Chapter 5
by ReaperofBalance
Wake up on the Endar Spire?
Yup
[Thoughts]
{edits}
Marcus jolted awake as the sounds of explosions and tremors shook through him and he bolted upright with a gasp as he saw he was in some uniform type underclothes and looked to his right to see a woman, who he knew was Revan, and appreciated her lithe yet voluptuous body in her undersuit.
Revan was a blue haired female with it reaching her midback in a braided ponytail, tanned skin, plump EE cup breasts, a fit body, and a nice bouncy ass, some edits to the game ensuring that such things wouldn't "interfere" in her combat and movement.
It also took all of his self control to not flinch at her near shining presence in the ****, though he could see the... restraints that the Jedi Council had put on her to keep her contained and controlled in order to turn her against Malak and find out the secrets of the Sith. He guessed that the **** was favoring him since he was an outside entity and he'd just given himself a massive connection to it.
[Okay, ****, I'll help you and get shit done how you want, just don't stop me from having my own fun as well. I want to enjoy and fuck a lot of sexy bitches and let the different women know how to really embrace passion, lust, desire, pleasure, and sex. I'm not going to be taking over the galaxy, but I'm not going to be Mr. Selfless either. If you're good with that then we can do business, but if not then I'm just gonna leave now.] He thought while sending his mind to the **** and got amusement in return before a feeling of acceptance washed over him, signifying that he and the cosmic energy/entity had a deal.
With that settled and resolved, thankfully without the need for **** or him trying to use his editing power, he turned to Revan, right now known as Rinda Tachyon, and did a quick edit on her. {Rinda will trust me completely, she won't know why but she will just feel and sense that she can trust me. She'll also find me extremely handsome and desirable, but she's unsure how to proceed. She will find it very enjoyable and enticing to see me fucking different women and doesn't mind me lusting or desiring other women, in fact she is turned on by me wanting to get a harem or collection of women to enjoy. She won't mind men looking at her and won't find it to be offensive, but she won't return it either. She will also be interested in learning anything I can teach her and that affection will grow over time with interactions.} He edited finding his power flowing easily, meaning the **** wasn't resisting him on his editing, he'd make Rinda an apprentice and ally, over just straight up **** or something.
He then turned to the door as it opened and Trask Ulgo rushed in, "The Endar Spire is under attack! We've been ambushed by a Sith Battle Fleet. The Sith are boarding as we speak, we need to get going!" He stated in a hurry as he looked at both of them.
"Who are you?" Rinda asked looking like she was still groggy, which Marcus knew was because being in close proximity to the Jedi and then Malak's own presence coming was awakening her connection and memories... or it could just be the Will of the ****, either was possible in this.
"Trask Ulgo, ensign with the Republic Fleet, one of your bunkmates on the Endar Spire, we work different shifts, so that's probably why we've not seen each other. We need to find Bastilla before the Sith do and ensure she gets off the ship alive and uncaptured!" Trask answered as he looked at them.
"Bastilla? Who's that?" Rinda asked and Marcus shook his head.
"It doesn't matter, right now we're under attack, the longer we wait around the more likely they'll just blow the whole ship up. We need to grab our gear and move. If nothing else, we can talk while we move." He stated not wanting to tutorial dialogue to drag on too much.
"Right, sorry." She stated as she went to her footlocker and got dressed in her form fitting pants and jacket before she took her blaster pistol and short sword along with a medpack.
Marcus turned and saw that he had one too and opened it showing some clothes, with his jacket being more padded and sturdy than Rinda's, a heavy blaster pistol, and a long sword. He also saw a piece of tech that he knew was an implant, looked like it was a Cardio Package boosting his constitution and strength (another edit he did) by 1. He quickly dressed, holstered his weapons, and then installed the implant before nodding to Trask.
"All right, let's go." Trask stated as he opened the door to the bunk showing a hallway with a astromech droid trying to do repairs of a small hallway and a door at the end.
"This is Carth Onasi! The Sith are threatening to overrun our position! We can't hold out long against their firepower. All hands to the bridge!" A voice stated over their communicator.
Marcus didn't waste time listening to Trask state why they should listen to Carth, or that their personal datapad had a record of the transmission, he just went straight for the door before using his new security talents to open it.
