Chapters tagged abbie

the path to the left, getting further from the building by zankoo

Chapter 48

Jake glanced around, trying to assess where each of the path options might go. The fact was, he didn't know anything about the sprawling grounds of the hotel, so it was going to be a random choice no matter what. "This way." With a confident tilt of his head, Jake pointed to the...

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Skip ahead to dinner that night by zankoo

Chapter 15

Maybe because the ride had been more adventurous than they'd planned, or maybe just because the hotel was a new place and they needed time to acclimate, Jake and Abbie spent the day just relaxing quietly. She napped, he watched television, they sat on the balcony with some room s...

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Rehearsal: Abbie's first stage kiss by zankoo

Chapter 4

Abbie had been in rehearsals for the play for about a week, and had been enjoying it immensely. The theater community was wonderful, very supportive, welcoming, and encouraging. Abbie, who hadn't had a lot of experience in plays, initially felt like she might be in over her head....

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describing the scene by zankoo

Chapter 5

Greg moved to the center of the stage, motioning for Abbie and Nick to join him. "Let's talk about the emotional journey of this kiss," he said, his hands moving expressively as he spoke. "This isn't just any kiss -- it's the culmination of fourteen scenes of teasing and missed...

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staging the first physical contact by zankoo

Chapter 6

Greg positioned himself at the edge of the stage, clipboard in hand. "Alright, let's start with your initial positions. Nick, you'll be standing here," he said, marking an X with his foot. "And Abbie, you'll be about three feet away, over here." They took their positions, script...

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