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Chapter 5
by
Mr_anderson
What's next ?
Wait to have a clear mind
Before the debts, he had to get a job to pay them, and he already had a hard time thinking about his job with his girlfriend doing God knows what and spending his money and hers. James thought about it, he only had 90WP, he had to think how to spend them efficiently. With only 10 per day, most of the points would come from the challenges.
I'll see about that tonight, my mind will be clearer.
But after he left his job he faced his first problem. The car didn't start.
"Shit... I guess I'll to start with this..." He said to himself.
2. My car is a Toyota MR2 in pristine condition.
Again, the wish cost him 30WP, 20 for the car, 10 more for its condition, it added up. He pressed continue and saw that his car was now his favorite car, and it looked like new. He passed his hands on the wheel and dashboard, a stupid smile on its face.
"Ohooh... I love this app !" He said to himself.
He started the car and drove home, but not without making few round around the block. Then he entered the block and was welcomed by the landlord's daughter.
"When will you decide to pay for the rent ? You're already three weeks late, you know !" She told him.
"What do you mean ? Carol was supposed to give you the money for the rent four days ago."
"CaRol wAs sUpPosEd tO GivE You tHe mOneY. I didn't see your girlfriend with your money, I just saw her leave earlier with a friend of hers."
James thought of the "punch a kid" challenge, but it would be more problematic to deal with the mess afterward. More importantly...
"Which friend ?"
"Do I fucking look like the cops ? Your girlfriend, your problem ! Do you have the money or should I call for Garfield ?"
"Wait, I'll text her to know what's going on..."
He didn't have the time to wait for an answer, if the kid called for her cousin or something, there would be problem.
3. My landlord's daughter cover me when I'm late in my payments, and look out for my girlfriend strange behavior.
30WP were debited again, leaving me with only 30. Points were dropping fast. But the girl changed attitude immediately.
"Listen, I'll keep covering for you with my mom, but don't take too long to pay, okay ?" She said.
"Thanks, Fran, I'll do my best to clarify the problem." James told her.
"About that, I followed a little bit your girlfriend with the guy she was with." She explained. "And before she got in his car, they kissed, like big french kiss."
James had strong doubts, but getting confirmation was still a shock. He felt like the floor had crumbled under his feet, and then a strong anger rose from his guts. Every feelings were fighting in his head, betrayal, sadness, anger, love, ...
"She has been a bitch with since the beginning, you know... I would never do that to you, if it was me I would treat you like you deserve..." Fran said, putting her hand on his torso.
That move brought James back to reality. He took her arm and gently pushed her back.
"You're minor ! I'm almost thirty !" He said, having difficulty to show his disgust.
"I'm seventeen, I'm an adult in few month, you know !"
"No, Fran ! No !"
James rushed to his apartment, a little bit panicked by the girl's bold moves, and closed the door behind him.
The change seems to have made her fall in love with me to explain her selfless help. That app is that strong ? Shit I'll have to correct that later. But now I don't have much points left.
He was still shocked by the revelation on his girlfriend and noticed that he had even more bills on his living room. Taking a look, he noticed that the car's insurance was more expensive and he was even more late on other bills.
"Shit..."
What will he do ?
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