nine months is a very long time and she hates to part. She knows she must, so she packs banana's thing into a bag and meets her parents. her mom and dad walk out and take the dog and load her up in their mini van, say goodbye to Paige, and get in the car and drive off.
"So you're sure he will be fine?" Zoe states with a tone that sounds uncaring, but you know she isn't.
"He will be fine, I hope," Paige states, wondering if anything could go wrong.
Week 1 (5 weeks)
**** has been bored beyond belief; he has been counting the wrinkles of the womb to himself.
"Nine-Hundred and twenty-seven, Nine-Hundred and twenty-eight, Nine-Hundred and twenty-nine, Nine-Hundred an-"
he is interrupted mid-count as he hears unusual squelches, different from the squelches of the bowels he has been listening to. He notices an opening to start to part, "it's time". He grabs his pill camera and points it towards as multiple fetuses disperse, about the size of peas, with tubes attached to each. He tries to be as careful as possible and get the camera pill a bit closer without hurting the fetuses, vague movement being noticeable.
"Man, that was cool, you know maybe this won't be so bad."
He thinks, but he notices something, one of the fetuses lands on him, it looks like a mutant tadpole, but it's kinda cute. He tries to lightly push it away, but it just comes back, so he lets it stay and starts to feel a sorta sibling bond towards it, I guess it technically is, but he isn't related, so it isn't, who knows
Month 1 (Week 8)
The Fetuses have started to develop more and more, gaining 2 pairs of legs, eyes, an ear structure, etc. They still look like a smiling friend character more that a puppy but they are getting there. **** watches them every movement, noticing every detail he can.
He sits, bored but happy to see these pups develop. He is definitely naming one, maybe even adopting it, but that is a risk. He then remembers his girlfriend, kinda forgetting that anything exists outside of the womb.
“Hope she is doing okay.”
Paige has been watching the footage, sharing the footage with her parents, who are glad and intrigued to see the development of the puppies.
Paige takes notes and gets prepared to show their research to her fellow scientist. But once in a while, she remembers who is behind the camera, so afraid that something might happen to him. She misses his touch, his shy yet loving personality, and having fun with him; he was so good in bed. She puts her hand against the screen
“Please be safe.”
Banana’s gut has started to grow, making her eat more and making her a bit sleepier than usual. She loves lying next to Paige's parents, who pet her bloated belly. **** can notice this, but it is like a light vibration.
**** lies back and waits, 1 month down, two to go, but his little friends should make that more torreable.
The next few weeks went on as the puppies kept developing into something wonderful, and they finally started to look like an actual puppy.
Month 2 (Week 12)
The puppies were now fully developed and Todd has bonded with them even more, he lets them bump and squish him. He cuddles them when he already knows which one he wants, a little reddish brown one he is naming “cryafish” as the color reminds him of one
Day of Birth
**** blew bubbles, waiting for something, then all the sudden everything squirmed. The puppies jumped and squirmed like crazy and the cervix started to move.
“Its time” **** thought
On the outside Banana starts to whimper and yelp. Paige and her parents rushed to calm Banana, with her mom petting the dog and Paige and her dad getting her ready.
**** got ready, he held on to the crayfish as carefully as he could to not hurt him, though at this point he is so soft it's more likely he will get hurt. The cervix starts to slowly move as the puppies squirmed closer. **** waited for a few seconds, and got annoyed by the wait time
“Man, what's taking so long?” he thought. It must be happening soo…
Suddenly it opens and the puppies rush put with **** barley holding on as all the other puppies get pumped out, they all start yipping in confusion as there **** out
On the outside Paige watches as the first one pops out,
“Good girl you got this” Paige’s mom says caringly as she caresses her.
Slowly but surely more puppies come out but Paige cant see **** “please be okay” she thinks as she watches for him, **** on the other hand is smashed into crayfish which is barely noted by the puppy but is fully noted by him. Eventually with one last squeeze crayfish, the last pup, is squished out and Bananas Vagina closes.
As Paige's parents oh and ah at the new pups Paige thinks the worse, **** could’ve been left behind, she looks and looks as each puppies crawl for milk when suddenly Everyone she a tiny hand sticking out from the bottom of the reddish pup “**** YOUR OKAY” Paige says as her parents remembered the experiment, her dad chimes up “let the puppies finish their milk and get settled down before you snatch him back, we don't want to deprive this one of milk”, Paige agrees “you dont mind waiting a little longer, right my honey bear.
**** kinda does, but hey, at least he gets to be under the warm fur of his new complain and he will eventually get to go back to normal, at least his normal..
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