Like he expected, it opened to a firefight between the last member of a Republic squad and couple Sith Troopers, who quickly gunned down the Republic soldier.
"These Sith must be the advance boarding part! For the Republic!" Trask shouted making Marcus scowl since they could have waited a moment and let the Sith come closer to cut them down easier, but no, he had to go and scream!
Luckily, they were already injured from fighting the Republic Soldiers and didn't last long, especially since Marcus had his sword skills from his world to fall back on and use.
It didn't help that explosions were happening around them, counting one that took out another astromech droid. Marcus didn't care much, he grabbed the three blaster rifles that were still in one piece and stored them in his inventory along with any credits they had before scavenging the astromech droid for parts that still worked and moved to the next door.
Inside was a small storage room and two more Sith.
Marcus didn't waste time and threw his sword into the far one on the left before pulling his blaster and shooting the one on the right, killing both.
After holstering his blaster and collecting his sword, he looked to Rinda, "Start grabbing anything from these containers, we may need the supplies." He ordered making her nod while he searched the bodies and then helped with the containers, there were 7 containers and a footlocker, but the game only let you look in the footlocker and one container.
There was credits, the two rifles, some frag grenades, medpacks, a combat suit, another long sword, and another short sword. He tossed the suit to Rinda while taking the other long sword to duel wield when he got the chance. He saw that Rinda put the suit on quickly and he nodded before going through the next door, which led to a large hallway intersection where a fight was occurring.
Four Republic soldiers were fighting 5 Sith Soldiers, one of each being locked in a sword duel down one path of the hallway.
The Republic killed one shooter, lost the swordsman, and then the Republic soldiers and the Sith swordsman were killed when one of the shooters threw a grenade killing the whole group.
Coming around the corner, Marcus threw one of the Frag Grenades they had, knowing that with his +20 modifier, the grenade was sure to hit and there was no way their saving throw would halve the damage done.
Sure enough, all three were killed in the explosion and Marcus moved down the hallway just as two more rounded the corner and cut them down rapidly since he was now sitting at a +22 to hit while holding a single weapon and knew the Sith armor only gave a defense bonus of 2 while letting the wearer have a Dexterity bonus of 8, but there was no fucking way these low level chumps were going to have that good of a dexterity bonus (they'd have to have a 26 in Dexterity for it).
Once he struck them down, he moved down the hallway that they came from and found a junk pile and a destroyed astromech droid. Rummaging through both, he grabbed some parts and ignored the sound of lightsabers clashing on the other side of the broken door he was next to.
He then went back to the intersection and started scavenging grabbing a couple more blasters, grenades, credits, and some parts, really showing how durable shit was if a grenade that close didn't do shit (or maybe Video Game logic was still applying here).
Nodding to his two compatriots, who were just looking at him in awe, he moved towards the only door that would work and heard more Lightsabers clashing.
Opening it, he saw the dark jedi and jedi fighting each other.
The dark jedi was generic since they modeled themselves after Malak, so he had black robes with pauldrons and was bald with a goatee.
The woman though was hot, no small part to his edits, as she had black hair drawn back in a small ponytail that didn't even reach her shoulders and was wearing the brown robed top with purplish pants and brown leather boots while wielding a single blade blue lightsaber. Said clothes did nothing to hide her rather voluptuous figure as she had DD breasts, wide hips, somewhat thick thighs, and a nice bubble butt.
Marcus ignored Trask telling them to stay out of it, he needed to focus to intervene at the moment he knew was coming. Normally, the woman died in an explosion that followed her killing the dark jedi, but if he saved her, he'd earn her gratitude and interest since he'd save her using the ****.
It didn't hurt that he took a moment to edit her, learning her name was Jin Orleso. {Jin will be very interested in me after I save her with the **** and will feel a growing connection between us. However, she is completely unknowledgeable about sex. She's knows that penis goes into vagina and can create children, but beyond that she is blank and unknowing and will be facinated and turned on seeing me have sex and will watch with lustful curiosity. Eventually, she will want me to train her in sex (and other things later as the bond gets stronger and her devotion grows) and will fulfill my instructions completely, even continuing when she learns that Jedi shouldn't be doing such things. The more I teach and fuck her, the more the bond will grow and her feels for me will grow from curiosity, to lust, to desire, to love, to devotion and will happily submit to being my permanent student and fucktoy to keep being trained and educated by me in the ways of sex and anything else I want to teach her. She will tease other females, but won't be jealous beyond wishing she was in their place to be fucked by me. When on Dantooine, she will request that she accompany me on the journey and will eagerly continue her training no matter how many women are involved. She'll also be grateful for me saving her that she'll give me anything I want as thanks which will be a kiss, and said kiss will cause her to orgasm and make the **** rush through her making her feel alive, happy, and whole for the real first time in her life.} He edited finding the **** was still favoring him.
He quickly acted as he saw Jin strike down her opponent and used the **** to pull her into his arms, she lost the lightsaber she held but wasn't injured.
"How did you do that?!?" Rinda asked in shock as Jin looked shocked as well.
"I'll explain later when we're not being attacked and at risk of being blown up." Marcus ordered before moving in and killing the two soldiers that showed up before looting the bodies. The dark jedi had a vibration cell, which Jin would normally have, plus some stimulants and parts for a lightsaber, likely the pieces of his own, while the two troopers had blaster rifles, grenades and credits.
He then moved to the door and tossed Jin a long sword so she was armed, and she nodded her thanks, before he opened the door to the bridge and saw a cluster of four Republic soldiers fighting 4 Sith Troopers at the far end of the bridge while two Sith Troopers turned towards him.
He quickly moved and cut them down with ease before an explosion rocked the bridge killing the other combatants.
Looting more of the weapons and credits from the area, they moved to the escape pods as Trask informed that Bastilla not being on the Bridge meant she was escaping and as such the Sith would destroy the Endar Spire since they wanted Bastilla alive.
As they moved to the main corridor to get to the starboard side with the escape pods, Trask moved and opened a door opposite them and revealed a Sith there. "Run! I'll try to buy you some time!" He yelled as he ran forward while forcing the door closed making Marcus shake his head at the stupidity before he and his two female companions moved on towards the Escape pods.
Reaching another section of hallway, Carth came back on the communicator telling them to hurry as Bastilla was already on a launched escape pod, meaning they were working on limited time.
Marcus also took that moment to level up, adding 15 more skill points to his totals and quickly added 5 to Persuade, Repair, and Computer bringing his totals to.
Computer: 25 +20 (intelligence)
Demolitions: 20 +20 (intelligence)
Stealth: 15 +20 (Dexterity)
Awareness: 25 +20 (Wisdom)
Persuade: 30 +20 (Charisma)
Repair: 30 +20 (intelligence)
Security: 15 +20 (Wisdom)
Treat Injury: 20 +20 (Wisdom)
And he got one feat so he quickly took Two handed fighting to make him have better bonuses to fighting with two weapons or two-handed weapons.
Once that was done they kept moving, easily overwhelming the single Sith Soldier there and the two in the room just afterwards.
"Careful, there's a full squad of Sith in the next room, I need you to take them out before I can unlock the escape pod door. you could repair that damaged **** droid or use that terminal if you have the proper skills." Carth stated over the communicator making Marcus roll his eyes.
He quickly looted the bodies and the footlocker before going to the terminal and then overloading the conduit in the next room without even needing a spike thanks to his skill level (and an edit that a certain rank high enough removed the need for that last spike) before going to the droid, taking the blaster from it, and then reactivating it along with optimized combat targeting and setting it to patrol since he wanted the extra 135 experience for it.
Once that was done, he moved to the next room and collected everything from the bodies, counting the prototype Vibroblade off the Sith Lieutenant and equipped it in place of the Long Sword.
Entering the next room revealed Carth. "You made it, we need to hurry." Carth stated making Marcus nod as he moved to the Escape pod and opened it ushering everyone in before getting in himself and jettisoning away just before the Endar Spire exploded and they hurled down to the planet Taris below.
It wasn't a smooth ride by any imagining, and Marcus was knocked around a bit as they struck something and tumbled before smashing into something else again, barely making out Carth and Jin working to get him and Rinda out of the pod before darkness consumed him.
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Updated on Apr 1, 2025
by Cuckyboi
Created on Mar 4, 2022
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